TWISTS IN LIFE (AR) Note on pg 150

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AMOON

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey just read bith the parts!!!

lykd it..

continue soon....hope u justify this rape well....

plz pm me when u upd8...if possible

AMOON

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Nice parts... And yes Arman is totally different in this FF.. I hope the twist comes soon also..

Please continue soon and add me to your PM list ...

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AMOON

@Amoon.88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

hey loved da prt!!!!

n really lyk da feelingz developing bw AR..

thnx 4 da pm

AMoon

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

sh**........

yaar jaldi update kar plzzzz...

armaan is crazy yaar....

thnx for the pm............

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ammyluvridzi

@ammyluvridzi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Hey dear awesum ff cont sun n add me 2 ur pm list na plz

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swarobi1

@swarobi1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Now, I am not giving any details of the R*pe part as many are not okay with that as they dont want to spoil their Armaan's image in their imagination, but i could not manage to change the story line. If done so, it would be the same routine story as others, so pls read this and tell me ur views...........

PART 3

Muskaan started looking around for Riddhima as she was not found for a long time. When she was walking near Armaan's room, she heard the sound of door opening. when she looked behind she saw Riddhima coming out in a disheveled state, and her dress torn at some places. After seeing her like this Muskaan panicked and ran towards her and covered her with her veil properly. When Riddhima saw Muskaan, she could not hold her tears and hugged her tightly and started crying hysterically. Muskaan could not utter a single word due to the shock. while consoling Riddhima, when she looked back to find out what would have happened, she saw Armaan coming out of the room with a stern face. When he saw Muskaan holding Riddhima, he just stared at her for some time and went inside his room. Unable to digest the truth, Muskaan stood dumbfounded in her spot. After sometime regaining her senses, she held Riddhima's hand and took her to Armaan's room and locked it. As soon as she locked it, she turned towards Armaan and stared at him with anger and slapped him hard on his face once and again slapped him many times.

Muskaan: Ye tumne kya kiya.

Armaan: Its none of ur business.

Muskaan: What do u mean by none of ur business, huh! Ab hum kya jawab denge Shashank uncle ko. Mumma, papa se kya kahenge. How could u do this to her. Ab woh kya karegi. Have u seen her condition. Tum...... tum itne ghatiya kaam kaise karsakte ho.

Armaan: Oh plsssssss haan. I know ki yeh ise itna seriously nahi legi, she will not even think about it after some days just like, just like that.............. oh forget it, now pls enough of this drama and tell her to get lost from here. I dont wanna see her face.

Muskaan: WHAT? Tum jante ho tum kya keh rahe ho, how could u say that to her. Yeh sab tumhare un characterless girlfriends ko acha lagta hoga but not here. Riddhima belongs to a very good family. Woh log yaha pe izzat se jee rahe hain unlike you, who dont care about mom and dad's status.

Armaan: Oh god, now pls stop ur bhashan anyways i dont care about that or anyone for that matter and let me sleep, i could not sleep properly and i am feeling sleepy now. will u both pls go out now, saying this he pushed them out and locked the door.

All this while Riddhima was not in a state to think about anything else except her parents, what was she suppose to say to them and how will she face them.

Muskaan took her to Riddhima's room before anyone could see her in that state.

After getting inside the room, she and Riddhima both sat on the bed. Muskaan kept thinking what to do and Riddhima kept staring the floor blankly when suddenly she stood up, tears flowing from her eyes more now, and she ran to the terrace while Muskaan ran behind her not knowing what she was upto and what was she thinking to doing now......................

to be continued in half an hour

Edited by swarobi1 - 14 years ago

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

awesome part
ohhhhh i felt like crying poor riddhima😭
muskan did a gud job...😊
nd u did a great job............😛
nd ya we luv armaan's image but its gud u didn't changed ur story
coz its very different.....😊
but i think u should hv made 2 parts like for d
readers who wnts to read dat rape part nd who dnt wnt to.....jst a suggestion
but loved ur way of describing riddhima's condition....
nd armaan oh he need more slaps dis time..😕
continue soon

luv
jannat

Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago

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342047

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Aww really feel bad for Ridz!! Hating Armaan right now!

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Muskaan know everything omg what she is going to do and he is not ashamed how cheapplz continue it soon & thanks for the PM

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Nidha

Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago

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swarobi1

@swarobi1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: jannat4ever
awesome part
ohhhhh i felt like crying poor riddhima😭
muskan did a gud job...😊
nd u did a great job............😛
nd ya we luv armaan's image but its gud u didn't changed ur story
coz its very different.....😊
but i think u should hv made 2 parts like for d
readers who wnts to read dat rape part nd who dnt wnt to.....jst a suggestion
but loved ur way of describing riddhima's condition....
nd armaan oh he need more slaps dis time..😕
continue soon

luv
jannat

Thank you for your suggestion and ur comment, but u see all the briefing and description parts are meant to be given in certain time and place. first of all i am very poor at describing things and i cant take a chance now as if i have to do it in the future then i may dont have words to express them LOL!😉

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