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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Hey Nitina, thanks a lot. 😊 There is a seperate corner for pics and everything, but this kind of a group story is a first, and quite successful, tbh. =)

Monty, welcome to the forum. 🤗And.. sure, why not? =)

PS - People, I am gonna update the story tonight. If anyone's updating before that, you are free to go.

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Okay.. This story is left unfinished.. I guess we should get back together, right?

PART 14

Pia couldn't believe it. Her new best friend's family is the person her dad left her and her mum for. This guy saves her and annoys her at the worst and best times possible. This another guy for god-knows-what reason is behind her trying to embarass and rag her. Could this get any worse!?

Misha - ''Pia, the guests are here!'' (excitedly)

Pia turned around to see people in fancy dresses and confident smiles walking in. She suddenly felt out-of-place and looked nervous.

Misha - (Keeping a hand on Pia's shoulders) ''Are you okay, babe?''

Pia - (Nods) ''I'm fine Misha. It's just that...Look at all those people. And look at me. I don't belong here. I..Im from a small orphanage and all of these are from some big royal families.''

Misha was about to say anything when a man's voice interrupted. ''You can't look down on yourself like that. Being from a orphanage doesn't make you lower than them, it's you that matters. And your simplicity and perfect personality is what's making you the shining star tonight.'' He took her hand in his, and kissed it. Pia blushed.

Misha - (Taunting) ''KABIR! Where were you in the college, yaar? This is Pia. She joined the college today.''

Kabir didn't look like he was paying any attention to what Misha is saying. He just kept staring in Pia's eyes and that made her hesitate and look down. Kabir smiled and looked at Misha, ''What did you just say?''

Misha - (Shaking her head) ''Nothing, Kabir. Nothing.'' (Whispers in his ear) ''If you do anything aaltu-faaltu with Pia, trust me you'd find your bones in the graveyard tomorrow morning.''

Kabir - (Grins) ''Don't worry. I am not going to do anything.'' (Turns his attention back to Pia) ''Wanna dance?''

Pia - (Hesitates) ''I...I can..can't dance.''

Kabir - (Smiles warmly) ''Ofcourse you can. Just feel the rhythm.'' (Takes her hand and pulls her to the dance floor) ''Come on''

Pia tried to refuse but she had no choice. So she obliged and went along.

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

hya all its about time we got back to our adoori story lol but great a dance sequence between kabir and pia just what we need really good akanksha0701 by the way whats your real name and keep the good work up 😃😊😃

👏good work

Edited by Tahani01 - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Tahani01
hya all its about time we got back to our adoori story lol but great a dance sequence between kabir and pia just what we need really good akanksha0701 by the way whats your real name and keep the good work up 😃😊😃
👏good work

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I know, right? And thanks. =] I'm gonna PM and ask everyone to come back, now. My real name is Akanksha. 😳

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

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I know, right? And thanks. =] I'm gonna PM and ask everyone to come back, now. My real name is Akanksha. 😳

kool its so freaky me and kaheela were talking about this yesterday and wether anyone is updating or not its good that you did and very nice name in case you have not guessed my name is tahani well pm everyone and well carry on with the story k

xxx😊

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Tahani01
kool its so freaky me and kaheela were talking about this yesterday and wether anyone is updating or not its good that you did and very nice name in case you have not guessed my name is tahani well pm everyone and well carry on with the story k
xxx😊

I PMed Neethi and Ka7eela who were updating the story earlier.. And I asked everyone in the ATs to atleast go through this thread, once, and contribute. =]

And..Really? Wow. Freaky, indeed. 😆

I guessed your name. Not rocket science, really. 😆

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

I PMed Neethi and Ka7eela who were updating the story earlier.. And I asked everyone in the ATs to atleast go through this thread, once, and contribute. =]

i think more people should read this thread i mean humarah khoon pasina bahah hain sorry im

not really good at hindi but yeh more people should contribute

so carry on writing

xxx👏

And..Really? Wow. Freaky, indeed. 😆

I guessed your name. Not rocket science, really. 😆

Edited by Tahani01 - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
i think more people should read this thread i mean humarah khoon pasina bahah hain sorry im
not really good at hindi but yeh more people should contribute
so carry on writing
xxx👏

I know.. And I'll try my best to get more people. =]