TWISTS IN LIFE (AR) Note on pg 150 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Aww loving Muskaan right now! I'm guessing she's gonna ask for Ridzy's hand in marriage for Armaan??? That's the decent thing he can do right now!! I never knew I'd dislike Armaan!!

Please make the parts a bit longer!!!

Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
hey awsome part dear
plz do pm me
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
nice parts dear...pls Pm me when u update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

wooowww that was simply superb yaar..

loved the concern of muski for ridz...

n hate armaan for this....

my suggestion is that armaan should get married to ridz....

or rather his parents ask for ridz hand............

update soon...

thnx for the pm..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

hey jst catch ur ff 2day...its really nice n different...

i thnk muskan will take ridz with her to mumbai....plzzz update nxt part soon n can u please write bit longer part please....

do pm me when u update nxt part

love

sania

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Posted: 14 years ago
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armaan should be forced to get married to ridhimma and then she shall torture him... that wood be sort of interesting...plz continue soon with a long long update plz =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear awesum ff plz add me 2 ur pm list na
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Thanks for all of your support and comments.

Part 5

Next day all r doing their work in their respective places. Padma in the kitchen preparing breakfast and arranging things for Anjali's pagphere rasam, nani in the pooja room, Shashank reading the newpaper and having coffee, Ananya and Billy doing their packing. In all these things none noticed that 4 of them were missing.

Riddhima, Muskaan and Ruhan were in the temple sitting on the stairs waiting for someone. Suddenly Armaan arrives there panting. Looking at him Riddhima just turns her face giving him a disgusting look. Armaan just ignores her and walks towards Muskaan.
Armaan: Muskaan what is this. Why did u call me here so early. U said u were in a problem and told me to come here and u didnt let me tell anyone there. what is all this rubbish. Here u seem to be fit and fine with no other problem except one beside u, and he gives a side glance towards Riddhima.
Muskaan: U dont seem to see the problem Armaan but i can see it roaming on ur head, she said this sarcastically.
Armaan: What do u mean.
Muskaan: I mean to say that, what mistake u committed yesterday night, u r going to rectify that.
Armaan: Ohhhhhhhh so u mean that i would do what u r about to say and what makes u think so.
Muskaan: Just shut up and do as I say otherwise u see i have ways to make u do that.
Armaan: yeah whatever, he said that with a careless attitude and turned his back and started walking back when he was stopped by a hard pull on his wrist by Muskaan.
Muskaan: Now listen carefully. I want u to do as I say. I did not call u here to give u a lecture on good and bad things. I am not good at teaching u see. I know all ur activities in and out so better stop playing with me and follow my words or else u cannot stop me from telling all ur deeds to dad and u know how dad hates ur careless attitude and is very angry about ur deeds and that too he knows very little. If he comes to know about everything then imagine how would that be and what would he do. For an example, what if he disowns u as his son and not give u a single penny from his property then think Armaan where will u go, just think of ur luxuries and other things which u dont want to miss.
Armaan: Dare u do that, he said clenching his teeth.
Muskaan: Ofcourse I will do and not only that i will not let u meet my son knowing well how much u love kids and more over Ruhan is ur life.
Armaan: Burning with anger, MUSKAAN!!!!!!1 Y r u doing this to me. That too just for a random girl, I dont believe this. Turning towards Riddhima he just shouted at her "what the hell have to taught my sister that she is supporting u and not me when she should be supporting me."
Muskaan: I am supporting her because for the sake of humanity unlike u where i cannot find a single line of that. You have become a monster Armaan. I really pity u, u have such cheap thoughts in ur mind and u do such type of things outside without mom dad's knowledge. Didnt u think about mom at all before doing all these things, she just loves u so much, even when she knows about ur deeds for certain extent she supports u when there is an argument and ......... she was cut by Armaan.
Armaan: Now stop all this blackmailing, i am leaving now i dont want to be here.
Muskaan: Not before u and Riddhima get married.
Armaan/Riddhima: WHAT????????????????
Armaan: Have u gone mad, no way i am getting married to this lady, not even in my dreams.
Riddhima: Di pls what r u saying?
Muskaan: Riddhima just stay quite, ok.
Riddhima nodded her head a little and stepped back.
Muskaan: Jab tumne uski life barbaad kardi tab nahi socha tha haan. Kya soch raha tha tu, ki koi bhi ladki ke saath kuch bhi karega aur woh chup chap seh legi. Tum toh aise nahi the Armaan what is wrong with u. Jabse Tanya chaligayi tabse u have become a beast.
Armaan: Sab ladkiyan Tanya ki tarah hi hai. All r backstabbers. In ladkiyon ko sirf ek jism chahiye, ye na hi kisi ki feelings ko janti hai aur nahi samajhti hai. Mujhe bhi unlogon ki tarah banna pada unki hi basha mein unhein jawab dene ke liye. He said this looking at her and turned his gaze to other side leaving a heavy sigh. Now, all is over so i am leaving.
Muskaan: Armaan meri baat suno varna maine jo kaha hain wo karke dikhadungi, and u know me very well that i do what i say.
saying this she just pulled him from his hand and grabbed Riddhima's wrist and took them inside the temple.
Riddhima: Di pls aap...... aap ye kya kar rahi hai. Mumma papa kya sochenge.
Muskaan: Mein sab sambhalloongi tum chup raho.
Armaan: Mein yeh harkeez nahi karunga.
Muskaan stopped in her tracks and glared at him and leaving his hand she said, "fine tum jao yaha se mein abhi dad ko phone lagadungi and sab batadungi." phir tum dekhna kya hota hain. saying this she took out her mobile and started dialing Billy's number looking at Armaan.
Armaan Thinking: What to do. Agar isne dad ko batadiya toh mein toh buri tarah se phasjaunga. Dad toh mujhe ghar se bahar nikaldenge. what do i do now. Then he suddenly thought that it would be better to agree to Muskaan now and then I will take some time then later on will think of some solution about it.
Armaan: No, stop it. He snatched the phone from her hand.
Muskaan just raised her eyebrow up asking him what would he do?
Armaan: Mein yeh shaadi karunga.
Riddhima just shot her head up looking at him in a shock.
Armaan: Hum chalkar mom, dad aur sabke saath baithkar baat karenge phir we will think about marriage. ok.
Muskaan: Not ok, and u r marrying her right now.
Riddhima: But di....
Muskaan: Nahi Riddhima, we cant take any chances now, because Sid and his parents are coming today to ur house with Atul and Anji. They want Sid and u to get married, once we go back u will not even get time to talk to ur parents i will not be able to convince them to hold it for now as shashank uncle is very adamant about his decision. He does not want to leave this rishta go out of his hands and we dont have any other way here. We have to do it right now and dont worry u both mein sambhalloongi sab kuch.
Edited by swarobi1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hey guys
part updated
I thought that i would end this ff in 4 to 5 parts but it seems to be impossible and i have so many things in my mind to write in this story i dont know how many parts its gonna take. do tell me if u r getting bored then i would finish it soon giving a brief description of what happened and close it.
Edited by swarobi1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey really lykd it

n ya really gr8 as u justified armaans behaviour by telling his past and dat girl....loved it...
now im a lil satisfied dat armaan sudhr jayega....
thnx 4 da pm..
AMOON

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