Weekend with Rahul-Muskaan 40!!

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Namrata_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Heyy i have to go now but hopefully you both can continue, and when im back i will post my part.

See you!

Was awesome writing so many parts today. 😃

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

that was a lovely part namz .....according to me the ending was perfect ...we cannot always have casual talk and light enviroment

@ namz: bye ...mee too got to go ...same here ,enjoyed reading and writing ...hope some one continues soon
bye shilps

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sweet.melody

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

that was an awesome part Nami! and see you!

I'll try to continue. :D

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sweet.melody

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Posted: 14 years ago

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

yeah plz continue ...will read ur part tmrw ...sleepy now

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sweet.melody

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

"Nahi Muskaan.. aaj toh batade. Kabse you have been thinking about the past...and it's neither letting you or me live in peace. So just say it." Rahul says calmly as he stops the car at the side of the road.

"I love you Rahul.... I loved you.. past tense" she quickly clarifies her slip of tongue "We were going to get married too... but suddenly one day you left. You just left me a note saying.. I'm sorry Muskaan forgive me if you can." Muskaan recollects as tears start making their way down her face.

"What was I supposed to make of that Rahul? How was I supposed to explain to anyone else, or myself... whey the boyfriend who supposedly loved me.. suddenly left? Main kya muh dikhaati kissi ko Rahul? People thought mujhme koi kami thi.. log mujhpe galat ilzaam lagane lage. Pehle toh I never used to beleive.. but sunte sunte.. mujhpar mujhe hi doubt hone laga... was I not worth you? ... you know what. forget it" Muskaan said opening the door and walking off.

Rahul was utterly shocked by what all Muskaan had said.. he never thought that his actions would prove to be so bad for Muskaan.. he never knew that he had badnaamed his love.

Not hearing her continue.. Rahul looked over to see Muskaan missing.

Getting out of the car, Rahul saw her walking in a wobbly style. Catching upto her, Rahul turned her around.

"Muskaan.. kaha jaa rahi ho? Come back"

"Get your hands off me!!"

"Muskaan look it has started drizzling.. please come back"

Muskaan broke down, falling to the ground.

"Why Rahul? Why did you leave me? Mujhme kuch kami thi kya? Maine kuch galat kiya? Aise chod ke kyu gaye tum Rahul?"

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Rahul: Muskaan mere majboori thi

Muskaan: Aise kya majboori joh tu mujhe chod kar chala gaya? Kya main tumhari majboori nahin samaj sakti kya?

Rahul: Aise baat nahin hain main tujhe batana chahta tha lekin..

Muskaan: LEKIN KYA? Agar tu mujhse bore ho gaya tha toh bolta tha na, lekin chup chap ek letter likhar kyun chala gaya? Pata hai ki mujhme hi kami hogi, main hi kharab hoon lekin ek baar mujhse baat kar ke ko dekhta. Main itni bhi buri nahin hoon.

Rahul: Muskaan tu buri nahin hai, aur main tere se bore nahin ho gaya tha. Main abhi bhi tujhse pyaar karta hoon. Aur main vapas sirf tere liye aaya hoon.

Muskaan: Oh stop all this rubbish. ab yeh pyaar vyaar ka natak band kar. Tu kabhi kissi se pyaar nahin kar sakta hai. pyaar toh tere liye ek khel hai. Lekin kya mera itna bhi hak nahin hai ki tu kyun chala gaya?

Rahul: Papa...

Muskaan: God ab tu koi excuse toh mat bana. Uncle ji bilkul theek hai. Aaj please sach bol de. Mujhme aur jhoot sune ki himmat nahin hai.

Rahul: MUSKAAN! Bas ho gaya. kab se tu baat kar rahi hai, itna kuch suna liya mujhe. Tujhe pata bhi hai kya hogaya? Nahin na? Aur agar nahin pata hai toh please aisa toh mat bol ki yeh koi excuse hai.

Muskaan: Toh main wahi toh pooch rahi hoon. WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME?

Rahul: MY DAD WAS BREATHING FOR HIS LAST MINUTES. HE DIED MUSKAAN. HES DEAD. HE IS NEVER COMING BACK TO ME. IF I WOULD NOT HAVE GONE I WOULD HAVE LOST HIM WITHOUT SEEING HIM EVEN ONCE!

He yelled this and then left her and walked through the rain into the darkness until she couldnt see him anymore. She didnt move from the rain at all. She was soaked from top to bottom.. and a huge rush of guilt went through her. She realized she spoke too much. She insulted him, hated him, and never gave him the chance to explain. She wanted to run after him and apologize but she knew its too late and an apology is way too small for this issue.