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Posted: 14 years ago
luv maaneet wedding and big night
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar,,,awsome one ..loved it finally we can see maneet shaadi ... well i ll go with the small time left for our maneet on 2nd before reception yaar.
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
their marriage dare fixed finally.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates...
read d last 2 updates.. superb..
marriage date fixed...
i wud like 2 c geet's bde wid some mannet moments,may b a surprise gift 4rm maan, their wedding n u cud add some maaneet mments in their journey back 2 delhi after d pagphera...
do cont soon.. thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved all three update
do continue
i dont want der big nite as a disaster
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25

So less suggestions

So I continue on my own wish

..asked me for B'day update will go with it

25th June Maan at Bhopal calling Dev,

M: pls bhai koi jugaad fit kar naa

D: par kaise this is not possible, guests have started arriving and you should be here

M: kya maine tere liye kya kya nahin kiya tere liye main Delhi se Ahmedabad aataa tha aur tu mera itna sa kaam nahin kar sakta sirf 1 hr hi to maanj raha hoan

D: theek hai aap yahan aa jao main kuch karta hoan

M: thanku bhai ho to tere jaisa nahin to ho hi nahin, mein pahuchta hoan abhi subh ki flight se hi, aur GM ko saath leke aaonga

In Delhi, Dev calling HSPur

D: pls NT kuch kar naa

N: kya D how is it possible, bua, maasi, sab aaye hain yahan aur saath main unki paltan bhi, kisi ko pataa chalaa, arey definitely some one will know, no dear its very risky

D: pls sweet heart I promised I'll do something, he's coming here in 2 hrs, main kya jawab donga

N: theek hain call me, aur better call Dipendar at around 12:00pm I will ask for his help, he will definitely come to our aide

D: love you mujhe pata tha u will manage, will call him tum saath main rehna, bye

At HSPur

Dipendar and NT talking

Dip: kya NT, par is bheeed main sab kaise hoga, aur who buaji ki beti pakki jasoos hain, use pata chalaa to, no no meri to gardan kaat denge

N: pls Dipu you can't do this for your sister, look I promised Dev you will help, pls, he will be calling you at 12:00pm, kuch plan soch ke rakha, I don't know but you will have to manage

Dip: sahin hain promise tum karo marwao mujhe, kisi ne sach hi kaha hain, sisters are like sweet devils, ok let me think, you wait I will have to sort out a lot of things.

Dev and Vicky reach the airport

M: how u here

D: bro if u come home how will you justify your absence

VJ: bro you come with me we will be staying at my friends till the time to leave.

D: bro aap sab samaan le aaye if somethings left do the shopping now ok there's a car waiting for you at VJ's friends GM you can take over, don't let him drive

GM: ji bhaiya ki aap phikar na kare, VJ bhai chale

They leave for VJ's friends and Dev for home

Dev calls Dipendar at 12:00 pm sharp, explains him everything what he has to do and how, see I'll reach there at 7:00pm

Dip: ok jiju don't come to the house I have arranged things at Raghav's farm house, he will meet you at the railway phatak at 7:00pm sharp, you come with him, and be assured we will get the things ready, bye.

Dev calls VJ at his friends and tells him everything, asks for GM, and tells him that he has to reach the railway phaatak at 11:00pm with Maan, talks to Maan and assures everything is gonna be as he planned.

At 7:00pm Dev and VJ reach HSPur and complete the arrangements

At 11:00pm Maan reaches there with GM

In the house at 11:30 pm

Dip and Raghav Help Maan to reach the terrace from the back gate, he assures that all are in their rooms. NT has already arranged things at the terrace. Now she has to somehow bring Geet here.

NT: Geet kya tu so rahi hai, mujhe neend nahin aa rahi

G: Di what is this let me sleep, I am damn tired all this shopping has taken my toll

N: hey sis why don't we sneak and go to the terrace to take some fresh air, its so hot here

G: Di relax look at the time, this is not your hostel this is Handa Haweli and here girls don't sneak out at this hour.

N: just don't be that sati savitri last time remember you were there with veerji and that too at 4:00 am

G irritated and blushing: ok chalo, first let me wear the jacket (she was in her 3 pc payjama set, a spagatthi top, jacket and lowers)

They reach the terrace at 11:55 pm NT thanked her stars that they made there on time, stood for some time with Geet then pointed at some random direction, Geet who dekh shooting star, where Di, she turned to find No NT,NT slipped away as the clock struck 12:00 there were silent fireworks in the sky. She was mesemerised; suddenly Maan hugged her from the back, HAPPY BIRTH DAY GEET!!! And kissed her nape

Geet turned "Maan" and hugged him back

Maan guided her to cut the cake which was already placed on the table, she was happy had tears in her eyes, he asked by his eyes kya hua, she nods kuch nahin

{select any one you like}

She cut the cake it was a beauty, more fireworks, suddenly Dev, VJ, NT, Raghav, Dipndar and GM all came singing happy birth day to you

She blushed and first fed the cake to Maan then one by one to every one present, to all partners in crime, she smiled Di aap bhi, NT nodded yes

N: Veerji gift kahan hai,

M: took out a box from his pocket it had a ring he went down on his knees and slid the ring in Geet's ring finger, Geet today I am officially asking you I front of all these partners in crime, WILL YOU BE MINE FOR TODAY TOMMORROW AND FOREVER

{select any 1 u like}

G: blushed hard and nodded yes

D: bro kuch sunai nahin diya, kya kaha saali sahiba kya aap mana kar rahin hain

G: Jiju meine haan kahan hai

All laugh and then leave the two taking the cake with them ofcourse now they should get something for all the pains they took.

When left alone Maan looked at Geet she turned and he hugged her back slowly slid her jacket halfway, K****d her neck moving down to her shoulders sliding the thin straps of her top, encircling her waist, as he moved she moaned

{just to ease your imagination u can imagine something else I had a pink one in mind}

he was about to bit her shoulders and remembered NT told her to check his actions and not to leave any relevant marks, as soon haldi and all rituals will take place and she did not want anyone to know he was here and what they did,

He gently traced his L**S on her back, as he held her he realized, Geet you are not wearing your B**, she blushed, and turned to hug him tightly, he moaned oh God help me,

he lifted her and placed her on the vacated table, took out her jacket, she unbuttoned his 1st 3 buttons, he held her hand and nodded not more, she smiled, he slid his hands under her top feeling her bare skin she did the same and slid her hands in his shirt resting her head on his chest, slowly his hands explored all her fine curves moving towards her B*****,

she explored his back moving towards his abs touching and feeling them, both sighed and lost their control, he jerked her letting her back touch his chest, he cupped her B***** and squeezed them making her moan desperately, she held his neck and guided his L**S to trace her neck then as if loosing her self she jerked back facing him slid her straps baring her upper part,

he gasped at her boldness, rubbed his head closing his eyes she held his head and bent it down and let his L**S touch the soft portion which already was stiffened by his continuos rubbing, he moaned and licked it checking himself painfully not to bite, they continued further, he made her lie down on the table, he then put his weight on her, her B**** where pressed by his chest his manhood pressed against her **, his hands were moving down to her lowers,

Suddenly there was a lot of light, the partners in crime have started the firework again, this brought them back to senses, he gently stands and holds her to standing position, both straightened their clothes

By the time they all came both were composed, Dev pointed NT to take Geet

M: Geet happy birthday again and this is your gift (he passed a packet) (she pointed the ring) that ring was my declaration...

She opened the gift, it had a novel named FOUNTAIN HEAD and a copy of MADHUSHALA

{you have to read the novel to know why he gifted it to her, the heroine of the novel is very very bold and the hero is an architect equally bold}
She thanked and left with NT,

Dev coughed, Bhabhiji if you want you can give him a good nyt Kiss we all will not see,

She blushed hard,

VJ waise after what they might been doing here bro won't settle for just a Kiss, what do you think

Maan showed him a punch, then theyall left quietly by the back door.

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god !! let them marry first
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

they r getting bold day by day. .................................get them married first . and then .......................

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey all the parts were awesome
sorry can't reply earlier
loved the chapters spl this one.....wat a bday celebration
plzz make those ceremonies short n include more maaneet
hope to read more soon
keep writing

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