Not A Fairytale SG&MN SS UPDTD pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks! 😳
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Its really very nice thnx and do PM the next part
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Originally posted by: sana.shanak

Its really very nice thnx and do PM the next part


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here's another part! The last one . I have just tried to show that people live their life on their own and Love is important but not everything.
PART 3

Shilpa's POV

Hey Bhagwaan! Yeh mujhse kya ho gayya? Mainne Mayank se rishta jorda aur humare rishte ki wajah se Nupur ke saath saath Gunjan aur Samrat ko bhi kitna suffer karna parda.
Mujhe ek last time Gunjan se iss baare main baat karni hi hogi.

(Shilpa then followed Gunjan and caught her hand pulled her to corner)

"Dekh Gunji! mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai , it's urgent"
"Oh! Toh Miss oops I mean Mrs Shilpa Sharma ko apni uss puraani dost se baat karni hai jiski behen ke saath......"
I cut her in the middle and said
"Gunji please.Yeh Nupur ke baar main nahi hai , it's about you! You LOVED Samrat and meri wajah se tunne.... Tune yeh issliye kiya naa kyun ki agar tu yahan rehti toh main kabhi Mayank ke saath khushi se nahi jee paati aur tujhe dekh kar Nupur ka guilt feel karti. Mere liye tune"
She cut me now and said
"Please Shilpa! apne aap ko itna credit mat do! main ne Samrat ko sirf apni Di ki khushiyon ke liye chorda. Tumhara koi connection hi nahi hai."
"Thik hai agar tum keh rahi ho toh but pease! tum meri yaa Nupur ke liye apne pyar ko kurbaan mat karo.Meri naa sahi tum Nupur ki toh sunnogi hi naa, main usse le aati hoon."
"Shilpa dekho , main tumse naraaz nahi hoon par please tum Di ko kabhi bhi kuch mat bataana. Unka dil toot jaaaega aur rahi baat meri main jeelongi"
"Aur Samrat ka kya?"
"Samrat mere bina jee raha tha naa toh aagge bhi jeelega aur main pray karti hoon usse koi achi si lardki milley"
"Ab jab tumne decide kar hi liya hai toh main kuch nahi kar sakti"
"Shilpa promise me yeh baat yahan se bahaar nahi jaayegi , waada ?" Gunjan put her hand forward with teary eyes.
I placed my hand on top of hers and said "Waada!" with tears filled in my own eyes and then she hugged me and I hugged her back.


POV ends

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Nupur's POV

I was standing at a distance as I watched Gunjan and Shilpa talk. I couldn't here them and then they hugged but didn't Gunjan hate Shilpa after what was done with me. I know I always wanted her to forgive Shilpa but why does it hurt so much to see them back again? Gunjan has Shilpa now , she doesn't need me. I should just leave from all their lives.
I gave the two a last look and left from there and booked a ticket for Kolkata where I had a friend Gunjan doesn't know about.

POV ends

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Samrat's POV

I lost my love today while my brother got his love today. Gunjan se itna pyaar kyun karta hoon main? nahi it should be Gunjan nupur se itna pyaar kyun karti hai?
I was lost in my thoughts when I saw Gunjan and Shilpa enter and I understood that they were friends again. I'm the only loner here , it would be better if I leave this city. I think I should take up that job in Dubai.

POV ends

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*two days later*

Gunjan's POV

I sat alone in my bed knowing that I'm alone not only here on this bed but alone in this world.
Di had left. I didn't know where she went and she left me no trace through which I could find that out either.
Samrat! He left yesterday for Dubai. He got a great job there. I didn't deserve him and he needed to forget me.
Shilpa and I were friends again but she went for her honeymoon.
I was totally shattered with all these things but I knew I had to live.

POV ends

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*7 years later *


In a huge bungalow sat a small girl with a man . They both were dressed in white.

"Papa! Hum aise kyun bethe hain?" said the girl.
"Shhhh Noopur (NOT Nupur ; pronounced as the spelling written) beta hum mummy ki soul ke liye pray kar rahe hain."said the man.
The pandit ji spoke "Aapka Naam aur jinki barsi hai unka naam lein."
"Mera naam hai Mayank Sharma aur jinki barsi hai unka naam hai Shilpa Malhotra Sharma aur aaj unki 4th barsi hai." said the man with a pain in his voice.

After all the rituals were over Noopur asked her father
"Papa hum Mummy ke liye pray karien?"
Mayank smiled at her and said
"Haan tum shuru karo!"

Teri hai Zameen
Tera Aasmaan
Tu barda Meherbaan
Tu Baksheesh kar...

Sang the little girl closing her eyes and joining her hands.
Mayank just looked at her and remembered Shilpa . She had told him that Nupur loved him and to keep their child's name Noopur (which was similar to Nupur ) and to keep her happy as she wanted one Noopur to be happy. He lived happily for Noopur and mostly for Shilpa.

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In a flat stood a lady with a photograph of another lady in her hand. The girl kept the photograph inside a box and joined her hands and Sang

Teri hai Zameen
Tera Aasmaan
Tu barda Meherbaan
Tu Baksheesh kar...

This time the song had rhythm

Suddenly she got a phone call , the name flashed was "Annie" . She received the call and the caller said
"Nupur! where are you I'm waiting downstairs."
"Coming Annie! " said Nupur and went down.

She remembered how Shilpa called up her 4 years ago. At first she spoke about Mayank and their daughter whose name was also Noopur and then she told about her breast Cancer. Nupur was shocked and angry at herself for misunderstanding Shilpa. Though she would always tell Gunjan not to hate Shilpa she herself hated her but shilpa jaatey jaatey bhi Nupur ko Gunjan ka number de gayyi.
She was now living happily for herself.

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In a villa stood two people , one lady and another was a man.
The lady stood in front of a huge photo frame which had a photo of somebody very dear to the lady. The lady was teary eyed when the man kept a hand on her shoulder and said
"Gunjan! please roh mat. kyunki jab tum rotti ho toh floods aajatte hain"
She hit him on his arm and said "Tum nahi sudheroge Kabir! ab cholo let's pray"

Both of them joined their hands (NOT with each other) and started singing

Sabhi ka hai tu
Sabhi tere
Khuda mere
Tu Baksheesh kar...

Gunjan thought of all those days she spent with Shilpa. During school and college. Their pillow fights when she used to go for sleep-overs at her place. She also thought about their last moment together. Shilpa had found Nupur and talked about all that only. It was later she told her about herself.
Gunjan was broken from within but Kabir was as usual there for her and Shilpa wanted us to get married. He was an orphan so didn't get any love but he found love in a girl named Piya but she left him for another guy. Gunjan knew that even Kabir would never love her and they were happy .

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In a pent house a man was sitting on his sofa with a young girl who was in her late teens.
The girl said

"Sam dada! stop being so glum. You have a project to finish and well before that something else to do."
"Yeah! I'm going to do it now." said Samrat.

He went to his room and took his cell phone and came back to the hall. He put a lady's picture on it.

"Let's start Mishooo" he said
She began

Sabhi ka hai tu
Sabhi tere
Khuda mere
Tu Baksheesh kar...

Samrat went into the past. He though of Shilpa's and his stupid fights in college on who will Mayank sit with. Then her last word to him. She united him to his brother and told them to be happy and in touch with each other always. Shilpa gave him Misha , her younger sibling who had no one back then. He took her as his sister he never had while she called him "Sam Dada".
They lived peacefully and happily.

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Shilpa's soul smiled from the heaven seeing everyone and she said to herself "they all learnt to live from my death. Life is just a ride and Not A Fairytale!"

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THE END!

Luv Adya!🤗






Edited by AttractiveAdya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
OMG Twinnie 😲 I never knew that u can write this deep 🤗
No wonder u got emotional on reading it!🥺
Aww so Gunjan and Shilpa joined at last! I m so happy!
But Nupur and Samrat left! 😔
I feel sorry for all!😔
The song is so awesome and touching!
Poor Shilpa! I never knew that this was coming!
I m glad that they named their daughter Noopur!
The thing that made me feel bad the most was her death!
And Gunjan and Kabir i guess this is wat is meant for them!
I m glad that samrat has someone 😊
And Nupur i m glad that she is happy now!
So i guess Life is definitely not a fairytale! 😆
I m seriously unable to write more!
U r a great writer Twinnie!
I m touched!
Thanks for the pm and thanks for giving us this beautiful SS🤗
I can never forget it!😳

Edited by nishi_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Man after reading this part i can definetly say .. Lif is NOT a fairytale !

Its was soo emotional and touchy !

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey adz
hw r u??
whatsupp?
anyway i luved the part
it was sooo gudd
it was sadd abt shilpa...but nw its easy to guess wat will happen l8r...anyway very nyc concept....and the leap was for gud....i ahve a question....was the gunji-kabir part like i mean are they married?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mind blowing.totally amazingi don't have word for it👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
god dear u made me senty with this so touchy update u said it right life is not like fairytale its a one ride and u described this update with that concept superbly loved this last part and thanks for such a wonderful SS and thanks for pm do write more and more like this

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