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Posted: 14 years ago
okay..I'm going...😳 thanks chill_out..😳 😊

Abhay silently watched all of them as they danced. Raj and Misha were not exactly the dance together in each other's arms type, but they seemed to be having fun. But it was Kabir and Pia who he was most focused on. Why was Pia enjoying Kabir's attention so much? Was it because she was just like any other girl, glad to be in the arms of one of the hottest guys in college? Or because well, Kabir seemed to treat Pia a lot better than he did.

Finally Abhay could take it no longer. He just walked up to Kabir and Pia. Pia was, to his immense displeasure, lost. No one had been this sweet to her before...so uncomplicated, without ever wondering whether it had any double meaning. And yet Abhay felt the desire to wrench her away from her happiness and simply take her into his arms..for he wanted to yell at her that he could offer her a heaven with such unbridled passion that she would be shocked by hte intensity of it. And yet he was scared...

Finally he simply told Pia, 'may i dance?' Pia nodded, giving Kabir a 'I'll be back soon' look. Kabir smiled at Pia and scowled at Abhay.

They danced awkwardly, and yet their steps were synchronized to each other. They created a magic, it was hard to say they hadn't practiced, if it wasn't for the shyness on their faces-Abhay's hesitation, and Pia's confusion.

okay..i wrote a bit too much it seems..do tell me if there are any loopholes..I'm a late latif here..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
can i be the next one plsssssssssssssssss???
n indigo blues amazing yaar muahh
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Posted: 14 years ago
now lengthy update yaar amazingly written
u r such an amazing writer dear muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Megu yaar awesoome job sweety

Dolly jii please do write
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Posted: 14 years ago
@IndigoBlues: Awesome update! Hayyee!! Finally, you gave Abhay back to us!

@dolly: Itna poochha mat karo! Dill ki suno! Waiting for your update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
re for update
(sorry mum dad k saath jana pada but will update before episode hopefully)
*edited*
NEXT PART>>
by abhay>>
"am i really feeling shy?? W*H?? n why am i dancing with this girll??"
"well i am dancing with her coz i hated her dancing with that kabir brat.. but why did i hate her dancing with him?? who is she to me??"
well i was thinking all these bizzare thought but major part of me was lost in her eyes her brown eye.. the warmth of them had taken me completely... they seemed to be saying soo much to me..
so much that my own thoughts were hardly making any sense too me..
ughh abhay what the hell r u saying???
abhay="u r beautiful"
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by pia>>
pia="what???"
abhay="no nothing ignore i am not in my right mind sorry"
"did i actually said yes to dance with him?? well i had no other option did i??he asked me in front of everyone , i didnt say yes coz i wanted to touch him ... or did i???.PIA JAISWAL just shut up n concentrate on ur dance rather then ur stupid thoughts .. lest u end up stepping on this obnoxious jerk's foot n he starts screaming for every one to see"
"but still arent his grey eyes way too hynotic???"
n his hands are firm too the way he is making me dance, its amazing , n his lips too..."
"PIAAAAAAAAA shut uppppppppppp.. n just dance n get this over with "
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they both kept on circling each other in such graceful moves that everyone at the party was left self bound n self consious.. the whole dance floor was cleared,, just the two of them were dancing now .. the last ones to get of the floor had been misha n raj ... well they were giving abhay n pia tugh fight but then too exited misha stood on raj's foot n sent him shouting on the top of his viose..
the dj changed the song to the racy number og karthik calling kartik..
uff teri adaa
pia n abhay changed the tempo of their dance without even noticing .. abhay twirled n lifted n swirled pia on the song's tune .. it looked like a dance rehersed for months ...
abhay n pis still couldnt understand their feelings for each other.. when they had first met no one could have said they will be dancing so close to each other within a day ...
well the ways of fate were strange wern't they???
n then everything changed in mere few second
a strange crashing sound ,,, n the chandelier fell on the spot where abhay n pia were dancing just a sec ago..
in the mist of shattered glass n smoke issuing from the chandelier no one was able to see anything..
the accident had happened soo fast n had left everyone so shocked...
kabir= Piyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
AS if kabir's shreik made everyone cum back to their senses they all reeled n moved forward towards the broken chandelier... all dreading too see broken bodies of two of their fello students underneath it..
but they didnt ..
abhay n pia were standing few paces away from the broken glass peices ...n were safe.. pia looked shaken but unhurt,, abhay looked his usual nopn intersted self
how they got there was anyones guesss....
Edited by dolly18 - 14 years ago
IndigoBlues thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks everyone!!! 😃 😳

Dolly..waiting for your update..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks hun writing that only hee hee
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated guys its cliched buttt well hee hee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dolly, Indigoblues, such awesome parts!! 🤗🤗

Ahaa, I love jealous Abhay! And Dolly, the breaking chandelier was the BEST part of your update..And ofcourse, Pia and Abhay's hesitation yet unmatchable chemistry. 😳


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