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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Nice update.. Abhay wanted 2 appreciate his face.. awww how sweet.. Piya-Kabir were Nice.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
awesum part !!!!!!!!!!
thnkz for da pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
hey that was a very cool update👏
jealous abhay😳
only one complaint😭 please make a long update😆
thanks for the pm😉
update soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
lovely!so piabir broke up but then also step one completed yepe!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Chapter 15

Abhay-Pia Milap Operation:Step 2-Talk the vamp out of nobility,...blah-blah-blah

Kabir was wandering around when he heard someone crying in the girls's locker room.

Kabir:Who's there?

No reply...Kabir enters the locker room and sees Vanshika crying.

Kabir:What happened?Why are you crying?

Vanshika:Its Prithvi.He has to leave and go back to Switzerland.Its important.And he may never come back, so we broke up.

Kabir:That creep!!!Why did he come and get your hopes up then if he was going to leave.I'll teach him a lesson.

Vanshika:No don't.Its not his fault.

Kabir(angrily):You are standing up for him?Fine!Do what you want.

Vanshika:Why do you care if I'm worried for him.

Kabir:I was just trying to help.

Vanshika(teasing):You sure that was the only reason.

Kabir:Of course!!!

Vanshika:But you know what...I dont care anymore.Cos I have a new boyfriend.

Kabir(angrily):Really!!!

Vanshika:Wanna know who???

Kabir:NO

Vanshika:Sure???

Kabir:umm...Yes

Vanshika:You silly.You better not say no.

Kabir:Of course not.I really like you.From the first day that we met.

They smile blissfully at each other.

Vanshika(softly):Lets go out.We dont want people thinking wrong things do we(winks at him)

They go out hand in hand.

Danish:Finally!!!

Misha:Naya flavour?

Pia:Kisne pehle propose kiya?

Kabir:Of course maine.

Vanshika:Hey liar.Pia iski baat mat suno.MAINE pehle propose kiya.

Misha:Ye lo...Ek aur naya couple.Yeh college students se nahin, Romeos aur Juliets se bhara hai.

*************

The Cullens are hunting in the forest.

Emmett:Rose...I will have that bear.

Rosalie kills the bear and drinks its blood.

Emmett:Hey thats not fair.

Abhay:Ab ladki se haar gaya!!!

Emmett:Agar zyada baat kiya na, toh main us Pia ka dinner kar lunga.

Abhay growls.

Emmett:Oh I so love to tease lover boys with a preference to human mates.Which reminds me....Edward!What were you doing last night.I knocked at your and Bella's room.But strange, no one answered.Busy in HW?

Edward growls too.

Edward:Bella was asleep!!!

Emmett:Haw!!!Taking advantage of a sleeping girl.

Abhay:You know mein ise pehle hi maar deta.Ise maarna koi bari problem nahin hai.Par isse zyada us blondie se daar lagta hai.

Now Emmett growled.

Alice(in her mind):Edward!Now...Step 2.

Edward:Hey guys...I'll be right back.

Rosalie:Where did he go?

Emmett:I'll take three guesses.1.He's gone to get Bella.2.He's gone to get Bella3.He's gone to get Bella.Howzzat???Clever right?

Alice(rolling her eyes):Of course Einstein.

After 30 secs, Edward returns with Bella.

Bella:Hey guys!!!I finally get to see you guys in action.

Emmett:Its fine if you have come for that.But if you have come for some action of your own...Please warn us from before.

Bella and Edward givve him a murderous look.

Abhay(to Alice):Nice to see so much love between all of you.

Alice:Yeah, I know.(Signals to Edward and Bella with her eyes)

Bella:Umm...Edward if you are done, could you sit with me.

Emmett:Sit and .....

Edward:Shut up Emmett.You really want her to watch you guys ripping of animal heads alone???

Emmett:I guess you have a point.

Everyone hunts while Edward and Bella pueposely cosy up together.

Abhay:Why do they have to do all THAT in public...

Alice:I think they are adorable.

Abhay(in a glum voice):Actually they are.(Thinks):Just because MY love life is a big zero, doesnt mean others cant be happy.

Alice(continues innocently):I mean even though Bella's human.Actually there reationship's more stronger because of this.Edward is extremely protective of her.And they are gonna be together for eternity so...(stops purposely)

Abhay:Hey what was that last part???

Alice:Umm...I think I am not so full after all.I'll hunt some more.Talk to you later(darts away)

Abhay(irritated):Why are these imported monsters so.....monstrous.

Alice winks at Edward and Bella.

Alice:That got his attention all right!!!

To be contd.

Precap-Abhay(warily):You think she likes ME after seeing her reactions towards me.

Alice:Likes???I would go for something much more intense.Even a baby would be able to see that.

Edited by dmg_forever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
do continue soon and plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
u r just awesum...pls update fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
loved it
thnx fr da pm
upd8 fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hei,
u hav updated after a long time..really the 2nd step was interesting..making abhay longing to be with pia..all the very best for cullens to succeed in abhiya milap operation..continue soon..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
wow! i loved the way vanshika proposed kabir😳😳
Emmet part was hilarious 🤣🤣i just can't stop laughing 🤣🤣
umm... Alice acts nice i mean Innocent part.....but i can't understand the last part what alice was trying to say and why did abhay got irritated.........
update soon...........

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