Part 54 Mystry – Demystified.: Very Very Intriguing Title!!!! I love how you started it with her watching him sleep! That's so cute and then he catches her!!! He asks her if they have a sickness…he stares at her at night and she stares at him in the morning…what an awesome martial ritual!!
I really like Geet's new attitude of showering Maan with all her love…nice!!! Me likes…me likes a lot!!!
The sharing of tea….awww!! I can't wait for the camping trip…finally get to read about it…super busy today and now I finally get my chance!! Ok so Maan just said this sin't their honeymoon…hmmmm!!! Newlywed couple in an isolated place all by themselves…sounds like honeymoon territory to me! LOL!!! Actually I don't mind another get away! WHOA!! Cherrapunji….I have never heard of this place….time to google it…..and I'm back…WOW…it looks so pretty!!!
The way you described the air and sights of Cherrapunji seems like you've been there!!! AHHHH!!! I loved how she runs her hand through his hair and he protests it….Geet is becoming so strong and flirty day in and day out….def didn't expect her to tell him I never want you to let me go…..love her!!!
I love the song part where she recites it back to him…that's super cute! And now the camping begins! WOW! The realization she has was super deep…I love this line a lot: The truth that came to me was profound for it was not my realization and this very place had given it to me that I was tiny, small and that my problems didn't mean anything to all that lay infront of me….so immensely true…we're all so tiny and so are the problems and our daily tensions compared to the magnificent marvels in this world created by the man upstairs…really puts life in perspective!!!!
OMG! Loved the description of the mountain, the color of the water, the butterflies and trees….makes me feel like I was there! And then the mud fight…def wish I was in the story so I could see this! Sounds like so much fun!
OMEFFING GOD!!! Shirtless and in the water and kisses…that was so good...no wait…that was fan-effin'-tastic!!! Ha ha ha…the "hisab kitab" was such a treat to read…made me giggle!!! Love all the re-countings of when they fell for each other and when they wanted each other…my heart melted…so real and natural and the best thing is that both are lying next to each other in nature…with no fakeness around them, no show, nothing artificial….only the purest and most natural environment! And everything comes back to a full circle….every action of theirs was done keeping the other in mind…all this time I kept playing the blame game…these 2 did everything for the sake of the other….so beautiful!!! BTW: Love the kiss after almost every little confession!! Totally an amazing finishing touch!
The finally kiss at the end was to die for!!! The clouds cleared and the moon beamed at them…like a sign from above…the ultimate perfect couple!! The title is so damn beautiful, especially in Maan's final monologue….it was just them and nothing else…no worries, no errands, no sense of time….just the essence of being one!! I loved it to death!! OMG!! So much kissing…YAY!! Def not complaining in this department….you're slowly becoming a romance writer…unbuttoning shirts and bare backs…you naughty naughty girl!!! LOL!!! Can't wait to read the next part!!! Hope this camping trip never ends!!!
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Mangal Lakshmi
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