Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

awesome update...!!

geet is going for date bt wid whome????

can't wait to no...pls update soon..!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: shah10
awsome..love it.

Thanks dear😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: pisces_pisces
its amazing...though i always keep getting reminded that they are not together right now which makes me unhappy...but u are a fab writer :)

Thank you so much😃

aww don't be sad... its a circle right... they'll be back together😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: sai22789
awesome update
very well penned down...loved it to the core
the begining part..the way u described anu's reactions was superb..

"yeh stairs kya kumbh ke mele ki taraf jati hai?". Taken aback, "Kya?" Maan asked and Anu looked at the phone strangely, "Kumbh ka mela?" both brother and sister asked confused... "haan ki agar haath chod denge toh main kho jaungi" Geet replied sniffing the air around her. Maan looked at her amused, at least this was better than asking whether he has seen someone's sandals or not he thought while Anu felt like banging her head...this part was superb...🤣

whts the mystery behind mohinder's parents?

Maan looked back and forth from her to her fingers and just when she was about to ask him what he was doing he took her fingers to his mouth and licked her index finger clean. Geet's eyes doubled in astonishment 😲
"there is some on your lips too"😲😲😆
It was from Mr-I'm-So-Great... and it read, "Now that was yum".😆

"Geet gata chal... oh saathi muskurata chal... Geet gata chal... oh saathi muskurata chal" giving more impetus to the word Geet and Maan spun around on his heels gaping at his little sister. Looking at his glare she quickly removed her ear plug as she said innocently in her defense, "What? It's on the FM".😆

Maan called her back) waise Geet, Mr. Juneja ki party mein abhi poora ek mahina baaki hai"😳

"Ok Sweety... Go ahead and enjoy your date!" Diya shouted behind her back and Geet turned back and grinning muttered thanks before walking out of the office.😲

the way u wrote is simply superb..wondeful..
do continue asap

Hey Sai... thanks a ton

I really feel honoured by all the adulations... glad you are liking the story and enjoying the narration throughly😃

Hmm... Mohinder Handa... the mystery man😆.... yes he is... but for that you would need to read ahead... i hope you keep enjoying the upcoming parts too😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: rsroopali
d way anu teases maan was superbbbbbbbb
geet gatha chal rockssssssss
n maan is soooo possessive knowing tht geet is going for a date
god only knws wt he will do n
luved d line whn maan msged it nw its yum

Hey Roopali.... thaks dearie😳

Honestly I was a little skeptical on the whole anu, maan and dadi scene... thot it might go overboard but then i m glad its being liked and appreciated😆

Yes Geet's date has got Maan all worked up😉... hmm wait and watch😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
awesome update
hope maan can confess his feelings in the next part

Anu is too good! lol

con't soon

hey Princes 😃

Thanks a ton... glad you are liking the story... i love my Anu too😳

Confession would happen but may be in the part or the part after that... i hope u like it

Keep commenting

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: puth
lovely update sonia......omg u write so well👏👏👏......
i loved the chocolate cake scene between maan and geet......its YUM😆😆😆😆😆

Thanks a ton dearie😃 I'm humbled😳

Yesh... i know we all like naughty Maan😉😆