FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

i am a little confused

you have put things well
but somethings missing
I can't understand what
may be as the plot is just building
keep going
waiting till you rock as usual
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Posted: 14 years ago
huhuHUHUHU

BABY KEYAMA I AM CRYING A LOT FOR MAAN


MAAN HAS TO USE THE USED PACKAGE GEET
HAHAHAHHA
DONT WORRY GEET OUR MAAN IS PATI WATA HE DID NOT TOUCH A SINGLE GIRL

OOOOOO MAAN YOU HATE LOW TYPE GIRLS BUT SORRY TO SAY THAT YOU HAVE TO FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS LOW GEET AHHAHAHHA

LOVE YOU KEYAMA.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg am soo secary if maan know about her dark said
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey........... waiting eagerly for ur update.......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updates. maan didn't recognised her in the party, so he thinks she is an angel. whn he will come to know the truth, wht will he think. cant wait 4 the next part. continue soon................
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Posted: 14 years ago
soo good... :)) Uptade soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg geet is totally opposite...donno how maan is going to react after knowing her true part......ummm GRAY SHADE....loved it...keya u are amazing..muaahaaa 🤗

hey by the way wen u updating bitter truth and intezaar?????????

pls update soon...we r waiting...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii y u nt sendng me pm sen me , wen u update any of ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago



*~My Dark Love~*

part 5


Maan really didn't care what people thought about him taking Geet out... He is maan sing khurana after all.

Geet- so... What do you do?
Maan- at the moment... Talking to you and expanding the khurana business.
Geets brain just clicked... Wait... This is maan sing khurana! The one my dad wants to get married to.
Geet looks at him...
Geet- is our parents planing are marriage?
Maan- yes... But the decision depends on us.
Geet bursts out in laugh. Laughing louder and louder...
Maan curious to know what exactly was funny...
Geet- trust me dude... I mean Maan... Just say no to the marriage.
Maan curious to know why??
Maan- why?... He started to get glimpse of dark Geet now... Her voice started to be come drowsy again....
Geet- just say no. Alright. It's for your own good.
Geet walks off. Laughing louder. Body guards started to surround her again... And then he realized... This is the girl he met few nights ago.... But why she want me to refuse to her marriage....

Maan runs after her.... Holds her by hand.... And jerks her towers him... Bodyguards instantly snaps to push him way...
Geet- it's ok...
Maan- why?
Geet- what do you mean why? Don't you know the word meaning no? I am mot your type.
Maan- I think I seen you other day in disc!
Geet- exactly. Thus real me. This is just a show off... For my dad.
Maan- do you love someone els? Is it that's why you want me to refuse you?
Geet laughs louder- are you crazy love and me? Never...
Maan- don't you like me? Or my family... Presentation....
Geet- look... You will have no interest in me. I am not a married material. You are nice... So go and choose your own type...

Maan got frustrated. What does this girl think of her self. No one rejects maan sing khurana...

Geet leaves... But maan wasn't welling to give her up this easily.... No way...this is the first time any girl have Caught his attention. He wasn't welling to give her up.

After few days...... Geet had to make her way to the khurana mansion for the dinner. She was dreading it. No intention at all...

Everyone was delighted to see Handa family... Geet again with forceful smile... Acting....
Maan walks down.... He didn't look that bad at all... Handsome to be prices Geet thought... Not bad...
Dadima- maan... Why don't you show Geet round the mansion....
Geet looks at him... She must have him for a night... He was showing attraction.... Geet smirks... Then next morning he will break up with me himself... This marriage this will also disappear... She smirks more....

Maan shows her round the whole mansion...
Geet- i have a party tonight... Why don't you join me.
Maan- r u sure.....
Geet- look... I have no interest in you... Or this filthy feeling... Maan didn't take any of her word seriously at all. He knew well she have no feeling like that... But what was the attraction she was showing...

Geet- come along and join me....
Maan- sure...

At dinner table-

Dadi- beta....
Geet looks up.... - yes.... She replies a bit ruddily. Sammera jerks... To act normal...
Geet- I mean ji Dadima....
Maan smiles... He just stared at her through out the dinner... He just couldn't remove his gaze... She had one of those innocent face.... He just coolant control at all... Couldn't help him self not to look at her. Her beauty was different...
Dadima- how was the mansion.
Geet- very nice....
Dadima- food...
Geet- also very good....

As the dinner finished Geet excused her self out....
Mr Handa- Geet! You can't leave now.
Geet- look dad I made my self present here! It's one of my friends birthday party. I have to leave.
Mr Handa- Geet!
Geet- don't create a scene here dad. I am leaving.

After Geet leves... Avinash joins...
Avinash- is she alright. I hope everything is alright.
Mr Handa- yes... Yes... Everything is gr8. Its her friend birthday today... She and Ridzy had to leave early....
Maan walks down as well... All ready to leave.
Armaan Yash and Jay were waiting for him...

Avinash- where are you going?
Maan- umm... BirthdAy party dad.
Avinash nodes....

Sammera stood there. She have observed everything. She started to get worry. Geet will spend a night with maan tonight. The way she was looking at him through out the dinner. It was making her worry. One good thing is that... Hopefully he will find the dark truth about her... But... Se was worried sick for geet. She called geets security guards to increase the security. Keep Geet way from media. It's maan sing khurana after all. Media Is also hungry for him.

Mr Handa and Sammera made there way back home. she was worried sick while mr Handa feeling a bit relive. At least Geet have taken maan out with her.... At least she was showing some affection. Mr Handa could already see love in maans eyes for her'.

PART 4


PART 6


next- 😳

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it dear............. 2 more parts to go......

plzzzzzzzz update soon
Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 14 years ago

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