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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy...
nyc update.. liked it....
geet is misunderstanding maan..........
hope the reports are fake..... ( im having a feeling that its related to brij...)
feeling bad for maan..
continue soon.....


love,,
Adeena.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Geet : lay down for few mins she was not at all able to sleep .."where is he ?" all bad thoughts came in her mind ..should i trust those eyes or , meera didi's mother in law.she recall every thing

on other hand Maan was reading her diary .he was lost in her words

one sorrow

Between

My life and

Death

There is just one

Sorrow

Called

Living

Maan: why she has that much of pain ? he turn other page

Of all the fears,

I have known the worst,

To live a life,

Pretending i am alive

And fake a smile,

When all the that surrounds

Is nothingness


Maan could not take it more he closed the diary and kept it in his drawer .. he walked too the window

Geet: i will right now leave him "it is enough i cannot be a burden on him just for nothing" wrap a shawal around her ..walk out of the main bedroom

she stop at the door for few sec ...then walked out .. she open the main door with out any noise ..walk to the gate.. it was chilly cold out side. there was lighting " i have made up my mind now i will not change "

Gate keeper : who is this ?

Geet: i am geet open gate

Gate keeper :madam where are you going ?

Geet; i just want..

Gate keeper ; i will wake driver you go with him

Geet: no i just want to walk ...

Gate keeper: ok i will come with you

Geet: you guard i will come in 10 min

Gate keeper: sir will scold me

Geet; i will tell him she walked out

Maan: i she must be worried ....he check time it was 12:30 ..he walk to room it was dark he lay down ... he was restless .."i am ill-rude with her " he turn or her side whisper "Geet" he didnot got any response . "ok i am sorry " he try to search her . found her site empty ..he turn on light " Geet" . he jump up ..he quickly walk to washroom" i am idiot i know she is sick even then i am doing this to her " he search for her in whole home where she could be ..his cell rang

Maan: yes ?

Gate keeper: sir it is raining madam gone for walk 1/2 hour back .

Maan: what? he ran out

Gatekeeper : sir i stop her

Maan: why you didnot call me ?

Gate keeper : she said she will tell you?

Maan: call driver nakual.. he called Jay

JAY: was asleep "is bhabi fine"

Maan: yar she left home in this rain.

JAY: wait i am coming..

Pari: what happen ?

JAY : dono pagal ha ...bhabi left home

Pari: she said she will not be a burden on Maan bhai

JAY: you knew that

Pari: i thought they will manage it..

JAY: you ..he walk out Pari followed him

Maan: "she doesn't know a single place here" he drive out

Driver sir

Maan: you go on east side i will find her west

JAY called where are you?

Maan: i am on west side of home

JAY:ok i will search on there side

Maan: closed the call ..he drive it was raining cats and dog plus lighting " i will not leave you"

Geet: walk for 20 mins it started raining " why it started raining?"she stand under a tree it was dark only street light ..."beta listen to him" her papa's voice echo in her ear..."what i have done i should go back ? he always supported me " how he fill her maang..in front of world .,how he fought for her with her uncle?


she started walking back to home. it was raining heavily

Maan: drive on other side "why you are doing like this ?"

Jay: called "i cannot find her lets report to police "

Maan:" ok as you say "

Jay: why you are losing hope ?

Maan: what to do ? she does not understand my love .

Jay: she loves you alot she just feel you don't love her.

Maan: how you know ?

Jay: pari told me ..lets go to police station..

Maan: ok

Gate keeper: called

Maan: what?

Gate keeper :"sir madam is back"

Maan:hit the brake " i am coming " i he inform JAY

Jay: i told you

Maan: hmmm he reached home ..

Geet: walk to washroom to change her wet clothes , she was feeling ashame of her act, as nakul told her she Maan has gone to search her.

Maan: walk in ..knocked at door

Geet; coming

Maan: open at once

Geet: aik min

Maan: you open

Geet: feel a strange kind of pain in his voice .she open

Maan: pull her out " what do you think of your self?"

Geet: kept quiet...

Maan: do you have any idea ,how much you scared me?

Geet: looked down as his eyes was making her nervous


Maan: i am asking you something

Geet:" i daily think our relation is a burden "

Maan:: " why you didnot asked me?"

Geet: jee woh

Maan: pull her more close " what you were thinking you were up to?"

Geet: i was..paused

Maan: then why you came back?

Geet; looked at him

Maan: tell me what should i do to prove my love ?

Geet: jee

Maan: few things are felt not prove , my every action does not show you i love you.

Geet; looked at him ...

Maan: " if any thing happened to you i would never forgive my self "

Geet: sorry Hug him

Maan: hug her back " i love you and you are my life i will die without you do you get that"

Geet: was crying hug him more tightly

Maan: i should cry but you are crying here.. cupped her face

Geet; aunty said you married me ..

Maan : stop her saying other word....K* her

He showed her with his every action how much he loved her. she let him conquer her both showed each other how much they love.

to be cont ... i hope i am not bold ..i manged it decently

picture By Dimple Kaur

poetry by (by S M R) and (by FK)

do comment and tell me did you enjoined there reunion
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
God, finally They confessed their love. loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome superb fantastic update naddiya
finally They confessed their love.
loved the update
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay altast geet confronted maan that she thinks that he probaly thinks she's a burden and double Woop they confessed their love now want to see the 3 or 4 (including the mum) chudhails reaction to this lol anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally they confessed their love i am so happy 😳😳😳😳 now she would hav understood that she s not burden to him 😊😊😊
i really loved ur update but i am really worried abt ending 😲😲😲😲😲
ur really very good writer 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome....really loved it
great one and do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally confession done... loved it nadiyya...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww finally love confession, but maan should had let her tell truth.

any way, very much nicely wrrten.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear
but i dont have any idea about this ff
so i will definetely go through it when i will get time
thanks for pm and do pm me whenever u will update.

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