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Posted: 14 years ago
@Neetz - Yeah I just meant copying the 'werewolf opposite misha' part.=] Btw, thank you. 😳

@ Lekha & Radz - Sure. I'll wait. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sure, I don't mind that :)
I don't really like Raj till now, but, the way I like Sam.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Sure, I don't mind that :)

I don't really like Raj till now, but, the way I like Sam.


SAME!! Sam ki baat hi kuch aur hai. 😳😳 Lol, we are drooling over someone who ain't even real. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701


SAME!! Sam ki baat hi kuch aur hai. 😳😳 Lol, we are drooling over someone who ain't even real. 😛


Lol! I know. But Poco's made him real. Man, she's an awesome writer and her OS is just out of this world!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out


Lol! I know. But Poco's made him real. Man, she's an awesome writer and her OS is just out of this world!😳


I so so so agree! You know?, I can talk about Poco's OS and Sam-Misha for the whole freakin day.. 😃 I love that OS much more than I love PKYEK. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701


I so so so agree! You know?, I can talk about Poco's OS and Sam-Misha for the whole freakin day.. 😃 I love that OS much more than I love PKYEK. 😳


Lol!! Ya she's going at a faster pace than the CVs😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys just gimme little more time. I'm out for some work I'll deffinately write for sure.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Author's tip :-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FqllUHJ5-VU listen to this when reading will give you da desired effect


Part 16
Last we read: Last part by akanksha

Misha looked at him, annoyed. ''Promise?''

His face broke into a smile, ''Promise.'' He extended his hand.

Misha looked at him, and sighed. She took his hand, and he led the way

the song changed Some what to Misha's displeasure but she being the "SPORT " took his hand And went onto the floor
But once the song started Misha's annoyance flew outta the window

Misha - OMG i just love this song


Baarish hai khayalon mein, sab dhul jaayega
Roshan rasta naya ik khul jaayega

Raj twirled Misha and dipped her and Misha was Amazed at her dancing skills...😆
On the other side kabir and Pia were constantly staring at eachother . Pia was amazed at how Kabir made her comfortable on the dance floor, twirling her and dipping her


Beh jaayega, tinka tinka kal ka silsila
Chalo mil jaayega aur ik haseen kaafila
Chalo dhoop ke makaan sa yeh hai safar
Dhalaan sa yeh mod meherbaan sa hai yeh
(if you believe sun is shining, love is finding your way)

Misha - (smiling) you know dude you dance pretty good ..(in the background Raj twirling and dipping Misha and giving his dimpled smile)

Raj- Thank you Thank you waise I have a pretty Dance partner You Look gorgeous girl..

Misha-(ermm so not like her😆 a blush creeping on her face ☺️) - thank you.... but Dude I never got to ask you your name Me Is Misha...
Raj- Raj . Naam toh suna hi hoga naa. pleasure meeting you Misha
Both Raj and Misha end up laughing on that naam toh suna hi hoga comment

Dhoop ke makaan sa yeh hai safar
Dhalaan sa yeh mod meherbaan sa hai yeh
(if you believe sun is shining, love is finding your way)

Chhat tapakti hai kabhi ehsaas ki
Yaad aati hai puraani pyaas ki
Par naye naye baadal baras kar jhoomte hain
Boondh ki ladiyon se maatha choomte hain
Kabir POV

Me- Know Dear you just have to let yourself loose Never underestimate yourself. you are very sweet and special Pia
Pia- Oh !!! Seriously Kabir all your cheesly lines will make me go beetroot red😳

Me- Oh hello !!! those are not cheesy lines these Are Kabir Rathore's originals😆
Pia - Ohk SO Mr. Original Rathore why don't you and Me the one and only Pia Jaiswal continue our dance
Me - Pia hmmm nice name😃 so is that your complete name????

Pia - npoes it's piashree , but Pia is just fine😃
thanks for making me feel comfortable here
Me - Always at your service m'aam *does a small bow and winks*

they both laugh😆

Dekhne ki yeh gadhi hai, ik nayi rut sang khadi hai
Baat chhoti par badi hai
Dhoop ke makaan sa yeh hai safar
Dhalaan sa yeh mod meherbaan sa hai yeh
(if you believe sun is shining, love is finding your way)
Dhoop ke makaan sa yeh hai safar
Dhalaan sa yeh mod meherbaan sa hai yeh
(if you believe sun is shining, love is finding your way)

Kitni unchi shaak pe khushiyon ke pal
Phir bhi kuhshboo todh li humne ucchal
Haan kaanch ka samaan de aur gir gaye hum
Jod kar khud ko banane phir gaye hum
Door dariya ke kinaare, zindagi karti ishaare
Aasman pe hai naye taare

And so the dances and talks continue

So guys bolo bolo how I wrote

lekha
Sorry if I over did the Raj and Misha bit just wanted to get into groove of writing
Edited by -Destiny- - 14 years ago
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i wanna jion too yaar n amazing idea!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
you wrote very well but i just realised theres no abhay anywhere lol guess we forgot about my fitty but im sure he will pop in somewhere to save pia but never the less very good
ps: whos writing next

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