Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
Dat was hillarious..... I seriously enjoyed maneet moments......loved it

Thanks aditi... i'm so happy you had a good time reading it😃 and also hope you keep enjoyin the story.

Do keep commenting.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: heermeher
luved every part of it add me to the pm plsssssssss

Thanks dear... done that😃

glad you are liking it... do keep commenting😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: gagsy
wow i just luvd it.......
thnx fr d pm.......

Thanks dear😳

Hope you like the upcoming parts too... do keep commenting😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: ammu5
wow sonia, it was simply superb i jst loved each n every word u write superbly i jst couldnot stop laughing at geets thoughtS ' ''Thany you babaji.............' line was simply superb . keep up ur gooood work n please update fasssst as u can . v jst cant wait 2 read da next update love uuuuuu 4 this suprb update

Thanks ammu 😳

It really delights me to know that you are enjoying the story and liking the narration... your comments really puts me on high😆

will try to continue as soon as possible

Sonia

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

loved the update!

Wish u a very happy new year!

waiting for the next one!

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

hey Buddy...Happy New Year.....
Awesome update......
loved the way Geet tells MSK that Maan Singh Khurana haunts the office...lolz she didn't know she was talking to him only.....
So Geet manged to impressed MSK with her presentation....
loved Maan -Anu convo.....
waiting for the next part yaar...update soon..

love
Namita

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Lovepreet Kaur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

loved it
amazing update
n Geet isnt scared of Maan at all.....LOL
plz try 2 update soon

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Maan smirked as he saw Geet's eyes widened in shock and her mouth dropped open. Looking at him smirk, she gulped! She looked up and thought, "Thank you baba ji... mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho ki itni jaldi apne paas bulane ke arrangements kar loge" Mr. Gupta than continued, "and Maan this is..." Maan cut him in between and added meaningfully, "Geet Handa... (boring his eyes into her) Would you like to have a glass of water Ms. Geet? You don't look well... Looks like you have witnessed an apparition". Embarrassed, Geet understood that he was trying to mock her and muttered to herself, "yes sure... a phantom!" But then fumbled aloud, "yea... I mean no... I'm fine... perfectly fine" Mr. Gupta frowned a little as he sensed the undercurrent but decided to ignore it, "shall we start, Geet?" he asked. Suddenly unsure, she heard herself saying, "yes"

This was tooooooooooooo goood cant stop reading again and again