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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Wow.. Amazing update Dear.. Alice-Abhay part was gr8.. Enjoyed it.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
it was good 👏
finally abhay saw some sense😆
alice was so sweet😳
thanks for the pm😊
waiting for the next part😆
update soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
i read ur ff just now. its superb and hilarious. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Guys I'm terribly sorry...Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls forgive me.I juast came into 10th which is why I could not update initially, as I had a lot of work piled on me.After that my net stopped working.But I promise I'll update tomm or day after
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: dmg_forever

Guys I'm terribly sorry...Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls forgive me.I juast came into 10th which is why I could not update initially, as I had a lot of work piled on me.After that my net stopped working.But I promise I'll update tomm or day after

it's ok i know class 10th is really hectic but also the base point of our career concentrate on your studies...
i thought that you have left if...continue soon looking forward for next😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Chapter 16

Library ki ye ek kahani

In college library, Pia is alone.

Pia:God...That Abhay na!He's so irritating.I mean what is his damn problem.

Abhay:You know 'damn' isnt even a swear word.

(Or maybe she's not that alone)

Pia(flinches):Oh no!Not again...Pia, relax.He is not here.You are just dreaming.

Abhay:You dream about me?

Pia:Oh sorry, did I say dream?I meant nightmare.

Abhay:Of course...

Pia:What are you doing here?

Abhay:You said its a dream.Then you tell me what I am doing in your dream.

Pia:This isnt a dream.You arent an arrogant snob in them them.

Abhay:Arrogant snob huh...Then am I "Oh Pia...I love you" in your dream.

Pia(blushing because it was true):No!!!

Abhay:Then?

Pia:Oh forget it.Why did you come here?

Abhay:Excuse me!!!Let me remind you that this is a public library.Which means that you do not own it.

Pia:Fine!Do what you want.

Abhay:BTW...what are you doing here?

Pia:Mai to library mein book lene aati hun.Tum kya karne aate ho?

Abhay(thinks):Tumhe dekhta hun...

He sees the book that Pia was reading and gets surprised.

Abhay:Pride and Prejudice!!!You like classics?

Pia:Yeah...mujhe purani chheze acchi lagti hai.

Abhay(smiling):Really!!!

Pia:To isme hasne ki kya baat hai?

Abhay:Private joke.

Pia:Whatever.

She starts to look for a book.

Abhay:What are you looking for?

Pia:Helooo!!!Its a library.I'm looking for a book.

Abhay:Oh thank you so much for enlightning me.I meant which book.

Pia:Sense and Sensibility

Abhay:Last rack on the right,top shelf,third from the left.

Pia:Lagta hai Wikipedia ke saath saath Google bhi pee liya hai.

Abhay:Tum book se matlab rakho na.

Pia tries to get the book but her hand doesnt reach it.Abhay comes and suddenly snatches the book.

Pia:Hey!!!I wanted that book.

Abhay:Sorry...ab toh maine le li.

Pia:Mujhe meri book lauta do varna...

Abhay:Varna...?

Pia tries to snatch the book away from Abhay but he always gets it out of her reach.Suddenly she trips up herself and Abhay and falls on top of him on the floor.They stare into each other's eyes for a long time.

Abhay(softly):Pia,I...

Pia's phone rings.She gets up from Abhay.

Pia:Hello...Oh Hi Kabir!!!

Abhay starts scowling again.

Abhay"(thinks):Yipee...Lover boy calling to have a romantic chat with his bad taste girlfriend.I do not understand this girl.Look at that irritating T.Always draping herself around me like...drapes!!!Why is it that this Pia keeps a 5ft distance when talking to me.Oh wait...I remember.Because I told her to.

Pia(on the phone):I'm fine Kabir, am in the library right now...really...OMG that is the best idea ever...Are you kidding, of course I'll come tonight...Yeah,I'll be on time, no before time...Love you for this Kabir.Bye!!!

Abhay(VERY angrily thinks):LOVE YOU!!!Great...now Pia is the one saying "Love You" to that...Ugh, I cant even find a word for that stalker

Abhay's subconscious:Umm...technically speaking Kabir is her boyfriend, so he has every right to call her.You on the other hand came to the library only to meet her.Doesnt that make you the stalker?

Abhay(to his subconscious):Shut up!!!(Out loud to Pia):Sooo sorry to interrupt your "romantic" chat.I guess I should go.So sorry for mu bad timing.Enjoy your...date tonight.

Pia(surprised):What...Romantic Chat...Date...Hey what world are you living in.Dont you know that Kabir and I...

Abhay stomps away to avoid hearind the...ahem, details of Kabir and Pia's relationship.

Pia:Ise kya ho gay...Date???Doesnt he know that Kabir's with Vanshi now.And what's wrong with throwing a party tonight to celebrate Panchi and Danish's engagement???Whatever...Main itna worry kyun kar rahi hun.Main yahan se jaldi chale jaati hun.Party ke lie bhi to ready hona hai.

Pia takes her book from the shelf when another book with a red binding falls out.

Pia(opening the book):Ye toh vahi book hai jo Misha ke ghar par thi.I'll take this home.

She takes the book and goes away...

To be contd.

As I said before, I am really sorry I couldnt post earlier.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
nice one, where were the cullens in this update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
oh thank u so much hun thank u it was gud update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
finally u updated👏
i was waiting for it😭
nice part👏👏
poor abhay does not know anything😭😆
hope so everything clears up in the party😆
plese pm me the next part😊
update soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hey i love ur ff.. its vry cool... i too finished my 10th n i can understnd the pressure u r goin thru.. r went thru.. and i just love the hilarious parts.. hehe Abhay is so damn jealous.!!! love it.. update soon dude..!!

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