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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

great FF.. love it!

con't soon!

i hope u end ur other FF's properly plzz!

and don't forget about animosity!


i will end it properly hun… dw… and animosity have long way to go. no where near ending :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
woow your ff when you read one and say wow the other one is more wow you should write books you will be successful writer
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuyuun13

woow your ff when you read one and say wow the other one is more wow you should write books you will be successful writer


haha 😆 u r crazy book and me. lol. my grammar is so crap.
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 6


Maan shouts: I am not going in her room. It's so messy all the time.
Dad: just knock.
Maan: umm! That was the first time ever he knocked on her door... Usually he will just budge in.
Geet: when did you learn to knock?
Maan: dad told me to knock.
He sits on her bed.
Maan impressed: owo it's tidy for once.
Geet: yea... I got bored of messing everything up.
Maan laid on her bed... Looking at the window... His head upside down. "I don't want to go... That sammera always demands something."
Geet looks at her self like all the girls usually do... "how do I look?"
Maan: good.
Geet throughs a pillow at him... "you haven't even looked at me yet..."
Maan: I don't have to....
Geet: what do you mean?
She pulls him up.
Maan: it saies in the dairy... The one you love you don't have to look at them to see how beautiful they are... You just know!
Geet: aww your dad is so sweet.
Maan: actually it's my mum.
Geet: we still didn't managed to sneak out!
Maan: you chicken out all the time.
Geet: what?
Maan: yes... You were refusing for past one year. We are nearly 14 now!
Geet: yea! Yea!
Dad: are you 2 ready?
Sammera fuming seeing Maan on geets bed...

Everyone walks out...

Sam: what's wrong with you?
Maan: what have I done?
Geet: why were you crying?
Sam: you two were .... under same spread... On the bed together.
Geet and maan: umm... So!
Sam: you two are growing up...
Geet: umm... So! We always sleep together... And anyway I always push him to the floor so technically we don't sleep together.
Sam roles her eyes... Frustrated... There was no point of arguing as this two was not willing to understand anything.

Day went miserably for sammera... Maan and geet just won't stop... They held hand.. Went to rides together... Hugged kissed.... And I was his GF!

Dad: well beta.. Hop you gyes enjoyed the day.
Maan: thank you dad. It was lovely.
Dad: you 2s birthday is soon.... Anything special you two wanted to do?
Geet: this birthday is not special.
Maan: why?
Geet: I won't miss you.
Maan: why?
Geet: it says in the diary... He was way... So she missed him... But you are here with me. So I won't miss you.
Dad was bit surprised because he was planning to send Maan and geet to some boarding school for two years... Separate... Just to make them realize the real life... Maybe bit more mature.

Dad didn't say a word. After coming back home he spoke to everyone.
Dadi agreed... Mum refuges...
Mum: they are still baby!
Dad: I think we avoided enough.
Mum: still...
Dadi: it's only two years.
Dad: exactly. Maan needs to grow up.... along with geet he also becoming a child. He needs to understand everything. All this business everything... He have to look after one day.
Mum: please let them enjoy there childhood. nun of them could stay a second way from one another and you thinking about separating them...
Dadi: we are not separating them...
Dad: sammera was crying today. Miserably. You know the truth about Maan and sammera... There future were fixed by her mother before even they were born.
Mum nodes because she knew well how much Maan and geet were close... They were young but still shares a deep relationship... There innocent love is so pure.... Hop kicko buri nazar na lage....

Geet crying her eyes out in maans embrace... Maans room was covered with tissue.... Mum dad and dadi walks in....
Sammera stood at the back extremely happy...

Maan: stope smirking sammera.
Geet: stupid. I don't want her to be your GF anymore. Choose a different girl.
Maan: I will.
Sam: Dutta is here.
Dutta comes in...
Dutta tries to comfort geet but maan snatches... He always made sure no one touches his geet. It's only his...
Dutta not surprised because that's what it was happening for past 3-4 years....
Mum and dad always ignores this type of behavior... They knew well once they grow up this will disappear....

Dutta: at least let me comfort her. She is my GF.
Maan: it's not in the list!
Dutta: you and your stupid list.
Maan: don't call are list stupid.
Dutta: well it is.

Mum dad and dadi walks out... Leaving there silly arguments to them self...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hehehe
omg omg omg wait before i indulge myself - wat u mean bout maan n sameera - excuse me?????? sam's mum had them fixed already - or u mean maan's mum? and wats sam doing round their house neway - n excuse moi but no 1 dares calls their lsit stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha its sooo funny how maan n geet wen were little were like soo comfy with fact that they willl be mr n mrs khurana when older yet they have own bf n gf - wait wait they are goin according to the diary of mr n mrs khurana right - so dnt tell me - they are following in naksha kadam of them - hahahahaha oh deary meeeeeeeeeeeeeee - hmmmmm
boarding school eh!!! so they will miss each other!!! n learn of their luv for each other - interestingggggggggg
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol...Loved the Update
Hehe Maaneet are so cute..
They are going to boarding school separately..hmm
But lovedd the update..They are sooo adorable..hehe
Continue soon dear!!
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was Sooo sweet. Amazing. Loving it. Haha love maan. It's only his geet. Lol.
I am in Sooo love with them
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan and geet are so funny 😆 😆........ i like how they say........no hug......bc its not on list........no kiss.........bc its not on list..........no touching.........bc its not on list.......... so what exactly is on list anyway 🤣 🤣............ poor maan n geet 🥺........... but then separation from ur love.....make love even more strong 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow choo chweet, i love their bonding, most cute part maan fightin wit dutta 4 her,plz let us knw hw many parts u'll update, plz plz plz update more

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