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sejal1986

@sejal1986

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Posted: 14 years ago

#741

Absolutely beautiful! can't describe in words, and it is said that this journey has ended, the most amazing story of yours, my favorite one, I could still cherish its beginning, but all good things have to end someday, will wait for more of these kind of stories from you, but yes Ek Paal was the best creation ever, I will definitely read it again and again! Thanks for this wonderful story!

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#742

maverlous ending love it core ur damn exellent writer keep to good work my dear MUAH thank yu thanks m

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#743

ok...atleast for this one...i didn't cry as much....lol...

what a end...i loved it...i like the fact that everything went back to the pier for them...and she told him that they were going to have a baby...the best part was when they found out the gender...LOL...i cracked up at Maan's reaction...and Geet's anger was even better to see....even Marco and Adi were afraid and ditched Maan...LOL...

and the last scene with everyone together at the BBQ, i could feel the togetherness... sighhssss...even Ek Paal came to an end.....i bonded with all the characters...especially the new ones such as Nancy and Marco...i am little upset that we have to part with them...

But like Home Coming, Ek Paal is going to have a reread after exams...

Thank you for writing such a story....U rock JAZ

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#744

awesome ending!

glad to see that everyone is happy in their lives!

continue soon!

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#745

I luv dis epilogue.
d hopsital scene was d best. Maan was jst crazily possessive on his unborn daughter.
Glad tat eveyone had settled with their own life.
its sad tat 'ey r sharing limited times. but wat is more imp is tat.. 'ey still keep in touch.
tat is wat called true frenship. being wif ur frens not onie during hapi hrs but also at hard times.

I luv all ur FF. its jst mind-blowing. SO much of meaning.
Thanks for dis wonderful story.. Keep writing.

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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#746

Jaz incredible stuff.....it was superb..awww 3 babies..

perfect end

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#747

beautiful........................really appreciate the way ur sum up the story................wel i can say that maan will make a fantastic father.....................

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#748

thanks for the beautiful epilogue. loved seeing what happened after the happily ever after. everyone got a happily ever after. 👏

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Isha

@JilyPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#749

Another Story to end Jaz....but dont worry..I will b looking for the PM that will start another one....

Ek Paal was always was just amazing...They finally got married and they are together at last...A perfect couple i may say...that truly deserve each other...

I love that Geet endures Maan office life because of the though to see him...

ANd Maan is truly very gullible...Geet is just cute....they are perfect...and th way she told him that she is pregnant was once again a priceless momnt......no words to describe it....

an Nancy and Pinky are friend that peopl would die for...the way they fight for Geet's happiness and to help her....

and in the delivery room was just hilarious...Maan was again cute... he couldnt see his Geet in pain..good thing that Nancy and Pinky knocked some sense into him...

and the end....i was in tears..and it wasnt even sad (PS...i sill need to read the two OS you wrote..if i cry....i cry)

Ek Paal....in one momet. everything can change and that is what happned to Maan nd Geet....

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FABULOUS

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Shamima

@-shamima-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#750

There's not much words I can say except for that was a beautiful ending to a beautiful ff from where she told maan she was pregnant, the scene where they find out what gender the baby is, the labour and then their lives 6 years later you've captured all those moments perfectly and I liked the end what maan said as it's true you only need a moment anyways a great ff and congrats for completing it on such a beautiful note 👏

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