FanFic:Entwined lives Note Pg 20

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Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Nice update! Looking forward to Abhay's reaction to Piya and their confession! Continue soon 😊

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Awesome update yaar.. Mish-Shaurya part was superb.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Continue soon..thanx for d pm..lol.

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Pari Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Your ff is just awesome

Nice concept

Twilight and PKYEk

I loved it

Continue soon

And please add me 2 ur PM list

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Apoorva

@katiehiwatari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

hey that was a nice update.. hey next time pls don make fun of Lady Gaga in ANY way.. pls.. i love her a lot.. n hey im PJay fan..!! n this update was very superb.. kya yar itna wait karaadhi..!! oh wel update soon.>!!

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Chapter 18

I just wanna play my music...

Emmett:Hey guys...What kind of a party is this???Are we just gonna sit and gossip like old ladies.Lets have some FUN!!!

Panchi(Smirking):Bring it on!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DdiYo7NfIZc

So we back in the club
Get that bodies rockin from side to side (side to side)
Thank God the week is done
I feel like a zombie gone back to life (back to life)
Hands up, and suddenly we all got our hands up
No control of my body
Ain't I seen you before?
I think I remember those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Keep downing drinks like this
Not tomorrow that just right now, now, now, now, now, now
Gonna set the roof on fire
Gonna burn this mother f**ker down, down, down, down, down, down
Hands up, when the music drops
We both put our hands up
Put your hands on my body
Swear I seen you before
I think I remember those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

(DJ Got Us Fallin In Love Again-Usher feat Pitbull)

The most happening people of Dehra Dun totally ROCKED the floor!!!

Emmett(whooping gleefully):Now THIS my friends...is a party!!!

Abhay was the only one who hadn't joined the rest...

Abhay(Restlessly):Sab aa chuke hain party mein...Par Pia kahan hai...

Suddenly a vision of loveliness, looking both sexy and elegant descended the stairs in a stunning black dress.Every male in the room turned his head as she glided down the stairs, looking like a Greek goddess.

Abhay(mesmerised):Pia...

Abhay didnt know how...but he knew that this was Pia...HIS Pia.

Person 1:Who is that girl???

Person 2:Well...Obviously I dont know since she's wearing a MASK!!!

Person 3:Wow...She's hot!!!

Person 4:Yeah man.

Abhay growls.

Emmett(whispers to Alice):Do these guys have like... a death wish.

Alice:Aw...I'm so proud of my girl.She looks freaking GORGEOUS, just like I meant her to.My work is so perfect!!!Every guy in the room is looking at her.I'm honoured...

Emmett(faking tears):OMG...That's so toching Alice...I'm so happy for you.You are a proud momma today.

Alice:Hey big bro...

Emmett:Yes lil sis...

Alice:Shut up...

Edward had eyes only for his Bella.They were blissfully unaware of their surroundings and danced on contentedly in each others arms.Everyone in the room teared their eyes away from Pia(Except for Abhay...Duh)and gazed at the couple on the dance floor, who were bathed in an aura of love...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=y9SSx5Vlm_Y#t=8s

(Watch this vid pls)

[Gabriella]
Take my hand, take a breath
Pull me close and take one step
Keep your eyes locked on mine,
And let the music be your guide.

[Troy, Gabriella]
Won't you promise me (now won't you promise me, that you'll never forget)
We'll keep dancing (to keep dancing) wherever we go next

(chorus)
It's like catching lightning the chances of finding someone like you
It's one in a million, the chances of feeling the way we do
And with every step together, we just keep on getting better
So can I have this dance (can I have this dance)
Can I have this dance

[Troy]
Take my hand, I'll take the lead
And every turn will be safe with me
Don't be afraid, afraid to fall
You know I'll catch you threw it all

[Troy, Gabriella]
And you can't keep us apart (even a thousand miles, can't keep us apart)
'Cause my heart is (cause my heart is) wherever you are

(chorus)
It's like catching lightning the chances of finding someone like you
It's one in a million, the chances of feeling the way we do
And with every step together, we just keep on getting better
So can I have this dance (can I have this dance)
Can I have this dance

[Gabriella And Troy]
Oh no mountains too high enough, oceans too wide
'Cause together or not, our dance won't stop
Let it rain, let it pour
What we have is worth fighting for
You know I believe, that we were meant to be

(chorus)
It's like catching lightning the chances of finding someone like you (like you)
It's one in a million, the chances of feeling the way we do (way we do)
And with every step together, we just keep on getting better
So can I have this dance (can I have this dance)
Can I have this dance

Can I have this dance
Can I have this dance
[Can I Have This Dance- High School Musical 3.For all Edward-Bella fans reading this story]

Bella:Wont you even take a look.

Edward:I have seen her in the mind of...well EVERY boy in the room.She does look gorgeous.But no girl can do to me what you can...

Bella:What???

Edward:Dazzle me...

Naive and modest Pia Jaiswal entered the party timidly, oblivious to the fact that almost every guy in the room was looking at her...and that a certain a hottie was having a hard time stopping himself from unleashing his rage on evey one of her...ahem...admirers.

Abhay:Look at them!!!They are looking at her like she's something to eat.Stupid savages!!!And I'm supposed to be the monster.(Someone whistles softly which only Abhay hears)That's it...after this party, I'm burning that dress...Shame.I rather liked it...

Meanwhile the members of the newly formed "Hottie in Black Fan Club" were getting their senses back and starting to make their way towards Pia.

Abhay:No way...Over my dead body is another guy going to touch Pia.Which means NEVER!!!

Using his vampire strenghth Abhay reaches Pia ahead of everyone...

Abhay:Hi...You look absolutely amazing.

Pia(blushes):Thank you...(Thinks):His eyes...So familiar...

Abhay(offers his hand):May I have this dance???

Pia takes his hand...

Pia:Of course!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mO5j7c48qRg

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai'

Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,
Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,
Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,
[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] ' 2 times

Hmmm khawab ke bhoj se, kapkapati hui,
Halki palkein teri yaad aata hai sab,
Tujhe gudgudana' satana yuhi sote hue,
Gaal pe teepna' meechna bewajah besabab.

Yaad hai peepal ke jiske ghane saaye the,
Hum ne gilehri jhoothe matter khaaye the,
Yeh barqat unn hazrat ki hai.

[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai] ' 2 times
Hooo..hooo''.hooo'

Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki hai ' Kaminey(2009 Movie)

Pia:His eyes...deep grey eyes...who is he???And this feeling.Its amazing.What is it???

Everyone watched them dance mesmerised>The sight before them was almost...surreal.

Alice(in her mind):Edward...Step 3...

Edward:...is complete.

Alice:Yippe...We did it.They are so gonna name theo=ir first child after me.

Edward:But something is left...Abhay knows the girl with him is Pia, but pia kneeds to know that its Abhay...We have to do something to get his mask off.

Edward goes to where Abhay and Pia are dancing and purposely bumps into Abhay.Abhay's loose mask comes off and falls.

Pia:Abhay...Is it you...

Abhay(becoming his haughty self):Yeah its me...Why?Dissapointed?

Pia:No...I just wanted to say that...

Abhay:I know, I know.How dare I dance with you and you hate me and all.Whatever...I'm leaving anyway.

Pia:Fine...Go!!!All I wanted to say was that this was the best dance that I have ever had.

Abhay stopped in his tracks and turned back to pia.

Abhay:Come again???

Pia:Kyun???Tum toh jaa rahe the na.

Abhay:Yeah you are right...Dont give a damn.(walks away)

Pia:Moron!Git!IdiotThinks I hate him.I wish I could.But I know the truth.(sighs)I have fallen in love with him.

Abhay:Great!!!The girl I love hates me.My love life...or lack of it has become similar to the plotline of a bad chick flick.Even Lady Luck hates me.Why do only bimbos like T find the need to drape themselves around me?

Edward listens to their thoughts,smiles to himself and goes to where Bella and Alice were standing.

Edward:Girls...We have done it!!!

To be contd.

Precap:Abhay could easily open the door and let himself and Pia out but he didnt do so because of two reasons:

(A)Pia ko shak ho jata

(B)He didnt want to

Ok I know this was very less content and more of songs.But I love dance/song sequences.i feel they showcase chemistry between couples in a really good manner.Anyway...not that that i'm a very regular updater,but for the record, I'm going out for two weeks.Pls keep commenting.It really encourages me to go on.

Edited by dmg_forever - 14 years ago