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Posted: 14 years ago
Maaneet - SS

Hiya! I have literally been spammed with PM's, mostly with the subject about why I am deleting this FF so quickly. Well the reason is because I am so busy with homework I won't have time to cope with an SS, let alone an FF. Once I finish the depressing pile of homework I have, I will definitely write another FF or SS! I'm very sorry if I disappointed everyone!

Chapter 5

... 1 Week Later ...

Geet was watching Tom & Jerry which is her favourite programme on the televison, while Maan was doing some work on his laptop.
The huge burn on her arm which was caused with the fire a week ago, was gone and now all that remained was a scar. It was a very minor burn.

Maan looked up from his laptop, and looked at Geet.

Maan: "Your so childish" he said

Geet, who was holding the TV Remote, slammed it down on the bed, where she was sitting. She then turned to look at Maan.

Geet: "Have you looked at yourself lately? All you have been doing is work, which makes you boring"

Maan gave Geet a dangerous glare, which made Geet clutch her dubatta and twist it around again and again. She immediately turned back to look at the TV, remembering what Maan made her do when she called him that.

Maan shut down his laptop, got up, and locked the bedroom doors quietly. Geet didn't realize because she was busy watching her favourite show.

Maan then slowly walked up to Geet and sat beside her with an evil smirk formed on to his mouth.

Maan: "You know I hate that word" he said through gritted teeth

Geet: "It's a free country. I can say what I want" she retorted back

Maan: "In my bedroom... No" he said and smirked

Geet: "It's my bedroom as well"

Maan: "It was mine first. And besides, it's time to decide a punishment for you" he said

Geet, who was holding the TV remove again, dropped the remote with shaking hands. Maan saw this.

Geet: "I'm not going to suffer more of your dirty minded punishments again! What are you gonna make me do this time? Strip in front of you?!" she shouted back

Realizing what she said she put her hands to her mouth, looked at Maan and shook her head in disbelief.

Maan who was pretty shocked at what she just said, liked the idea.

Geet: "Good idea Geet. How about you do just that? I'll watch you right here" he said trying not to laugh.

Geet turned beetroot red from embarrassment. She had not expected this.

Geet: "I... I don't want to" she said nervously

Maan: "Your going to have to. Or i'll make you do it" he said

Geet stood up.

Geet: "I'm not going to strip, and your definitely NOT going to make me do it" she said and was about to exit the bedroom, but Maan stopped her by holding her by the wrist gently.

Maan walked up to Geet slowly, and nuzzled his face in Geet's neck.

Maan: "How about I take your clothes off for you?" he whispered

Geet: "I..." is all she could say. A shiver ran down her spine. She could still feel Maan's breath on her neck.

Geet gulped.

Geet: "I..." she said again. She tried to speak, but couldn't.

Maan smirked and pressed his lips on Geet's neck. Geet let out a tiny whimper.

Maan: "Do you still... Think I'm boring?" he said softly, ticking Geet's neck with his breath.

Geet: "Hmm" she said and gulped

Maan turned Geet around so now, Geet faced Maan. Maan's lips were only 1cm away from Geet's. Geet tried her best to control herself.

Maan's lips slowly reached Geet's lips and he pressed them against hers gently. This kiss soon turned into a very passionate, but aggressive one. Maan broke the kiss to gasp for some breath.

Geet: "Maan" she said softly

Maan: "Bolo" he whispered, breathing heavily

Geet: "I... I... Your still boring" she said and smiled

Maan then began to walk towards Geet. Geet clumsily took a step back, each time Maan moved forward.

Eventually, Geet's foot reached the bed and she tripped, and fell backwards on the bed. Maan put both of his hands on Geet's left, and right, which trapped Geet completely.

Geet moved backwards, and Maan then moved forwards. They did this until Geet's head touched the headboard. Maan was now on top of Geet completely.

Geet: "I..." but before Geet could say anything Maan pressed his lips on hers. Geet put her hands around Maan's neck and responded to the kiss completely.

Maan: "Am I still boring?" he said through gritted teeth

Geet nodded, wanting for more.

Maan pinned Geet down on the bed, and now Maan was planting ferocious kisses to any exposed skin he could see.

Once he had finished, his hands reached the knot that securely knotted the kameez into place and unknotted it.

Geet looked at the buttons of the shirt Maan was wearing. She wanted that shirt off. Now.

Geet: "Maan" she said breathing heavily

Maan: "Hmm" he said

Geet: "Take that shirt off right now or I swear I'll rip it off" she said

Maan smirked and took his shirt off immediately, including his pants, and boxers.

Geet looked down at Maan wide eyed, then looked back up at Maan's chest, then at his face. He was the most handsome person on earth. He had a toned body, including six abs.

Geet: "I... I o... only asked f...for your sh.. shirt" she stuttered nervously

Maan: "But I'm asking for everything of yours" he whispered and helped her out of her kameez

Maan: "Still boring?" he whispered

Geet: "Yes" she said

Maan then removed the remaining clothes of Geet and licked every part of her slowly, making Geet want more.

Eventually, Maan entered Geet.

It felt like magic. Something she has never felt before in her life. He was so gentle, and passionate.

Maan: "Geet" he said desperately

Geet: "What?" she said

Maan: "I love you"

Geet: "Quit talking and keep going" she said

After a whole hour of love making, both lay on their backs panting heavily.

Maan: "Boring?" he asked

Geet: "Not anymore" she said and smiled

Maan: "Good. Geet can I tell you something? Promise not to freak out?"

Geet: "Ok. I promise" she said

Maan: "I thought you were... Flat. You know as in chest and all that"

Geet's eyes widened.

Geet: "WHAT!"

Maan: "Yeah..."

Geet: "And why are you telling me this?" she huffed angrily

Maan: "Because, well I felt bad and guilty. I don't know. I just... I can't believe I didn't fall in love with you in the first place" he said

Geet smiled.

Geet: "Ego" she said

Maan: "Geet!" he hissed in anger

Geet: "See! That's what makes you so boring. You've always got ego on your nose"

Maan pinned Geet down on the bed again.

Maan: "Whenever you say that word... Your going to have to suffer another round" he said

Geet: "In that case... Boring boring boring boring boring boring..." she said and laughed

Maan laughed too. After years.

I hope you enjoyed the ending of this SS. I hope I see you again with another FF!

Sameeha xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ending!!
and dont worry i understand, homework can get in the way sometimes!! but hope you return soon with another SS or FF!! i love your updates so much!! for this one and your previous one the wedding deal!! just AMAZING!! hope you return soon!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww.....SO cute Update
lOVED IT..
AWESOME
HOT AND PASSIONATE
Sad ur ending it..
Come soon with other FF..
Loved the update
Thank you for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
great ending!
you better start another FF soon.. especially cus its the holidays now lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Nice ending!!!! something diffrent, i like it! 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww.....that was such a cute and lovely ending....loved the ending....thanks for such a nice SS...will really miss it....hope u write some more of Maaneet SS....Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwww..it ended so fast but i liked it :)
namita25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww good work sameeha....loved it to the core...
haiiii I wish you had not ended it......
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Ending
Come up with a new one soon
cheers
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Posted: 14 years ago
grt update sameeha.,....
loved it..
will wait for ur next FF..

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