FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1

Weeee 1st one...
Ok... What? Wha? Who? What?
What have you done to Geet??? OMG one night stand? OMG poor maan... Specially after there one night stand. I am already worried sick. How... One night stand? Actually it's really different. I like it. You have portrayed maan basically in every Chracter as possible now it's geets turn. Lol
Loved it.
Shocking but amazing.
It's like animosity. When I read it first time.
Lol.
Very good. I am glad you will be updating like 3-4 parts a day. That's like our good Keyama. Lol.
Very good. I just can't wait untill maan faces his belive Geet. Her one night stand.
Very well written. Loving it.
X

Nice update and geets character big tome shocker. But good as something new

Wat hv u done? M shockd to death, Geet wit such a low character, cnt digest it, why why why u hv to do this? Plz dnt mind but i realy cnt think geet n one night stand wit many men, i cn tolerate maan bein like tat but geet, lets see wat u hv in mind 4 ths track, but stil i m stil takin in my mind wat i read. Plz plz plz dnt mind its jst my POV.

Lol oh Geet- she needs some tough love from Maan haha!
Anyway update soon
Paloma x

Haha that was totally unexpected role reversal nice as I said I like change and geet in this style well there's a first for everything and poor maan who hasn't touched a single soul his marriage is fixed with hers but I'm sure he can change her lol and wonder who the boy was I'm kinda thinking she might have a stand with one of his mates but who knows and haha geet And ridz bossing sameera around lol that was something new to see aswell anyways a really different concept from the usuals and the title is kept me thinking is maan saying it or geet anyways great update and continue soon 😊

love this update amazing continue soon

Give some tym to digest......... Geet actually i m spellbounded ryt now........ Anyway its interesting.......

awesome update

oh my God made Geet one night stand & Maan obedient loving person i hope she stop drugs brilliant as always pls cont soon