TWISTS IN LIFE (AR) Note on pg 150 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
ummm.. okkkk.. W*H.. but i seriously cant imagine Armaan being a rapist so i wont really say anything now.. but i really hope itzz not real..:(
but woooo the chrctr of Armaan in ur ff is omg...
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
heyy
dat line is making me curious to read this ff :P
and add me to ur pm list

luv harneet

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
*will comment after reading da first part*

edit
heyy
nice part
cont soon

luv harneet
Edited by Harneetluvesksg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Woahhh!!
Wow !!
Cool one !! Srsly very inresting ..! Cont soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
First of all thanks for all ur replies and comments. i am glad i could put my thoughts here. i would like to continue this ff now, with all ur support, and i can do this only by all ur comments. By comments i dont mean only good ones, it means even if i dont stand up to ur expectation i always welcome the criticisms so that i can improve my skills more.

so here is the part.

Part 2

Next morning
All were busy with the last minute preparations running here and there.

Finally, the time had arrived and Anjali and Atul were sitting in the mandap. After all the rasams, the pundit declared them husband and wife. By the time all the ceremonies ended and bidaai took place, it was 7 in the evening.

During all these things going on, on the other side Armaan still could not calm down and could not get through his anger by getting insulted by a girl while his charms always worked on all the girls in Mumbai and why not here. He was just thinking about what to do to take revenge on her. But he could not think any thing which would calm him, whatever he thought he felt that was a very small punishment for her. He just kept boiling with anger.

In the evening after bidaai, all were tired and were ready to drop dead early to take rest and had their dinner early.

After the dinner, Armaan was pacing in the room thinking what to do now as in the morning they were about to leave from there and he had not thought of anything till now. Feeling highly frustrated and short tempered (remember in this ff Armaan is a very short tempered and a rough guy unlike other ffs). He took a bottle of drink and finished it and was roaming in his room.

After some time he was very daze due to the alcohol and was sitting on a chair near the window when he heard some foot steps. he looked at the door and saw Riddhima passing through the corridor. He didnt know what to do and in a dazed state went behind her.

Riddhima went inside the storeroom and was looking for something when he entered the room and locked behind him. Riddhima was shocked by his behaviour and went back a few steps suddenly. Armaan turned to her and saw her with full of rage in his eyes. She looked at him and knew that he was not in his senses and could smell alcohol in from him.

Riddhima: Armaan!!!! what is this. Tum yahan kya karhe ho. jao yaha se, abhi!!!!!

Armaan: tumhe lagta hai ki mein har baar tumhe jeetne dunga" he said angrily and walked to her and grabbed her from her shoulder.

Riddhima: Trying to release her from him, "shut up and just leave from here"

Armaan: Tumne mujhe thappad mara, mujhe!!!!!!!! mein tumhe uski jawab dene aya hoon.

Riddhima: Ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho, chodo mujhe. Maine wahi kiya what u deserved. she tried to get out of his hold and while doing it she pushed him hard and he hit his head to the table.

This made him more furious and slapped her hard on her cheek. She fell on the floor holding her face. he could not control his anger and "tumne mujhe phirse mara, huh?" you will have to pay for it lady, just wait and watch and he started walking towards her and she kept backing away looking at him and thinking of all the possible things to escape from him.

Riddhima: Armaan, back off right now varna mein zor se chillaungi. then u will have to answer all of them what u were doing here. i said leave right now.

Armaan: Just try and do whatever u want, saying this he went near her.

As soon as she saw him near her she kicked him on his leg and ran towards the door but Armaan grabbed her leg and pushed her down and she fell on the floor face down and she winced with pain and he pounced on her covering her mouth.................................................

to be continued
I will continue this after an hour only if i get good response😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Armaan locked themselves in store room plz continue it soon & thanks for the PM

Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Aww! Awesome! I am new to this forum and read ur ff today. Its a really unique concept and i would like to read more of it.Updt soon!!
Edited by qt4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
AWESOME UPDATE 👏
loved it😛
but yar rape karvana jaruri h kya???😆
i mean it doesn't suit our armaan's image.....😕
but its ok ur story is so nice dat i cn handle dis twist.........😛
continue soonnnnnnnnnn
eagerly waiting for nxt part...

luv
jannat



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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
nice
continue it
add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
omg Armaan is genuinely scary in this.. i had a mini heart attack when i read ur prologue. cant wait to read more. plz cont soon and thanks for the pm

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