FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. wht can I say. its really different. now wht will happen with maan. continue soon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago

i pity maan........... plzz continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Sigh..Geet is really OMG
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!....
for the first time i don't like this geet!...
poor maan!
contine soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was Fantastic!!!!

Keya... amazing work hun!!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it to the core..
haiii mere Maan ka kya hoga....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey this is really shocking for me...bt i always like ur FFs...u r very creative so i m waiting for updt...m very keen to knw abt maan n geet's future...n i wnt geet to become a gud girl n leave all this disgusting stuff...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohini20

hi hi ...
iam sorry keyama...but unless u change ur storyline lil bit atleast..iamnot gng to continue...it is jus disgusting...even if she gets alright or well after sumthing....still can't accept...wen DEV in GEETt show is getting punished for marriage for one night.....how do u think she will be treated....maan doesn't deserve her at all and may be sameera will marry him...it jus sucks a lot...geet's behaviour so low...!!!


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no point of me writhing the story if i change the story line… not all love are lovy dovy sweet :D u need cangage sometime. hehe anyway its ok hun. loved ur comment i completely understand
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Posted: 14 years ago
1stly geet charchter is so odd...bt it will b intrestin...2 c hw she changes fr maan
2ndly u said u ll update 2 4 parts each day....where r dose parts..i m angry..:😡😡😡😆
n nw i cnt wait so plz update...lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago



*~My Dark Love~*

part 3

Later on that evening... Geet didn't have to take any heroine. She was fine while Ridzy couldn't control.... Geet paid for her heroine and tries to takes her out of the club.....

Maan in the office working... Gets a call from arman to met up...
Maan had no intention but it's his birthday....
He makes his way to the disc...

Maan walks in... It was dark loud.... People were screaming shouting.... He could see nothing or listen... He wasn't really a party animal. He hated it. Most of the time he would be surrounded by girls which he highly disliked... Specially low type...
Arman, Yash and Jay runs up to him... Dragging him near the bar...

Yash- you mad it. You can't leave early today.
Maan- couldn't you make this party a bit less loud.
Arman- aree disc he yar.... Aj mera birthday hi. At least aj ka din Tu ham Sab ka mud na khrab kar.
Jay- we always do what ever you want... Now at least today.
Yash- ka yar.... All those hot girls dies over you and you....
Maan ignores....

Geet was about to walk out with Ridzy... She was wearing her jense and a bikini top... Her curve was prominent.... Looking more sexy then ever... She didn't fancy the disco tonight. She rather go home and sleep. That wasn't like her. But today... She did enough.

Maan- let me get some drink....

Geet stood on the side... Moving her hips with the music while waiting for Ridzy... Her eyes was on a different man today... She just starred at him...

The waiter serves Geet drink....
Maan was about to take it... She snaps....
Geet- oy hello... It's my drink.... She snaps at maan lazily.
Maan gives her a look...
Maan didn't like the way she was speaking... Or what she was wearing... She ignored her...
Maan- can I have another drink please.
Geet takes the drink and Walks off. Maan looks at her as she leaves. Security guards flowing. Moving all the boys who tried to touch her and another girl who seems like she was about to die.
Maan was shocked by the bodyguards. Round about 20... Even he doesn't have that many. Only 6...
Maan still give her a disgusting look.
Maan- sick....

Yash- it takes you 30 minute to get a drink? Comen...
Maan- yea...
Maan looks back at Geet.... Now guards were surrounded...
Yash- she is hot isn't she?
Maan gives him a disgusting look.
Yash- god lucky bustard...
Maan gives him another look...
Yash- I mean...
Maan- let's go...

Few days have passed... Maan have completely forgot about this girl. He wasn't that type who remembers girls that easily but... Her... She was just so rude.. Arrogant...

Maan walks in to the office. Avinash was already there waiting for him.
Avinash- you remember about the party right?
Maan- umm...
Avinash- it's important you see her. After all you are the one who will decide.
Maan- why? Doesn't she have any choice?
Avinash- by the talk with her dad I am guessing no.
Maan- that's a bit unfair.
Avinash- that's why I want to make sure she is completely happy with you.
Maan- umm....

Avinash walks out Pari and shasha stood there num.
Shaha- what? Our MK and marriage? What is this yar?
Pari- of course he will reject her.
Shadha- it's Mr handas daughter!
Pari- who cares.
Shasha- it's mr Handa.
Pari- whatever...

Maan sat there thoughtless.... He was dreading this party. Not looking forward to it at all...

Mr Handa was back home. Sammera managed to bring Geet and Ridzy home. Made them look normal.

Dinner table...

Geet sat there. Playing with her food. Falling sleep....
Mr hand- Geet...
Geet- yes
Mr Handa- party is 2moro.
Geet- what party...

Mr Handa decided not to tell her that she will be meeting maan.

prev-PART 2

next-PART 4

hay you all' soz' i fell sleep last night lol.. i was too tirade.. ok.. here updating 5 parts 2day' i hope thats alright :D hopefully that makes ur day :D

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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