Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

awesome part..
maaneet conversation was very nice..
waiting to see how will u carry the story..
do continue soon
looking forward to next update
thanks 4 pm
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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

This was so good!! I loved Geet's confidence and Maan is being drawn to her b/c she's one of a kind!! Thanks for updating...looking forward to the next part!!!

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mamon.moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

wow superb update. well finally geet knows maan, now lets see how they work together. loved all the conversation. specially this one

"Thank you baba ji... mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho ki itni jaldi apne paas bulane ke arrangements kar loge"

waiting eagerly for ur next update, so continue soon.............

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: princess163
loved the update!
Wish u a very happy new year!

waiting for the next one!

😊

Thanks dear😳

wish u a very happy new year too😃... hope you like the upcoming parts too... do keep commenting

Sonia

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: namita25
hey Buddy...Happy New Year.....
Awesome update......
loved the way Geet tells MSK that Maan Singh Khurana haunts the office...lolz she didn't know she was talking to him only.....
So Geet manged to impressed MSK with her presentation....
loved Maan -Anu convo.....
waiting for the next part yaar...update soon..

love
Namita

Hey Namita... thank you so much dearie😃

I know... Geet and her big mouth😉😆... Nd Maan-Anu convo.. i so very much wanted to show sibbling bonding for Maan... Glad you liked it😳

will try nd continue soon... hope you keep liking my writing

Sonia

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

any plans to update today

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: arniindia5
Amazing update....

Thanks Arni😃

Do keep commenting

Sonia

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: lovepari
loved it
amazing update
n Geet isnt scared of Maan at all.....LOL
plz try 2 update soon

Thanks Pari... glad you enjoyed it😳

Sonia

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: heermeher
when are u planing to do other update pls cant wait these two working together

Thanks for the appreciation dear😳... I'm so humbled that you are enjoying the story and the narration... will try to update soon... sorry but it won't happen today

Sonia