Not A Fairytale SG&MN SS UPDTD pg 14

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

awesome ending dear eventhough it was unepected..i was in tears while reading this..........

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

that was really shocking but great

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Adya!!😭

You broke my heart into a zillion pieces!!🥺 🥺 🥺What an awesome piece of writing!! MayUr didn't unite and nor did SaJan! Life is, indeed, not a fairytale!! Beautifully written!! You come out so well with the emotions!! Awesome job is all I can say!👏

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Update 2:

Hey Adz! Im REALLY late in commenting but Im sorry! You know the reason! Next time se pakka ill be on time! And btw I LOVED this update! The flashback was sooo Nice.. and beautifully written! Mayank's proposal to shilpa was soo coool! but nupur was shattered! I love your concept! but this short story is ending soooo sooon! I cant believe its over! Im just going to read your other update..!

LOVED IT!

thanks for the 3 pms! LOL!

Lovee youu!

Manjari!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

3rd Part:

Aaadzziiii....

OMGG.... It was soooo touchyy...!!!

When mayank and noopur were praying it reminded me of Kuch kuch hota hain... and the as the story unfolded.. I was almost shattered..

You actuallyy wrote sooooo deep Yaar! and the last line.. **Life is just a ride and not a fairytale!!** Its just soooo good!

Lovvedd the whole SS! Lovelyy!

I dont know what to tell you! im just speechless! Just stunned at what you wrote here! By Far this is your best work!!

Superbb Yaaar! Well DONE!

I feel like huggingg you now!

and The ending when shilpa smiled from heaven it was sooo touchy! Lovelyy work yaar! I cant stop praising you! i dont know why! I just love it sooo muchh! the story was completely believable! First I disliked shilpa but in this last update! I loved her! everyone did.. and have to say! MAYANK made a GR8 Choice!

and this SS of urs rockkedd!!!!!

FANTABULOUS JOB!

Love Youuu!!

Manjari!

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rinkyyy.

@-Rinki-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

SHIT. I actually sorta cried. No, I didn't cry but omgsh dude you are an amazing writer Aduuu! 🤗
So deep? Raaz kya hai?

Haaayyee loved it. I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUU! Its totally amazing. :) Damn, it seriously was just so awesome.
I cannot write something BIG like everytime but believe me I loved it ;) every thing was perfect. <3

Love you :D