New AR ff:Everything You Want*Pt11*20|5.Pg35 - Page 10

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear How R U so cold yaar but ur ff is really a mind blowing one cool one so she know he is football player and still allowed him to open zipper plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha

Originally posted by: shalika

hey read ur ff nw
plzz add me to the pm list :)

Originally posted by: bary

riddhima is not dumb,she just want to make him be in dark
painter ki poora istamaal hoga,wait n watch😆
thank god,i myself felt bored writing it,i was like how it feels reading it😕😆
seriously u are one mystery,u write wonderful AR ff's n u say u dont watch DMG😕
nahiiiiiiiiii*closing my eyes before it starts bleeding*my itni bhi surili awaaz nahi seh sakti huin😆
about the length,i always do small ones but yeah this is very small,coz i just dont like the part,i tried rewriting it but no use,it came out this way only
so i will make sure next part is big
love
swetha

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

@bold: I have never heard or saw someone's eyes bleeding after hearing such a surili awaz. till now I had a misconception that it's always the ears and not eyes. thank you for clearing my misconception. from next time, I will make sure you close your eyes before I start singing...😆...
oops,thats one big typing mistake,i should say😆 like really,but yeah naya fashion hain,toh chalta,ek na ek din yeh bhi famous ho jayega😆
@line above bold: Me and a mystery- Oh i am so not liking...you never asked so I never told you. and I did watched DMG but not a die-hard follower of the show or in fact any show. I see till I enjoy and than it's bye-bye...😃... anything else?
tussi mahan ho yaar,i am now learning the technique,watching any show till i liked but when DMG was on air,i am in 10th na,so "dil toh bacha hai,thoda khacha hain",really i feel damn ful of knowing n attaching but yeah,if i dont know it,i would have not known many friends here n i would not have read many ff's here,i would not have known u,so all izz well now n maine maaf kiya DMG ko*dramitically*😆
@line below bold : don't go back, long part matlab long part...😛..just like Thanda matlab coca-cola..😆
this line above n below,u surely have ur ways to give a reply n yeah i try n work on it,sirf aap ka aashirwaad chahiye😆
too much of LOL,i guess,i am in mood😆
love
swetha

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

*just practicing my vocal chords*
*clearing the throat*
*wearing my new pair of shades* 😎
*Close your eyes* ...lol..

Handle it if you can

kahan ho tum..
kahan ho tum..
update ke baare mein zara soocho tum.......

any chance of getting next part before your assignments haunt you down..*ahem..ahem..me too*
a very tough question but I am sure you'll be able to answer it.. ;P

PS: itna lazy hona..yeh acchi baat nahin hai.. ;P;D, give some work to your fingers too..

5 parts reading non stop... too good!! loved each n every part now i dnt wanna give lon long comments on each cause me a lazy 1 so one word AWESOME... next time thoda lamba update chahiyeh plzzzzzzzzzzz otherwise everything else is tip top!!!

Originally posted by: .Lali

5 parts reading non stop... too good!! loved each n every part now i dnt wanna give lon long comments on each cause me a lazy 1 so one word AWESOME... next time thoda lamba update chahiyeh plzzzzzzzzzzz otherwise everything else is tip top!!!

oh yeh forogt to tell do continue soon!!!