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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part but no Cullens here...
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Amazing Update Dear.. Loved it.. Carry on.. U didnt pm me yaar..not fair.. Abt d late update..its k.. U concentrate on ur studies.. Do pm me when u update d next part..lol.
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hey y do u take so long to update. This is a real cool and interesting FF. Please update soon.
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hey ab to u must be having vacations, so please please update na.
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hey plz continue dis is awesome😊
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Hey guys...I;ll update soon

Edited by dmg_forever - 14 years ago
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Chapter 17

Step 3:Seduce the Vamp

Misha:I'm telling you birdie...tumhare liye accha yahi hoga ki tum zyada hawa mein na uro aur mujhe meri almirah ki chabi de do...Varna...

Panchi:Come on Mish.Mein iss ghar mein ab sirf kuch hi dino ke liye hun.Aaj toh meri baat maan lo...

Misha:Eww...Stop going all mushy and "Mujhe sajan ghar jaana hai on me".Tumhara emotional blackmail mujh par nahin chaalega...

Panchi:Fine!!!Mat pehno meri lai dress aur bethi raho iss kamre mein.Mein tumhare entertainment ke liye Shaurya ko bhej dungi.Vo aur tum ek kamre mein sari raaat...

Misha:No f***ing way.Isse acha toh mein tumhari dress ka hi torture seh loo.

Panchi(triumphantly):Good girl!!!

*******

Gradually all the girls except for Pia,Bella and Alice came to the party...

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://www.bollyfirst.com/image-library/port/3076/b/bella-prom.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.bollyfirst.com/lifestyle-fashion/styletrends/twilight%2Bfashion-9322.html&usg=__DoRMY91SQmLjLNIhDacNR0PTIU8=&h=376&w=251&sz=11&hl=en&start=14&sig2=EAh1eydY73eE_QB9R8m21A&zoom=1&tbnid=6Vz2v6s8dirD9M:&tbnh=139&tbnw=93&ei=WgLpTaOyIIuzrAeD1eSCAQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dbella%2Bswan%2Bwearing%2Bblue%2Bdress%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN%26rlz%3D1T4ADFA_enIN413IN414%26biw%3D1362%26bih%3D460%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=rc&dur=188&page=2&ndsp=15&ved=1t:429,r:10,s:14&tx=37&ty=104 (Bella 's Dress)

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://www.timescontent.com/tss/photos/preview/226869/Vahbiz%2520Dorabjee.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.timescontent.com/syndication-photos/reprint/bollywood/226869/vahbiz-dorabjee.html&usg=__W_3Rjkc--wjQh5hSjgo8opo2MY0=&h=393&w=261&sz=47&hl=en&start=18&sig2=2_YUhQexDevDdpyAn_r74Q&zoom=1&tbnid=FsvNnXbabxbDmM:&tbnh=148&tbnw=107&ei=qwPpTZ_kMYr3rQf08b18&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dvahbiz%2Bdorabjee%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4ADFA_enIN413IN414%26biw%3D1345%26bih%3D460%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=472&vpy=34&dur=671&hovh=276&hovw=183&tx=146&ty=281&page=2&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:3,s:18&biw=1345&bih=460 (Panchi)

http://s831.photobucket.com/albums/zz235/Maryam-sarwar/Special/?action=view&current=38380-simran-kaur.jpg&newest=1 (Anushka)
http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://www.wed-ding.co/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/short-purple-prom-dress-4.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.wed-ding.co/2011/04/29/short-purple-prom-dress/&usg=__aQMq6ylhXUfKPbt4wWbdCXuxJCU=&h=500&w=350&sz=17&hl=en&start=91&sig2=6VnKUu00sN-gIoxow-tkAA&zoom=1&tbnid=y0fO3gSukzSTAM:&tbnh=144&tbnw=101&ei=vATpTd2SKMW8rAf0kqmJAQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dpurple%2Bdress%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN%26rlz%3D1T4ADFA_enIN413IN414%26biw%3D1362%26bih%3D460%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=rc&dur=71&page=6&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:91&tx=590&ty=76 (Alice)
http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://twilightnewssite.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/nikki-reed-101610-2.jpg&imgrefurl=http://twilightnewssite.com/news-twilight-new-moon-eclipse-breaking-dawn/twilight-news-recap-of-the-day-october-17-2010/&usg=__uTgGuuXPR6m5s8ea9azniYWbHTg=&h=800&w=500&sz=112&hl=en&start=132&sig2=IN2m6sQDBTuHzrzfPXut2w&zoom=1&tbnid=4att8DLnkOYvWM:&tbnh=129&tbnw=79&ei=ZwXpTdvKNIr3rQf08b18&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dnikki%2Breed%2Bin%2Blight%2Bblue%2Bdress%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4ADFA_enIN413IN414%26biw%3D1345%26bih%3D421%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=534&vpy=65&dur=3135&hovh=284&hovw=177&tx=65&ty=181&page=8&ndsp=21&ved=1t:429,r:4,s:132&biw=1345&bih=421 (Rosalie)
http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://blog.unchartedlove.com/wp-content/uploads/blog.unchartedlove.com/2011/05/red-dress.jpg&imgrefurl=http://blog.unchartedlove.com/%3Fp%3D511&usg=__q12d6aEIR_ZlCMqZ3yR4Oo03kFU=&h=552&w=350&sz=26&hl=en&start=0&sig2=kbapfXhg-fKDAuB5E1Y-JA&zoom=1&tbnid=lrYhbY44fsNGIM:&tbnh=165&tbnw=105&ei=-AXpTbrlK8b4rQe2wP2NAQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dred%2Bdress%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN%26rlz%3D1T4ADFA_enIN413IN414%26biw%3D1362%26bih%3D460%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=rc&dur=46&page=1&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:7,s:0&tx=55&ty=93 (Misha)

Since it was a masquerade party, everyone wore masks too.

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The boys except for Danish,who was dancing with Panchi after figuring out her identity, were huddled up together in a corner of the room.

Abhay(to the others):So...where are the "love of your lives"...

Edward:Oh they take a lot of time to get ready(in his mind):Besides they have to get Pia ready for Step 3...Seduce the vamp!!!

Meanwhile Shaurya sees Misha.

Shaurya(mesmerised):Whoa...Who IS that chick!!!

Abhay:Misha of course!!!

Shaurya:Misha huh???BTW...Who are you???

Abhay(rolling his eyes):I'm Kabir!!!

Shaurya:Oh hi dude!!!Meri behen kahan hai???

Abhay:Main tumhari behen ke saath kya karunga.

Shaurya:Kyunki tum dono ab saat ho...duh.Dont tell me you forgot!!!

Abhay:No umm...I meant voh baad mein ayi aur ab apne dosto se baat kar rahi hai.

Shaurya:Ooh...Isliye mood kharab hai.Anyway mujhe Misha ko---I mean, Ladkiyon ko patana hai.See Ya...(goes from there)

Abhay(happily):Hey Edward did you know Kabir-Pia ka breakup ho gaya hai???

Edward(raising his eyebrows):Why do you sound like you found a stash of your fav type of blood!?!?

Abhay:First, could you not bring our...dietary habits into a conversation which can be heard by thousands of people.Second, I dont know what you are talking about.I was just...curious.

Edward:First, the music is really loud.Second, Thats bullshit.

Abhay(furously):WHAT!!!Hey its not bullsh---(Edward however escaped to the dance floor on seeing Bella to save himself from Abhay's wrath.He recognised HIS Bella the instant she entered)

Edward(nervously):Umm...Bella, Abhay's not really having the "We are BFFs" feeling regarding me!!!Lets dance...He cant come barrelling onto the dance floor.

Bella:Of course!!!

They start to dance leaving behind a fuming Abhay.

Edward:Jokes apart...you look beautiful tonight.

Bella(blushes):Yeah...umm...thanx.

Edward smiles on seeing Bella flustered.

Edward:Your welcome, love (How Ian Kabra-ish)

Bella:Our plan's working!!!Abhay'll soon admit his feelings.

Edward:Poor Pia...I cant believe I left her at the mercy of Alice.

Bela(Smacking him playfully):Hey!!!Cut her some slack.She was so excited for...Step 3(winks at Edward)And you know what...she has done a flawless job.Pia looks absolutelu gorgeous.

Edward:Where is she anyway???

Bella(smiles at him):She'll be along.Soon...

**********

Meanwhile Misha was sitting at the bar, gulping drink after drink.

Misha:Yipeee...I'm the Queen of the World!!!God apne mujhe in sare Romeo-Juliet ke beech kyun paida kiya.Voh All-Black Policy meri best friend ko jis tarah ghurta...ek din uski aankhen vahin chipakne vale hai .Upar se us chidiyan ne mujhe in barbie doll kapdo mein ghusa diya hain.Pls help!!!

Shaurya:Hey Misha!!!(Notices her state)WHAT.ARE.YOU.DOING???

Misha:Idiot...ankhen hai ya button???

Shaurya:Let me rephrase...What are you drinking???

Misha :Coke...

Shaurya:Coke???

Misha:Toh tumhe kya laga...angur ka juice???

Shaurya:That is definitely not coke.

He takes Misha's glass and sniffs it

Shaurya:Misha, you are UNDERAGED!!!

Misha:Ha, you mean tum bare dudh ke dule ho.Bachpan se sirf dudh peete aye ho.

Shaurya(guitily):Um...maybe...Hey thats not the point.Come on get up.You are coming with me.

Misha gets up but wobbles and Shaurya catches her.

Shaurya:Misha, tumne ek tanki alcohol pee liya hain...

They start to go up the stairs to Misha's room.

Misha:BTW just for the record, mujhe judo aata hai.Dont try anything funny.

Shaurya(exasperated):I wasnt going to.

Misha:Well dont even if you want to.

Shaurya:Misha!!!

He stops and turns her around to face him.There is complete sincerity in his eyes.

Shaurya:Misha I know I am a playboy, and I know your impression of me, but believe me...you are different, special.You didnt throw yourself at my feet like other girls and you arent afraid to speak your mind.I admire and respect you.Can we be friends atleast?Please trust me.

Misha looked at him for a sec.

Misha(slowly):How are there two Shauryas?You didnt tell me you had a twin.

Shaurya(sighs):You are so drunk, you arent even registering what i'm speaking.Come on, lets get you up.

He guides her to her room and tucks her in.He looks down at her and smiles.

Shaurya(tenderly):Sweet dreams my fireball...(Goes out)

Misha:Hey shayad ye banda actually sweet hai.Shayad mein isse like karti hun.(after 5secs)Aur shayad Lady Gaga kal Red Fort par bhajan-kirtan karne wali hai.Dude whats wrong with you Misha.Yeh mushy thoughts apne dimaag se nikal do.Resolution:Tracker se kuch dino ke lye kam baat karo.

She rolls over and experiences a searing pain in her head.

Misha(irritatedly):Resolution-Aagli baar kam drink karna...

To be contd.

Precap:Every male in the room turned his head as she glided down the stairs, looking like a Greek goddess.

Abhay(mesmerised):Pia...

*************

Everybody on the floor:

Cos baby tonight, the DJ got us fallin in love again,

So dance-dance like its the last- night of your life-life

Gonna get you right

Cos baby tonight, the DJ got us fallin in love again

*************

Edward and Bella:

...And with every step together,

We'll just keep on gettin better.

So can I have this dance,

Can I have this dance.

Hey guys!!!Okay I have no excuse for updating so late other than – I couldnt.Pls keep supporting me.I tried to make this update a little longer than the last one, and I hope I succeded.Enjoy!!!

P.S.WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE CV's.PiJay...Ugh!!!They better not be showing a love triangle.Pia n Jay WOULD be the biggest PJ of the show(no offence to pia-jay fans)

PPS Abhay's confession coming up soon!!!Review Please!!!

Edited by dmg_forever - 14 years ago
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awesome, now dont take so long to update. and i m looking forward to abhay's reaction on seeing piya and his confession of his feelings
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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hey awesome update.I m waiting 4 nxt part.Thnx 4 PM😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome loved it!! waiting for next and pia's entry😆

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