Armaan & Ridhima One Shot // DMG

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Nikhita

@Nikhi.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Phatttyyyyy!

I just loved it! The way you only named her Angel at the very end was amazing. As I read the OS, I did wonder who the nameless husband was. I mean, I knew it would be Armaan. But the way you left that for the very end was so sweet and so beautiful.

One question though... Was Seth behind Armaan being shot? Or was it just a random gang?

I really liked the switch between the present and the past. And you're such a fantastic writer. Everytime I was in a flashback, I'd forget that it was a flashback. And everytime I was reading in the present tense, I was engrossed in the present. Your writing is just so gripping!

Thank you for such an amazing OS!

Nikhi xxx

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

OMG you finally finished this one ahh, I've been rereading your unfinished draft again and again since I had it saved tehe! ILY<3

I"m gonna come back and post a looong comment:)

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

lovely story.

It was really emotional and heart-throbbing.

great wwork.

plz do come up with more such stories.

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-Deepshikhaa-

@-Deepshikhaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Awesome OS dear !!I mean i am speechless !!

It was HOT( No Doubt) + Cute , Sexy !!

I hope you would have continued :( !

Anyways !! Maha Awesome !

God Bless You !

Devi_Bulbul KSGian !

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@awarapan.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

AUTHORS NOTE~

Hello lovely readers! Thanks a ton for reading and liking the OS, for those of you who are slightly confused as to why I chose to recite Armaan's name at the end was for effect. It's an effect which is used by some writers to show importance, or significance of a simple but intriguing plot line, hence I chose to utilize it within my OS. If there are any more concerns regarding this, do let me know, and I'll hopefully clear them out for you!

Oh and some were also wondering whether or not Seth had something to do with the gang violence, but no he didn't. His story ended the moment he walked out of Ridhima's mother's room. Once again, if there are any more questions, or concerns, let me know!

I tried to make the OS as clear as possible, and I'm sorry if it wasn't thorough enough.

- Phatttttty.

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Reserved :)

*Edit*

Heyy!

Just read your One Shot! It was simply amazing! I really loved the way you portrayed Ridhima's emotions and the way you took us in a flashback and brought us back. The flow was really nice! All throughout the OS, I knew it was Armaan, but I really liked the effect! :)

Your writing is amazing. Hope you write more in future!

Take care x

Edited by TheMelody. - 14 years ago

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Mona

@Mona1993

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Edited my comment on Page 1😃

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yuni

@ammyridz600

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

hey phatty awesome OS 👏👏👏

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

I read this the other night but forgot to comment😳😛

Phatty !! I LOVE YOU ! :| You write so well <3 The story was amazing, and so well written! It had the perfect balance of being HOT ☺️ and emotional ❤️

I seriously loved how you left naming Armaan till the very end...!

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Rabsy

@jetredrose.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Phatty!!!! So I've been telling u forever that im gonna comment and then I never do 😳 and so this comment is long overdue LOL. I don't think I tell u this enough but ur an amazinggggg writer! Ur writing is so descriptive and full of emotion that I can picture everything thats happening and it makes it so much better to read 😊 I loveeee the title for this OS and I loved the whole flashback concept because it made the story much more interesting 😊 and I love how u portrayed Armaan and Riddhima's crazy love for each other. I was awwwing at times at the cuteee lines and the bond that Armaan and Riddhima share tehee. Ahhh it really makes me miss DMG and I wish we could have seen more of this in the show but the good part is that we get to read amazing one shots like this from talented writers like u 😉. I just wish the ending would have been a bit longer because it seemed abrupt but other then that I loveeeeeed it 😃