FanFic:Entwined lives Note Pg 20 - Page 8

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Hey dear fantastic nd awsm updt.
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Nice part.. So if Kabir n Vanshika or Anushka.. u hav two different names in dis update.. Must b by mistake.. Coming back wit Kabir n his new girl.. Wat abt Piya..?? D Cullen part in d forest was Gr8.. Gud work their planning 2 bring Abhay-Piya close.. Hope dat happens soon.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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Chapter 16

Step 2:Accomplished

Edward(mutters):Good work Alice.

Bella:Hello...Non mind reading clueless human here.

Edward repeats the conversation to her.

Bella(shouts):Love you Alice!!!

Emmett:Poor Edward.Bet he's heartbroken.

A huge branch comes flying at his head.

Emmett:Hey chill bro.

Abhay:God, yeh sab kitne bhukar hai.Itne kam nahin bana.Lagta ghar pe tanki bana ke rakha hai.

Alice:Hey Abhay!!!What's up???

Abhay(sarcastically):Nothing just studying Maths.

Alice:Huh???

Abhay:Yup, learnt a new formula-Size is inversely proportional to amount of consumption.I wonder how I became so clever.

Meanwhile, Bella and Edward were doing all lovy-dovy stuff.

Abhay(thinks):Unbelievable.Chand and Haseena gave them a separate room.But nooo that was not enough.Cheapsters!!!

Edward(angrily):Shall I tell everyone about your wild running imaginations.

Emmett:I heard that...

Abhay:You are dead.

Bella:Hey!Dont you see we are busy.Dont you have any manners.

Abhay:Oh right!!!Busy, how???

Bella blushed.

Edward:I love your blush.

And they went lovy-dovy all over again.

Abhay:Edward and Bella are together and happy.And Alice said that they were going to be like that forever.Maybe Pia and I aren't so hopeless after all.Maybe we can work something out after all.Oh wait...I've made her hate me.Nice love story we'll have.But if I can start over...

Edward:Mission Accomplished!!!

Bella(protests):But we can carry on the act.In case he changes his mind.

Edward smirks.

Alice(cheerfully):Hey Abhay!!!Got your sanity back in order!!!

Abhay(sarcastically):Thats not really possible when an insaner person is talking to me.

Alice:Fine...I wont tell you the "goss"

Abhay:Oh no!!!Please I'll die if you dont tell me the latest gossip regarding the idiots in Mt. College.

Alice:Ok...I won't tell you about Pia's love life.

Abhay:LOVE LIFE!!!What are you talking about!?!?!?

Alice:Say please.Oh and also "Alice you are the best and you can take my awesome black car out for a ride for as long as you want".Go on...Say these magic words.

Abhay:There is no freaking way that you are going to take MY car out for a ride.

Alice:Alright...I'll call you when I pick put her wedding dress.

Abhay:Fine!!!Please tell me whatever you were going to.Alice you are the best and you can take my awesome black car out for a ride for as long as you want.Happy!!!

Alice:She is in love!!!

Abhay(angrily):Oh really!!!With whom???

Alice:An idiot.By the name of Abhay Raichand.

Abhay:I will kill that bas---Hey...did you call me an idiot!!!

Alice(exasperated):Boys!!!Dude did you even hear what I said.

Abhay:What?Oh yeah I did?You said-Hey(gets hit by a bright ray of realisation)you said Me...I mean..

Alice(sarcastically):Ya I know.Did you just have Mentos?

Abhay(warily):You think she likes ME after seeing her reactions towards me.

Alice:Likes???I would go for something much more intense.Even a baby would be able to see that.

Abhay:Really Alice!!!

Alice:Hey its your life.You find out.

Abhay:How?

Alice:Stop this attitude and talk to her.

Abhay:But...

Alice:Mein bekar mein apna time waste kar rahin hun.Mujhe yeh advice Shaurya ko deni chahiye thi.Ab tak to voh dono Chintu-Mintu ke mummy-papa ban gaye hote.

Abhay growls.

Alice:Btw mere kamre mein destruction phailane ke bare mein sochna bhi mat.And SHE's in the college library.Chow!!!

Abhay goes from there, fuming.

Edward(smirking):Going somewhere???

Abhay(irritated):Yes!!!

Bella:Oooh...Not in a good mood?

Abhay(yo Edward):Your sister is driving me crazy.

Edward:At least someone agrees with me.

Bella:Hey...Dont say anything about Alice.

Edward:You have to admit she gets on our nerves sometimes.

Abhay:I'm out of here.

Edward:Sure...We will join you when you are done with your task.(winks at Abhay)

Abhay:And people say I am weird.(Goes from there)

wowow ! gr8 part

iam 1st

poor abhay.........the cullens r driving him mad.....................

hei,
u hav taken a long break..now-a-days u take long breaks..dont be like that..so happy that mission 2 accomplished..cullens r cullens after all..love them as always..hope abhay talks to pia n comes to know its mere words that she hates him but she loves him more than anything..continue soon yaar..

Superb part dear!!!!!!!
Amazing,luvly updt dear.
too gud.
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plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dunt 4get to pm me.
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vritika