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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update....

you know your writing has been very very nice and capturing...it has captured the essence of a relationship...

Maan being himself and Geet still contemplating her relationship with him..way to go...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it was nice update dear.............
maaneet with dadi n naini was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb,it was really nice to see the family with care for each other n geet😆 was afraid there is theif in their home,i loved that scenes...........
looking fwd................

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


lovely...👏

it was really a MAYDAY...everybody needed help...every1 was in confusion over 1 thing or the other...😆

maan thinking abt THE ART OF WAR to deal with his wife..😲😆

loved it when he was thinking about her in the costume...
I chuckled at the image that was forming in my head, for, I had envisioned my Gaon ki Geet in a shoalin Kungfu vest attacking me with an oriental sword 😆

surely steam had been running out of her ears...😛

cant believe that they were thinking that thief was there on either sides....daadi to was even more gud...

hit her own grandson with a baseball bat...😆...bachara maan...ek taraf biwi...ek taraf daadi...😆

If this how strong Miss Sherni was, then rest assured I knew Geet would soon make a mousy return from SF in no less than a week.😆
hope he is right abt geet...n she comes back..i'm not sure that how will they survive without each other...
but i belive geet is string n she'll do fine...

ie seems like naini has changed...looking from maans perspective...well it had been a long time since he had seen her...so changes wud b there...n also since she is getting separated...so obviously going through some turmoil...

but it still seemed like both bro n sis missed each other....

wonder what made them separate over the years??😕

still not able to understand y maan is not able to say sorry to her for hiding this fact?? y , is she not imp?? or somethings r more imp than her??

geet was surely in a dilemma as to how to talk to naini...obviously any1 wud be..when they have just discoverd abt such thing...n what wus she even talk abt?? her distress?? when she doesnt even know anything abt her...

He would take a bite from her and would move on to either go stand by the french doors or to come sit by the couch. Well I had been away for so long that now it was weird to see him with his wife chasing him. Oops...they didn't know I had been watching them, who wouldn't when a couple so full of care for each other moved with such cuteness?
naini was right who wouldnt want to see a couplw like this...wife chasing husband to feed him...😆..like a mother running behind the child...😆...aww...so cute...

wish in the nxt part some of the mu's get clear...as to y naini is here...what is going on with her life n husband....maan saying sorry to geet....geet n naini bonding...even for that matter bro n sis bonding...i think i'm asking too much...😆

will wait for the next part...

P.S. dont pinch urself...i think we all r pinching ourselves...😵..like cant believe we r being this lucky...wont say anything more...dont want to jinx it...😉


Thanks Jyoti...see you have been very good at pushing me to update. Keep up the good work.
A very long comment on the thread and it has been ages since I saw one like this...THANKS a tonne.
Truth is maan has too much pride to let down his wife infront of other and same goes with Geet as well. Yes there will be more cute Maneet moments before Naini...not necessarily romantic, because we don't want her to be disgusted and pack her bags and running.
Maan thinks he is some strategist...but he will learn from Geet. The next update, we can only see one side of the relationship get fixed. You will have to wait for others to bond.

Hope the bro and sis sentiments will not overwhelm you...Coz there will be many more of it. Its almost Maan's way of redeeming himself from his guilt.
So all in all, I'm very glad you liked it. Keep posting and encouraging me. Thats all I humbly ask for.
Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.... low lets c how life takes turn with the new entry in their life.... waiting for the next update now
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement


Thanks Jyoti...see you have been very good at pushing me to update. Keep up the good work.
A very long comment on the thread and it has been ages since I saw one like this...THANKS a tonne.
Truth is maan has too much pride to let down his wife infront of other and same goes with Geet as well. Yes there will be more cute Maneet moments before Naini...not necessarily romantic, because we don't want her to be disgusted and pack her bags and running.
Maan thinks he is some strategist...but he will learn from Geet. The next update, we can only see one side of the relationship get fixed. You will have to wait for others to bond.

Hope the bro and sis sentiments will not overwhelm you...Coz there will be many more of it. Its almost Maan's way of redeeming himself from his guilt.
So all in all, I'm very glad you liked it. Keep posting and encouraging me. Thats all I humbly ask for.
Hasini


glad i could help...well isme hamara hi bhala hai...getting more frequent updates...😉

dont know abt others...but i'm surely greedy abt updates...😆

ye maan n uska pride...geet is right...kabhi maan to kabhi Mk....uff...

naini seeing her bro like this...will surely faint agar jyada ho gaya to...😆..or like u said run away..😆

u r right ..maan ki saari strategies geet ke aage kuch bhi nahi...😉

not to worry...har chiz ka apna time hota hai...surely it will take time but i think it will be fixed...like u said...

bro n sis sentiments r never much...as it is also a special bond...😳

but haan saath me maaneet scenes bhi hone chahiye...😃

will always keep posting...n bothering u to update...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Hasini!!!!

guess what!
just a while ago I mentioned you to another ff writer who puts brilliant titles on her updates just the way your chapter have such beautiful ones...and tada...i find au update!
you made my day!'
I have not commented on the last couple of parts, but here I am, back at NY times leaving a comment!
I owe u this!
the update was great as always!
Naini seems to be good at heart!
she is guilty for her mistake. I was a bit apprehensive about her, thinking that she might create trouble in our dear Maaneet's life, but now I am happy!
Geet has a reason to be angry, and I wanted maan to go down in front of her.
when maan decided to not respond to her silent behaviour, i was silently praying that Geet amy be able to hold on to her silent treatment to force Maan to come and take notice, but nooo, my hopes are dashed😭😭
but, i guess maan is going to do something going by the closing lines of the update, n i am waiting to see how he makes it up to her!
well, I choose to have ignored the lines written in blue at the end of the update and now I happily believe that i will get an update within a day or maybe a few hours😛😃
You better not disappoint this poor reader of yours!
well,enough of my blabbering, you must be bored!
so, I leave you with the job of writing the next update very soon!
see, i blabbered so much to coax you, now U SHOULD update very very soon!
Love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

Hey Hasini!!!!

guess what!
just a while ago I mentioned you to another ff writer who puts brilliant titles on her updates just the way your chapter have such beautiful ones...and tada...i find au update!
you made my day!'
I have not commented on the last couple of parts, but here I am, back at NY times leaving a comment!
I owe u this!
the update was great as always!
Naini seems to be good at heart!
she is guilty for her mistake. I was a bit apprehensive about her, thinking that she might create trouble in our dear Maaneet's life, but now I am happy!
Geet has a reason to be angry, and I wanted maan to go down in front of her.
when maan decided to not respond to her silent behaviour, i was silently praying that Geet amy be able to hold on to her silent treatment to force Maan to come and take notice, but nooo, my hopes are dashed😭😭
but, i guess maan is going to do something going by the closing lines of the update, n i am waiting to see how he makes it up to her!
well, I choose to have ignored the lines written in blue at the end of the update and now I happily believe that i will get an update within a day or maybe a few hours😛😃
You better not disappoint this poor reader of yours!
well,enough of my blabbering, you must be bored!
so, I leave you with the job of writing the next update very soon!
see, i blabbered so much to coax you, now U SHOULD update very very soon!
Love
Swati


Hey Swati,
Thanks for such a long comment. There are again some very encouraging words and I appreciate it.
Glad you liked the titles.
Keep commenting...that does push me in a way...you never know.
I'm repeating this once again...there are no villains in NY times...only miserable beings..perhaps the Khurana's have been cursed in some way...but the good times have come. This is the first step with the Bro and Sis re-union.
Oh! by the way...is this track explored anywhere else...Maan as a brother?
Maan...and his silent treatment...Trust me I know all about it...But he will not be able to keep it up for long...Because Geet is very good at pulling him closer...There is a cosmic connection they cannot sit out for very long.
Oi, besides this...I have work and life to attend to...Next update on Thursday/Friday (that is still good progress keeping in mind that I had left weeks without updating and its only been tuesday and I already gave 3 updates this week) Please bear with me...

Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago

I always will bear with with you dear!!!

trust me....even if I don't comment, i am there!
I simply LOVE NY times, far far more than Rooftop(sorry!)
you might think I am crazy, but when i had started reading it, it had already had around 45-50 parts updated!
i loved it so much after reading the initial chapters that i was desperate to read all that was on offer in NY times!
but, there is a certain no. of hours(only 24!!) in a day and i was being scolded for reading non-stop!
also, i was aware that I would not have access to internet for a ceratin no. of days!
so, i actually opened all the parts and copied them into a word doc to read them the next day!
wasn't that too much😆😆
unfortunately, i lost that doc, but not before i had read it all, the very next day!
So, now u would guess how crazy i am!
i love Muski di's ffs but, i have not done such a thing for any other ff!
about Maan's silent behaviour, trust me, that has not been explored in any ff that I have read!
the bro-sis relationship, ummm....yeah, it has been discussed at quite a few places, but then, each one has a different take on it that is different from the others.
Moreover, by now i have complete faith that your take certainly will be very different from all of them!
about my ever-annoying demands.....well, i am being greedy!
but, sighhhh, I have to understand!!!
But, I will still wait, with a hope that you suddenly have an urge to update sooner!
Oh God!
How much am I writing here!
hahaha
Love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
aawww..... it was very cute one.....

everyone ignoring everyone....but still thinking of each other.....

enjoying it ....

lovely update....
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Posted: 14 years ago

i forgot(you must be wondering how can i go on still!), I would love to see the bro-sis eunion track!

And about the lack of villians in NY times, well, i am certainly not complaining!
Thats ceratainly one more point that sets it apart from the other FFs and makes it more adorable!!!
N its my pleasure to leave comments!
thanks for your prompt reply!
waiting!
Love
Swati

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