FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago

happie happie...veli happie...hehehhe nw update other parts 2 lol😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉

Edited by cool_gal17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!! Maan's already disgusted of her..🤣
Shaadi kaisi hogi???Hahaha..
Geet ke papa toh bade chalu likale😆
Please update soon yaar
Love you

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Posted: 14 years ago


*~My Dark Love~*

part 4


Me Handa- it's a business party. I want you to take over one of the company and the launch party is 2 Moro.
Geet- you gt to be kidding me. She gives him a historic laugh. Me and business.? Are you crazy?
Mr Handa- Geet!
Geet snaps up- go to hell with your business dad.
Mr Handa- GEET... He shouts.
Geet- look if you have problem with me why don't you through me out.
Mr Handa- had enough of you young lady. 2moro I want you ready at 7.
Geet gives him a weird look and walks off.

Geet was angry frustrated. She throughs everything on the floor. Angry. Annoyed. How dare he shouts at Geet Handa. How dare he. If she wants me to do business then I will. Only week point he have is that I use his money. If I start my own business then f*** this house. I will leave instantly.

Next day... Sammera managed to force her with a sari. She was dreading it... sammera went through allot... thousands swearing... nonstop moaning by her... but eventually it paid off. she looked decent...

Maan sat in the corner of the bar... Lost. He really didn't want to met this girl. He wasn't ready to marry at all...

Geet walks in with her dad... flowed by two of her cousin. Ridzy and Geet looked normal for once. Geet wore a White sari. She looked beautiful. Stunning. Mostly every boy in the party couldn't remove there eyes from her. She was one of a kind. This party was special for both mr Handa and mr khurana. All the top business man models clients were invited.

Yash and Arman joins Maan flowed by Jay....

Armaan- who is this girl?
Maan- Geet Handa.
Armaan- are you ready?
Maan- no. I think I will refuge her before she starts talking to me.... I am not really in to this. will make everything clear...

Yash wasn't concentrating at all. His eyes was on Geet...
Yash- buty... He whistle....
Maan looks at him and then the girl.... He looks at her once then quickly looks back at her.... She was truly beautiful.... She was outstanding. Unbelievably attractive... Perfect in any angel you look. Her sari brought out her curve... Giving her a new desirable shape.... Any men will go gaga over her.

Yash- what happen to you buddy?
Maan couldn't remove his eyes... His pupil dilated. He just gazed at her top to bottom....

Yash- maan! Maan... I think that's mr handas daughter... Geet Handa....
Armaan- those two behind her must be her cousins.... Must say she is not bad her self.... All three amazingly sexy And pretty...

Maan still couldn't remove his gaze from geet....

The sari gave her a completely a different look. She looked stunning. Beautiful... Her dark self was hidden underneath... Completely.... Geets eyes gazed from one men to another.... Looking for her dark lover....
Ridzy- this is bul shit!
Geet- do you seriously think I would stay here.
Ridzy- lucky I took the heroine before.
Geet- same....

Sammera- be quit you two.
Geet- shut up. You don't want me to create any scene here. So you better keep your mouth shut. She gives Sammera a glare.

Mr Handa takes Geet towards mr khurana.
Maan makes his way... Without any hesitation.

Mr Handa- this is my daughter Geet.
Geet forcefully smiles.
Avinash- hello beta.
Geet smiles...
Maan joins- hi....
Geet recognized him instantly. Knew well she met him other day in disc.... But it seems like he have forgotten her... Good she thought....
Geet- hi....
Mr Handa- beta Let me attend this call. Meantime enjoy this party.
Geet smiles again forcefully...

Mr khurana also leaves leaving them two to talk alone...
Geet didn't realize this is maan sing khurana.... She was about to leave... Maan stops her...
Maan- hi...
Geet- umm....
Maan- I am maan.
Geet- I am Geet....
Maan- dance?
Geet liked his attitude. Straight forward. No hesitation....
Geet- ok...

Maan leads her to the dance floor....
Maan- you looking very nice.
Geet- thanks... That wasn't something new for her. Every boys she mets... They always craves for her more and more... Eventually there craving becomes passiveness... they Hates her when they sees her with other men.... Becomes jealous easily.... Well that's exactly her game.... Playing with there feeling... She loves attention.... And they are just mad enough to give her so many.
Geet smirks...
Geet- I really don't like this party. I rather be in disco.
Maan more curious about her now... She sounds interesting.
Maan- umm... To be honest I don't like this party as well
Geet- shall we go somewhere els?
Maan- if you insist.
Geet nodes'.

prev-PART 3

next-PART 5

hope u lot liking this

xx😉

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
keyams wat bout bitter truth u not gonna update for tat plz dooooooooooo waiting since last nite mannnnnn🤢😭🤢😭🤢😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

two parts are amazing

truly different from all ur other ff

poor maan...sure he will help geet to change

cont soon..............

waiting..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...ab pata chalega Maan ko ki Geet kya cheez hai!!!
I'm amused...Maan Singh Khurana!! bhool gaya ki usne Geet ko uss sexy andaaz mein dekha tha just last night!Haha...Geet handa is really a charmer but also a bad bad bad girl!!

I saw a lot of people weren't able to digest how can Geet be such a lowly character but ''People throw rocks at what SHINES!''. I am really loving ur FF...Please update soon!
Love you
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m feeling sorry 4r maan...... He was about to fall in love........ Now her dark side whould be reaviled.......... Poor maan........
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG lol.
Loving this.
U portrayed Geet perfectly. I can't wait. Pls pls pls do reach up to 10-15 by today.
Lol
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome... Omg.. If they go out.. Geet will have her time for her morphine.. And its nearly impossible to control at public places when you have outburst for a drug.. Omg.. How will maan react.. Seeing her sweat and shiver.. Ouch.. Awesome update .. Continue soon.. Waiting eagerly for next part.. ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

both the updates were gr8............. 3 more to go 😉 😉😉

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