Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 34

awesome update

lovely update sonia......omg u write so well👏👏👏......
i loved the chocolate cake scene between maan and geet......its YUM😆😆😆😆😆

very well written.. update soon😳

superb enjoyed it 2 da core u r fabuls writer

nice part. very well written

wow superb update. it was really nice and funny. well now anu will tease maan often but I guess it will take her some time to realise maan's feelings. now wht abt date. is geet going on any date with somebody. now maan will be very very angry. continue soon.............

awesome update....finally Geet has started to realize her feeling for Maan... but still long way to go 😍

i could actually visualise anu's expressions... it was great... the way u wrote it down was lovely... phone droping n all ... of course that would be the case after all THE MSK was complimenting a girl...

n yeah i love jane austen n pride n prejudice is my all time fav also... but i did not initially like Mr darcy when i read it for the first tym not till he became humble n i hated his proposal... how rude... but now i love him... yeah strangely maan n him are somewhat similar, i wonder how come it never occured to me till i read this 😆

that song... was OMG... lovely... anu is a sweetheart...😳

ok the last line was a shocker... 😲 date but with whom dont tell me sahil... maan will be so J... i love J maan...

What a great update...and what an unfair place to end it. Am pretty sure it'll be an innocent little date but still, wud love to see the jealous Maan.

Originally posted by: euphoric

Hey Aiyana🤗thanks a ton buddy and sincere apologizes for making you cry

I'm overwhelmed by the comments... feels great to know that you are enjoying the narration and have caught up with the curiosity... Also its a great compliment to know that i have managed to convey the emotions as i intended them to.

Now i can only tell you Nandita is innocent mommy😆....

I know the title is a little sad but then its fate and ppl meant for each other have to come together eventually... I actually drafted Anu the way i would have loved Maan's sister to be... the guy has really been deprived of the siblings love😳

No you didn't bore me at all... Ioved your comments as much you loved the story... thanks once again... do keep reading... hope you like whats store in too😳

Sonia

thank you🤗