Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Hi Sonia😊

A very Happy New Year to you😊

You've given an amazing New year gift in the form of a beautiful update.

Simply enjoyed reading it😊

The corridor and lift part was too good, specially Geet calling Maan a ghost who haunts the office and Mr I-am-so-great😆😆

Presentation was again fab. Very nicely written.

And Anu asking Maan if their noses are identical was too funny and cute😆

I am now dying to read the next part. You're writing it very nicely making your readers go curious about what will happen next.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Gr8 part.... loved it Happy New Year

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sakadafi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Awesome update!!

"Geet indeed would be an interesting subject!" loved this line 👏

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Audiwalia

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Dat was hillarious..... I seriously enjoyed maneet moments......loved it

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

luved every part of it add me to the pm plsssssssss

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ammu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

wow sonia, it was simply superb i jst loved each n every word u write superbly i jst couldnot stop laughing at geets thoughtS ' ''Thany you babaji.............' line was simply superb . keep up ur gooood work n please update fasssst as u can . v jst cant wait 2 read da next update love uuuuuu 4 this suprb update

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: shivangi783
Hi Sonia😊

A very Happy New Year to you😊

You've given an amazing New year gift in the form of a beautiful update.

Simply enjoyed reading it😊

The corridor and lift part was too good, specially Geet calling Maan a ghost who haunts the office and Mr I-am-so-great😆😆

Presentation was again fab. Very nicely written.

And Anu asking Maan if their noses are identical was too funny and cute😆

I am now dying to read the next part. You're writing it very nicely making your readers go curious about what will happen next.

Hey shivangi... wish u the same 😊

I'm humbled, honestly that I've managed to keep your interest in the story... And also glad that what i wanted to portray has come across to you 😳

I wanted to show the sibblings thing between Maan and Anu... so tht scene😆

I'll try and update soon... thanks for the comments😃

Sonia