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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok I'm so sorry for not posting and catching up quickly (holding ears), but soon I'll be up to date!!

Part 53: Awwww this was so chweet…chweet beyond believe: Sirf Is janam ke liye nahin'Har Janam ke liye mera jawaab HAAN hi rahega Maan…my favorite line and the chapter just started…high hopes darling!!!!

Change of name….such a spectacular event…nicely down and love how you penned down all of Geet's feelings….she found paradise in him and with him…oh man lord have mercy…this keeps getting better and better!!! All those snaps were lovely….picture perfect!!! AWWW!! He gets mad and she gives in….snap for the kisses, especially the one on the lips…loved it to death!!!

YAYYYYYYY!!! Valentine's Day….nice!!! And Dadi's jungle joke was super cute! I'm so glad you're keeping the lighter moments between all the characters…the nok jokhs are super chweet!!!

DTPH scene…sweet…loved it! I wish this was a real story, I would love to see for real w/the actors and all!!! Poor Geet and closure….reliving the rejection from the 1st proposal….so depressing, but still love how he keeps giving her those hints! Maan is so emotional, but I guess he still needs the closure! Still I kind of found it weird it still left an impact in his heart even though both are married….so glad Geet understands him !!!!

Ha ha ha!! Dadi listening to their conversation…she's so funny!!! She's goes to sleep and the scene changes…love her!!! AHHH!!! I loved their filmy lines and everyone looking at them….I told you the other day I'm not into all this filmy stuff, but this scene was so chweet…even I had tears…melodrama at its best is effing awesome!!!

The reenactment of the proposal scene was beautiful! I loved Maan's line that I took one step forward and you took 2 back…so effing true, but so glad both taking the same steps number of steps and that too in the same direction!

Loved the tension you created after Maan says "insanely and irrevocably in love" and then you write how Geet "agreed to the charges" and Meer and Yash in BG watching them move to the edge of their seats…it's only gonna get better and more intense….lovin' the modd of the whole scenario!!!!

Maan's inner thoughts on how he needed closure: truly brilliant. I loved how he says Geet didn't act careless or confuse to his turmoil and closure…and then when he says he'll never really get closure in the rejection of the proposal…felt to sad, but love how you ende d it.."cope with her love"…..uff…truly magical!!!

OMG! I loved how he can't get her and her words out of his mind….this line made me giggle like a teenage school girl: Tum jahan bhi ho, abhi mere saamne aa jao, samji? OMG!! This is so ridiculously cute and adorable and sweet!!!!

Pool scene: I just started to read it and I'm already loving it!!! Everything in the pool is white…white is so my favorite color!! No really it is, but I love all the whiteness b/c it represents pureness and clarity!!! I'm so glad Geet finally gets a chance to show him her love…all thos times I was mad at her….finally, this is the scene for the ultimate redemption!!!!

For me these two lines were the highlight of the whole chapter: She had changed with my love and that drove me to want to find out what more changes I could bring in her. If my love knew no bounds then would she be endless and boundless too. Love this to death!!! If his love had to limitations then she would not be limited or bounded….what a thought, what beautiful, meaningful words…can not get enough of this! Kissing…so much of it…THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! You know how much I love physically contact!!! And thank you (NOT!) for always keeping it 13+!! LOL!!!

Both in the pool…..YAY!!!!....she blew air into his mouth….that's gotta be the sweetest thing ever!!! And then the cherry on top..hot chocolate! Which reminds…I need some right now!!! It's become his favorite now….awwwwwww!!! Love how he sometimes calls her mishti….I can't decide if I like Mishti or Shona more…both super duper cute!!!! He finally gets the same love that he has always had for her!!!!!

Amazing way to end it : where she ended and I began'it was a seamless union…finally….can't believe it took this long, but they got there! It's the point where both become one…no one has the upper hand, no one feels broken, and there's nothing but immense love and union between the two!! Loved this part, especially the ending!!! Hubby-wifey….kitna cute hai na dono!!! Now time for bed….I know I'm gonna have amazing dreams…thanks a bunch for this!! You always manage to bring a smile to my face and I truly needed that today!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Anybody online? Can someone tell me what do I call a saree pallu in hindi?

Please I'm sure there is a much better word than pallu...😭 PM me the answer.


Thanks people. I got two responses and it covers.
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement


Anybody online? Can someone tell me what do I call a saree pallu in hindi?

Please I'm sure there is a much better word than pallu...😭 PM me the answer.


Thanks people. I got two responses and it covers.



Dear, it's Pallu only.. In south we call Pallu as "Munthaani"...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pallu is also called Aanchal in hindi.
Generally during roka ceremony, baby shower ceremony, during pooja's elders usually ask ki apna aanchal aage karo and the women keep the gifts there momentarily.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update soon Hasini!!

i'm guessing there will be a scene where he holds her pallu ;) lOL
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: febinyusuff



Dear, it's Pallu only.. In south we call Pallu as "Munthaani"...

Pallu or Palav!
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Posted: 14 years ago




....sattika palav.... sexy it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Song is Khamoshiyan from Movie - One 2 Ka 4
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ww7vfCnll2Q&feature=fvw=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Song is Khamoshiyan from Movie - One 2 Ka 4
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ww7vfCnll2Q&feature=fvw=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Kuch ankhahi baatein....
Kuch ansune iraade....
Kya kahoon mere dil ko...
Bas kho gayi....mein uski....ahaton mein..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement


Anybody online? Can someone tell me what do I call a saree pallu in hindi?

Please I'm sure there is a much better word than pallu...😭 PM me the answer.


Thanks people. I got two responses and it covers.


Aanchal

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