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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#811

Part 259
M:geet ye sab tumari vajase hua
G:maine kya kiya?
M:tumne kya nai kiya?
(both r in a heated arguement&someone knocks d car door)
maneet look outwards
a traffic police(TP) is standing there
M:(comes outta car&approches TP)
TP:y have u parked ur car here?
M:(looks around)
d car had almost hit d pavement
TP:mr...
M:Maan Singh Khurana
G:(scared of TP,comes outta car&selftalk)sir bina,abi pura nam bolneke kya zarurat hai?hamesha attitude.babaji inko raksha karna
M:geet y did u come outside?jakar gaadi mein baito
TP:ye kaun hai?
(both simultaneously)
M:mera secretary hai
G:inka biwi hu

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#812

Hi buddies
i'll continue later. thanks for ur comments.

guys sorry for rushing d story a lil bit.bt due 2 some personal commitments,i am thinking 2 end this FF as soon as possible.sorry for tht.

pl. post ur suggestions & comments.

have a nice day.

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#813

so nice yaar but no ending we want more...

pls continues it so nice love story is different in this ff..

loved it

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#814

again they ll start fighting it seems !! one saying wife another secretory ...

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#815

oye ye donon milker hum sab ko pagal ker dein gay ....

cuteness personified!!!

thanks hun!

love

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#816

awesome update
amazing
plzzzz do not end this ff we all loved it 😒
its awesome
do continue soon

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Part 260
after effects of d car hug
to some extent, Maneet have realised tht both can't live without each other.bt now they enter into d conflict of LOVE Vs EGO

maneet staring@each other&gone into a trance
M:(goes 2 MSK attitude&selftalk)geet,just now,i almost confessed my feelings 4 u.bt instead of replying 2 me,u were making fun of me.ab dekh,mein Maan Singh Khurana hu.hereafter i won't tell anybody tht u r my wife.bt i'll make u to tell d entire world tht i'm ur husband(smirks)

G:(selftalk)dust danav.few minutes back only he said so many sweet words.but now he is giving me attitude.

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#818

chalo .. here we go again ... hehehehehhheheh ..........ye donon pagal kab samjhain gay ....

thank u thank u thank u .. for the awesome and continuous updates

love

Sana

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#819

Part 261
(our Traffic Police is a comedy police)
TP:(annoyed by maneet's statue mode&shoughts)yahan kya hora hai?
maneet come outta trance
TP:now anyone of u clearly tell me, wht is d relationship between u 2?
(again both simultaneously)
M:mein inki boss hu
G:ye mera pati hai
TP:(confused&shoughts)stop
maneet silent
TP:(takes a long breath)now one @ a time. Mr.Khurana pehle aap boliye
M:me inki boss hu
TP:bt u first said,'she is ur secretary'.now u r saying 'u r her boss'.which is d correct one?
M:(rolls his eyes)
TP:(2 geet)teek hai.now it's ur turn
G:ye mera pati hai
TP:hey bagvan...