FF-manet***ESOTERIC LOVE*** Thread 1 - Page 83

Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

oh god...now i seriously can tell maan doesnt deserve her...i want nakusha to dump him on d day of engagement want some nice and super rich and powerfull and hot(more than maan but not dutta...how abt iqbal khan) to sweep geet of her feet and make dat nakusha fall fr dat guy...dis will be a double dose fr maan...hate him hate him...dis is d first time i dont want maan and geet to gether.....geet deserves some one better...she is very beautiful dan dat nakusha...ahhhhh maan is getting on my nerves...pls no maan and geet...bring her a nice hot and powerfull guy fr her...

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

IQBAL KHAN!!!! GR8 CHOICE YAAR!!!!!!!

I am with iqubal khan
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Originally posted by: Hina.khanxxx

Hey keyama,
hummari neend udakar khud chain se soo rahi ho? Nahiiii.......
Hehehehe... Just kidding...
Thank u so much fr d updates & pm, it was gud, luv ur writting skills u r amazing... I use 2 read ur fic updates more den 3times but this update i just read 1cs, it was like gulping karelay ka juice. Vry hard 2 digest... Anyways dear i knw u allready planned d story & u writting according to ur plans, but just i want u 2 add not all but atleast few points of dis
1)geet shud take over handa industry & shud reach heights of success.
2)maan's dad shud nvr frgive maan fr chossing nakku & leaving geet, b'coz he insulted his father's dairy.& shud xplain wat true luv is...
3)maan shud realise & shud b sry wat he has done, geet parents tuk care of maan more than geet, his happiness was more imp 2 them rather than geet's, just maan shud'nt miss his mom they hav done so much 2 him,
4)nakku shud leave maan for sum moddling assignment.
5) their shud b a new ntry in geet's life more hot,rich,handsum, all d qualities maan has he shud hav,
6)dat new ntry in geets life must b geets rival, their shud b a little nok jhok b/w them, which reminds maan abt his past wid geet, the way they use 2 fite,
7)in all d above course of time geet shud nt giv bhav 2 maan, but she shud b in front of him.
8)there shud be sum party in which geet & new ntry shud dance like khurba hua, & i want maan 2 b jealous.
9)maan shud realise & cum back 2 geet.
Mai issay ziyada maan ko nahi tadpa sakti. Dats it.
Plz plz plz plz keyama kuch aisa karo na i vl b happy.

Luv
Hina.

toward the end i really really started liking it crazinly.. very nice... very nice.... update soon dear.....

part 29

Dadi: Geet beta...
Geet: ji Dadi...
Dadi: have you hard about Armaan and ridzys engagement?
Geet nearly choked... "really!"
Dadi: ha... And
Dad: and we want you and Duttas engagement at the same day.
Geet looks at her...
Geet: yea... What about Dutta?
Dadi: is up to you. I will not force you.
Geet: it's ok Dadi. I am off from maan... I am pure free sexy HOT girl.
Dadi laughs at her.
Geet: but I am sure you planning to make me fat.
Dadi laughs louder...
Geet looks at her self in the mirror.
Geet: Dadi I still have the charm to make any boy FIda on me.
Dadi laughs... "who said you haven't?"
Geet: I want to see Dutta...
Dadi kisses her forehead... Meri Pari bachi....


In the office next day...
Nakusha walks in...
Naku: to hamara handsom dudes ka mood khrav hi?
Maan jumps out of his thought... No! Umm... You?
Naku: ha... Oh actually I need to go to Bombay tonight. I have a show to attend. Wondering if you would like to join.
Maan: I will delay all my meeting.
That made Nakus day. She was just too happy. Hugged him tight. Knew how busy he is. He hardly get to spend anymore time with his family. And appointment.... For clients... It takes them months. She loves him allot.

Geet was laughing her way in with armaan and ridZy. They did everything as possible to make her happy.... But it always seems to disappear when she sees maan... Specially with nakusha.

Nakusha was waiting in the hall... Talking to mum.
Geet, Ridzy and Armaan walks in.
Mum: here comes geet.
All three smiles there way in.
Nakusha: hi...
Geet: hi. She forced her self to smile. There was a certain jerk of pain that covered her heart. She was dreading that moment. She just wanted to run in her room lock the door and scream her hearts out.
Geet: I am bit tirade mum. They made me do so much work...
Ridzy: no we haven't!
Geet: yea all the tent up! Etc... I am the one who have done them.
Mum laugs...
Dadi walks in... : you are here at last.
Geet: ku? Ka hua Dadi?
Dadi: come with me to the kitchen.
Geet: oh no! Mummmmmm..... Tell Dadi na.... Not to fed me this much I will get fat.
Mum pushes her in the kitchen...
Mum: Ridzy did she eat anything?
Ridzy: not much!
Geet give her a glare: you are all planning to make me fat. I know your little mischief plan. Everyone walks in to the kitchen... Laughing. Leaving nakusha...

Nakusha stood there thinking how lucky she is. Mum Dadi and dad.... Never stop talking about her... And everyone care so much for her. Her family is not like that at all. She is the only daughter. And her dad is busy 24 hours. She have no mum...

She smiled...
Maan: let's go!
Nakushha: ha...
Maan: what happen?
Naku: Geet. She is so lucky.
Maan looks round for a glimpse.
Naku: she is in the kitchen. Everyone is trying to force her to eat.
Maan remembers the kitchen time where he always used to eat food from her mouth.... He snaps out.....
Maan: I probably gave her the habits of not eating. He smiles... That was the first time in 2 years he smiled properly....
Nakusha: you smiled. That's so sweet...
Maan gave her a look and walked out...

Next day... Maan was back in the evening... Finds the mansion empty.... He passes the whole then the living room.... Finds Geet watching telly... Laughing her head off.
Maan looked at the telly... Watching hangover!!! Maan rolled his eyes and walked off to get freshen up... Geet didn't realize.

Maan comes down. Geet still laughing. He walks to the kitchen... It was so weird herring her voice... He haven't hard her for 2 years... Not near him.

He observes her for while... She still didn't realized that he was standing there.
Geet eyes suddenly falls on him... Finding him staring at her. She didn't like that.
Geet: do you need anything? She was normal. Like nothing happen between them... Everything was fine... And that's what she wanted to act like. She wanted to forget him. Soon as possible.
Maan: no! Nothing! Thanks for saving me other day from Dadi.
Geet: it's ok. She just haven't realized we have moved on.
Maan: can we be good friend again?
Geet: I thought we were.
Maan: but you don't talk to me as much.
Geet: we are grown up maan. We are not child anymore. We are busy all the time. Tell me about you and nakusha? Have you fixed your marriage yet?
Maan was taken back... She was talking about naku...
Maan: umm... Yes. Next year.
Geet: that's good.

Next: another silent cry….

OMG JUST ANOTHER 10 PAGES OF LOVELY LONG COMMENTS…. AHHHHHHHH I AM GOING MAD. I LOVE U ALLL SO MUCH FOR ALL THOSE LOVELY COMMENTS…. well here u go more parts coming up :D

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Everybody suggesting guy 4r geet...!!!lol... So i think hw abt Arjun singhania(karan kundra)...... He smwhere resmble maan alot.......

Res

OMG poor geet... I am gusing Naku is positive. She sounds... Well we need more.
Anyway. Amazing update.
Can't belive maan. Can we be good friend? Ehh... Sure why not. Seriously why's wrong with him? He was in bed with her mostly every night.
Poor Geet. I feel for her.
Amazing update we want more please.
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nice update
thanks for this one.....
plz update next one and as early as possible.......

loved it ..but this time the silent cry should be maan..he deserves it for giving pain to geet..

ur story is the best and i was look forward to them. thanks for the real quick updates:)