FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#731

triple treat today!!!!! loved the way the normally timid geet terrified maan after marriage and preg!

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

AWESOME N AMAZING EPILOGUE ITS JUSTWONDERFUL

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

loved the much awaited long epilogue...really awesome👏

maan is sucha duffer,spoiled her whole mood!!!

loved the way who Geet broke the news to Nancy and Pinky!!

duffer Maan making her irritated,but Marco and Adi were so sweet!!!

loved the way how nancy and pinky threatened him to go inside the DW!!!

wowwwwwwww.................Baby Girl...........lovely!!!

love their bonding and the way settled in their lives.

Maan-Geet 3 kids in 6 years...............well it shows their love!!!

the last part of the update was really beautiful,portraying the important of One Minute in one's life!!!

loved the story line,hope u would come up with an another one.

Thank u for giving us a wonderful story.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

part 14
nice part...........finally they are married and one......................lovely...............

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

Wow JAAZ..tht was just awesome..really...

for this beautiful FF just few lines

na jaane kaun sa pal kya dikha jaaye,

kaun sap pal kaun se kahani suna jaye,

har pal jo bte chod jaaye nishaan,

kabhi apne toh kabhi apni parchaayeyon ke nishaan,

na jaane us pal mein kya likha tha,

jab humne unhe us mod par dekha tha,

badal di us ek pal ne zindagi humari,

na hum rahein na yaadein humaari,

ek pal mein he le liya zindagi ne ek aisa rah,

jise chodna ne paaye nah apnana tha chah,

ek pal he laga tha bhuj ko hilne mein,

ek pal he laga tha samudar ko lakkhon ko le jaane mein,

phir kyon us ek pal ke keemat koi na samajh paaya,

jab ek pal ne badal diya humari kismet ka saaya…....

I think tht says it all..

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

beautiful ending!

loved it

can't wait for your next story!!

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Limerance

@Limerance

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

Awh that was a beautiful ending.

I couldn't believe how Adi and Marco were that scared of Geet. It was hilarious. Poor Maan though I'm sure he made up somehow.

And I'm sure they have their hands full with three wonderful kids. I totally loved this FF concept with the whole pier/beach thing. It was amazing. Continue writing!

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

I TOO HAD A BLAST READING IT

loved it to the core

very well written

thank u for sharing this with us

hope u start another one asap..

thank u dear

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#739

one moment to change your life .you truly said .thank you for giving us such a beautiful fiction .a very warm hug for being a fabulous writer and bringing a smile and making us believe in the beautiful expression called "love' and giving us "the moment to cherish it ".