New AR ff:Everything You Want*Pt11*20|5.Pg35

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Caramel_21
to the writer of this fic:

check out your reply to my previous update on page 45 of fatal end and you'll get to know what I am talking about.
oh my bad,see seeing the size of my reply u should understand,how tense hurry i am that time by the unwanted is not bad haan,most parts of ff are with out the truth so yeah unwanted does suit😆
and now back to you :p
you should be happy, yours was limited to physics and went okay-okay, economics and me are poles apart. I just hope the professor check the paper in a very happy mood :p
and you running away from your professor, kab tak bhagooge, playing catch me if you can with him.... continue..continue.. ;P
i am heck tensed for physics,coz damn engineering aur physics okay nahi bakwaas gaya
well until people forget about sem,i will run,oh results will be out na
and you changed the siggie...not done..I was liking the madhuri one more..but it's okay...your account...your preference...your siggie ..your... *sniff sniff*..*emotional blackmailing* ;P
oh i fought so hard to not change but other creations are sooo tempting sallu-kat n Shona one (hope u know her atleast now) that i cant control my self from changing n as JDJ is on,i am on with madhuri craze
n u,i am like heck confused like what u like exactly except the cartoons of ur siggy box,itni mysterious ho tum😕
lucky you, your mom taught you..I think I need to contact your mom now.
okay me going, have to read a very dear person fic before she updates another part ;P
mind u,my mom is a bad teacher,omg i still remembering her smacking when i said some other thing instead of right one,i was like social hi hain na? n she is like jab yeh aati nahi main doosra nahi sikati huin,i used to soo frustated coz next day i will be having exam n i am there reading the one question for so long time,aur galati se woh nahi aaya toh,i feel like beating my self for asking my mom😆
yeh thi meri kahani,,me,my mom n our stories😆
will be back...........

okay finished reading and

here's my reply:

Riddhima wearing a beaver dress and Armaan the clean shaven man, I loved their convo...it was funny, the best was Riddhima trying to enter his car and got stuck and he not leaving any single chance of pulling her leg. funny one, I enjoyed it..
thank god u did,i feel like giving exam waiting for ur reply😆
"loved by some, feared by many"..ohh I loved this line.. and Armaan the attitude guy..well can't expect anything else from him. okay maya said riddhima is jealous of Summit coz of his work, but the work he does- making notes for lazy people..totally unexpected..😆..
armaan was,is,will be attitude wala for me,but yeah here it is a bit sweet n salt attitude
riddhima beating summit..reminded me the Riddhima of my fic.the best was when Armaan came like knight in shining armour and told them they are getting married...
riddhima in our ff's are a bit,no seedi saadi ones
Armaan and his entry...totally filmy ishtyle...😛... Riddhima and her mind... she believes she knows everything. So she called Armaan gay as he introduced himself as semi-famous actor and he is going with the flow..now this is getting interesting.. so last part.. Armaan is having hard time controlling himself..oh man, looks like he is regretting his decision..😛😆.
armaan definitely enjoying n regretting his decision,he wouldnt have got the chance if he didnt said the lie n even he got the chance he cant do anything coz of the lie

I am loving the storyline, it's light, it's fun and not much brain power needed😛 which I don't have right now.. I totally enjoyed reading till now. Now you can update whenever you want. and as I am in a very good mood today, I am dropping the idea of taking revenge for not telling me about this fic earlier.
thanks,i dont need much brain power needed too,u know when u say the part didnt come out well n i scold that u are mad u cant know how good it is,now i get the same feeling while posting that is the reason i am like,k let people who like read,i wont say any one coz i feel its not worth to promote
thanks to good mood u have
update jaldi mangta mere ko ab..😃
yeah will do frequently before my second round of assignments starts
loads of love..
Mel..
love u lot
swe😊

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Part 5

Riddhima looking out of window n glancing back to the handsome man side of her who believed that she believes him as a gay, not in a life of her she would though his boots are gayish, she was surprised when he accepted her silly joke played when she was irritated, I mean never in her life she expected him to accept it

He is definitely known to her as foot ball player though she didn't follow or know to which team he played but she did know him through the countless hair gel n shaving ads he done, not to miss the Vanity magazine issue of 50 most sexiest people in all the fields she is gone through it as it holds the interview of his favorite pop star who is below this person side of him

His White Casual Shirt n Blue Jeans n his cool goggles made him much more sexier than he actually was, simplicity does bring the best out every man, riddhima thought as she was checking him out with side glance

Well there is one thing she found him strong n handsome n there is the other thing he is type of the person she avoids at any cost, he popped in to her so suddenly n now stood between her, a homeless luggage and a sign which have WILL PAINT INSTANT

She turned back to look outside the window, three days back she found out her bank account with 90,000 from her saving are emptied out, now summit have stolen her 20,000 from her room, all she had in the world was 200 in her wallet n no credit card to the addition as she grown up thinking she would never be helpless, yet here she was

"Meeting your lover does made u loss of appetite but not me fo'sho, we need to stop by some where" he said interrupting her thoughts

"Ex-Lover, way ex" she corrected him for the second time of the that day

"What I don't get is, the minute I saw the guy, I knew he was a loser, didn't any of your friends said u that?" he said

"I move around a lot that I don't have constant friends" she said pointing out

"U could have gone to a waiter of any restaurant and ask him, he would have said it better" armaan seriously stunned on her decision of choosing summit

"It depends on the perception u hold" she said still looking quite disturbed over feeling dependent

He gazed over her n said "You're going to start crying any minute now, aren't you

"I am brave enough to not do that" she said feeling irritated of the mockery he is doing without knowing what she was thinking n misinterpreting as crying over some silly idiotic loser

"You don't have pretend in front of me, go head. Fastest way to heal a broken heart"

Summit didn't broken her heart, he just made her furious, still he hadn't the one who emptied her bank account, She knows she overreacted when she attacked him, it's just they both share common interests in spite of his self centeredness, she used to enjoy his company, she found a good friend in him with her no still life, always moving from one place to another

"I wasn't ever in love with him; we just look out for each other in Shimla, he sounded upset whenever he called from Rajasthan that I started getting worried, Friends are important for me" she declared

"Friends are important for me too but if one of my friends is in trouble I would come in next plane available, not pack up n get moving" he tried to find logic

"I planned to leave shimla any ways" she said thinking her friends who can help but that is with her, she is so used of moving again n again that she never keeps the track of any of her old friends which left dependent on a stranger, It feels like her childhood all over again, a familiar feeling crept n building inside her

"So Beav, tell me about yourself"

"I am Riddhima Gupta"

"One of the rare names I heard" he said honestly, yeah it's not every second place he found a girl with this name

"My mother must be little depressed while filling my birth certificate, she is quite social thinker u know" she said laughing at sarcastic joke she played

"Sure she is" thinking to change the topic, armaan said "the art supplies or whatever I put in my car, is it hobby or occupation"

"Occupation, I paint portraits n some mural too"

"Isn't too scary occupation for someone moving much like you, how could u manage get clients?"

"I manage to have a nice rappo where ever I go so never it's been difficult"

"What's your age?" armaan asked intrigued by her view toward life

"22, I know I don't talk of my age" she clarified his doubt

"Don't you have an urge to settle down n get protected?" he asked knowing this lady more

"Too much of world for me to settle down I will think of it once I am 30" riddhima said

He turned on the radio n listening the track being played he suddenly changed the station, knowing the song or the singer of it will do nothing but spoil his mood

"Put that track on, he is my favorite pop star"

"I don't like him" armaan said getting stiffed n angry

"It's like not liking…god" riddhima observed the real man for the first time, the angry, stubborn who is no more happy-go-luck

"I am hungry" very quickly armaan put on the mask, he don't want to face his past n spoil his present just because of silly radio station

"I should look for a person to look after my car" he continued looking for a decent stop over

"Don't you think life is already complicated without having a babysitter to your car" thinking how much it cost to maintain something like this including the petrol n stuff

"It cannot be stole but it attracts a lot of people to maintain it safe"

By that he stopped over a hotel to cut the conversation

Swetha

p.s.i feel very not satisfied with part but yeah it is like initialization happened between two strangers about each other, so yeah not much done,but still do comment,also kindly inform me if any one dont want to read n want me to stop pming u😊

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

guess who is the first one ;P

socho..socho..you think until i return ;P

okay here i am

so Riddhima madam knows everything..Poor Armaan I can imagine what's gonna happen next..😆 and she is a painter..that's a different profession from the usual doctor.. I like it..
riddhima is such a chaloo ladki here and I am loving it ;-)
loved the whole car convo..
and you want to know about me..I don't just like cartoon siggies aur bhi bahut kucch,..see i added one more..that's me singing in my surily awaaz...😆

now the complain I have...bahut leniency de di hai maine abhi tak..
"why is the part sooo chota".. it started and It ended..Not liking it at all..😡...and like you even I am not satisfied with the update..
lamba update mangta mere ko agli time..

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago

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517780

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

nice part swetha.

so ridz does know that armaan is not gay. gr8.

ridz is quite bindaas in ur ff.

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Caramel_21
guess who is the first one ;P

socho..socho..you think until i return ;P

okay here i am

so Riddhima madam knows everything..Poor Armaan I can imagine what's gonna happen next..😆 and she is a painter..that's a different profession from the usual doctor.. I like it..
riddhima is such a chaloo ladki here and I am loving it ;-)
loved the whole car convo..
and you want to know about me..I don't just like cartoon siggies aur bhi bahut kucch,..see i added one more..that's me singing in my surily awaaz...😆

now the complain I have...bahut leniency de di hai maine abhi tak..
"why is the part sooo chota".. it started and It ended..Not liking it at all..😡...and like you even I am not satisfied with the update..
lamba update mangta mere ko agli time..

loads of love..
Mel..

riddhima is not dumb,she just want to make him be in dark
painter ki poora istamaal hoga,wait n watch😆
thank god,i myself felt bored writing it,i was like how it feels reading it😕😆
seriously u are one mystery,u write wonderful AR ff's n u say u dont watch DMG😕
nahiiiiiiiiii*closing my eyes before it starts bleeding*my itni bhi surili awaaz nahi seh sakti huin😆
about the length,i always do small ones but yeah this is very small,coz i just dont like the part,i tried rewriting it but no use,it came out this way only
so i will make sure next part is big
love
swetha

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon

love
Riddss

thnx,will continue soon

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: kashfull
nice part swetha.
so ridz does know that armaan is not gay. gr8.

ridz is quite bindaas in ur ff.

thanx divz
yeah she does
ridhz is bindaas but yeah there is more to her than one can see

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

mhey frnd the part was nice.
Ridhima knew tht he is a football player.
And she like his well toned body well thts not a surprise. As who can avoid the armaan malik.
The story is moving in nice way.
Thanx for the pm.
T.c.
Update nxt part soooooooon.
Anuj.

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: AMMY12
mhey frnd the part was nice.
Ridhima knew tht he is a football player.
And she like his well toned body well thts not a surprise. As who can avoid the armaan malik.
The story is moving in nice way.
Thanx for the pm.
T.c.
Update nxt part soooooooon.
Anuj.

thanx
yeah she does like him
thnx i thought the part is not well
yeah will do continue soon

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Hi Dear How R U so cold yaar but ur ff is really a mind blowing one cool one so she know he is football player and still allowed him to open zipper plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha