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Posted: 14 years ago

part 7


Geet: are list is not stupid.
Maan agrees with geet.
Dutta: I just don't understand you 2. When you 2 will grow up.
Maan: she is.
Dutta: geet! he shouts her name....
Maan: shut up. And don't you dare shout at her. Just leave before I punch you again.
Dutta gets irritated.

Geet slept in maans room again as usual... Maan walks out to talk to dad...

Far as maan and geet were concern they were going to the same boarding school after there 14th birthday.

Dad: Maan this might be surprising to you. I know you are more mature then Geet. I hop you can explain this to her.
Maan: yes dad.
Dad: you two will be going in two different school.
Maan: what? He didn't like that at all.
Dad: it's only for two years. You 2 will be back together when you are 16.
Maan: no! But...
Dad: please beta.

Maan closed his eyes. Dad knew well he will never disobeys his wish but geet only listens to him.

maan walks to his room finds geet sleeping.

He laid next to her...

Midnight... Maan again on the floor...
Maan: GEET!
Geet: sone do na...
Maan: ugh... He snatches the pillow.... Actually good... I won't be kicked out of my own bed anymore.
Geet: what?
Maan: nothing...

Next day... Maan wasn't sure at all how he will start... He was petrified. Geet probably will start crying again.

Maan: geet...
Geet: what is it?
Maan: umm... Promise me you won't be angry!
Geet: promise....


Geet haven't spoken to Maan for 1 week now... She have packed everything...
Maan felt guilty....
It's just before there 14th birthday.....

Mum: we are meeting up at holidays!
Maan: mum tell her to talk to me now.
Mum: geet...
Maan wasn't happy at all...
Geet: mum tell him I will see him after two years and then I will talk to him.
Maan: fine do that. ....Don't call me.
Geet: I won't.
Maan: I am taking the diary.
Geet: no I am.
Maan: no.. I am.
Mum: what diary?
Geet: umm...
Maan: umm...
Geet gives Maan a glare...
Maan: nothing mum... It's just a diary... Fine you take it...

Both runs off....

One year have passed...............................................................................................

Maan and geet haven't spoken a single word to one another... Maan always came back on holiday but geet refused. She was really angry. Extremely angry at maan. He trapped her in this two years mess. And she hated it.
Geet still was with Dutta and maan with sammera... There relationship seems to work well.
Sammera loved the holidays as there was no geet. She tried her best to seduce him. which didn't work.

Summer vacation 2 weeks.

Maan sat in his room... Missing geet. He tried to call her she refused to answer.
Sam walks in and sits next to him... Holds hand.
Sam: are you missing her?
Maan nodes.
Sam: don't. She talks to Dutta everyday.
Maan: I know.
Sam: how?
Maan: she told me before we left. That she will call him everyday but not me.
Sam: just ignore her.
Maan nodes
Sam: let's go out to movie.
Maan: yea sure.

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Posted: 14 years ago

1st again

thankkkkkkkkkkkk u soooooo much for the double update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmmmmmm im not likin sameeraaaaaaaaaa anymore!!!!!!!
n maan actually missin geet - awwwwwwwwww i bet shes goin thru this plight toooooo
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh.......... poor maan 😭............ i dont like sameera and dutta 😡....... can u fix sameera with dutta .......... they r so kabab mein hadi for maan-geet........ one question did maan mom fix maan and sameera rishta........before she die?????😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow funny comedy i love how they attachment strong than anything maverlous pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am loving this lol.
So good. Basicly they flowing the diary.
OMG u r amazing. Poor them. Loving it
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 8


Dutta: when are you coming?
Geet: next year.
Dutta: why you taking all maans anger on me?
Geet: you lot probably be the reason we are not together.
Dutta: geet...
Geet: yes.
Dutta: I am hating your stupid ego.
Geet: don't call my ego stupid.
Dutta: why you punishing me?
Geet: where is maan?
Dutta: he went to see a film with sam!
Geet: what?

She cuts the call straight way... And calls Ridzy...

Geet: can you spy on Maan.
Ridzy: what?
Geet: I am paying you. So stop asking me to many Q.
Ridzy: ok! Ok!
Geet: and take that stupid armaan with you.
Ridzy: I am so not taking him with me.
Geet: Ridzy! She shouts...

Sam and maan was watching film... She puts her hand round his... Ridzy on the phone...
Ridzy: geet... She is putting her hand round his.
Geet: thanks.
Geet Texas Maan... "why sammeras hand round yours?" rule broken number 1. Just wait till I am with Dutta.
I hate you.

Maan looks at the tex bit surprised and shocked. He looks round. Pitch black. He removes his hand from hers... Sam annoyed.

Maan sat there making a big distance from sam. Whatever he will do with her... Geet will do it with Dutta and he defiantly can't let that happen. Last time he punched Dutta in anger because he kissed her cheek. Geets cheek was only for maans lips. No one els. Maan thought: "god this diary making us insane." All this rules maans parents made. But the punch wasn't. He just punched him out of something.

Sam: why you moving so far way.
Maan: umm...
Maan shows her the tex.

Ridzy: he is showing her your tex.
Maan gets another tex...

Geet: "now you showing her the tex!" breaking are second rule. You break one more rule. You can forget are friendship. I wasn't talking to you for two years... You break one more promise ... It will turn in to rest of are LIFE.

Maan gets scared... Extremely scared. He can't stay a second without her. Only he knows how his 1 years have passed...

Maan checked his inbox... They texe one another like 1000 tines a day. All maans pocket money goes on texing geet.

Another tex from geet... "that includes texing. I will stop it completely."

Maan walks out of the cinema. Sam flows then Ridzy and armaan...
Sam tries to hold his hand.
Maan: don't touch me.
Sam: why?
Maan: rule book.
Sam: you still flow that stupid rule book.
Maan: I promised geet.
She tries to cuddle up on his arm... Maan slides way.

Ridzy: OMG sam and him...
Geet: sam and him what?
Ridzy: they came out of the film and now in the empty hall alone.
Geet: thats it. Had enough.
Geet calls maan...

Maan surprised and extremely happy... She called him in a year...

Maan: you have called me...
Geet: to let you know I permanently cancel are rule book that Is made by your mum and dad. You broke all three rules. That's mean are friendship is over.
Maan: but I only broke two!
Geet: and what are you doing with her outside?
Maan: but that's why I came out so I don't break the last rule!
Geet: I don't want to here anything are friendship is over.

Maan made a baby face... He didn't break the last rule.
Ridzy comes out...
Ridzy: sorry maan.
Armaan: At last you are free from her!!!! yesssssssss
Maan: you have told her everything?
Ridzy: yes she is paying me.
Maan: where she gets the money from?
Ridzy: how I suppose to know?

Then maan realized she have his card and he have hers... No wonder he doesn't have enough money. Because mum and dad payees him more.

Maan: geeeetttttttt.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh do something i dont want Maan &sameera or Geet with dutta i know yu i;ll surprises with your writing pls cont soonnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok we want few more. I want to have a good night sleep. This building up tension. Lol
Xxx love the update tho
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
so there friendship over now wow great update pls cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi thx for the lovely updates...ohh they are so cute...and i am waiting for the adult version of Maan and Geet and their love story...how many uodates can we expect today....

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