Originally posted by: Ankita.M
Phattyy that was amazing 😳I loved how Armaans name was taken only at the end LOL .But it HAD to be him isnt it ? Only Armaan is Riddhima's angel.I love the story so much .I didnt want it to end LOL .I love the bond AR share in this and the dialogues make me blush LOL 😳The scenes were all very simple but you wrote it so beautifully that I think I wont get enough even if I read it a couple of times 😃I wish there was moree 😳You should write more start an ff ,what are you waiting for ?You always leave me asking for more 😳Write more soon !Love this one ❤️
I'm so glad you liked it, hun! And I'm so glad you enjoyed the overall story, thanks so much! Haha, FF's... oh man. I'm so bad with being consistent! Look at my list of abandoned FF's! :$ But I'm really glad you loved the AR scenes, because that was my goal! Haha. To have a connection back to the love birds! As for 'Armaan' at the end, I'm SO glad you liked that! Thank you, hun! <3
Originally posted by: anitamalik
Okay Phatty, I can't even say in words how beautifully you write! It's like the words all flow together and create such an amazing visualization for us readers! 😍YOU'RE like the BEST FF writer I have ever come across! You got immense talent girl!
Coming to the story, it was so touching, yet so romantic. I really love the way you kept flashbacking to later on in the day at appropriate times! It really flowed with the story and made it much presentable! The present was full of uncertainty and based on hope, while the past was full on our AR <3 I absolutely loved the way you showed the bond between AR<3 and the cute dialogues, I seriously went AWW☺️ ESP that ring being a license to their besharmi, and then that line about how he always gets the last kiss! ITS SO AR <3
Get ready for the criticism : I WISH THE END WAS A BIT LONGER -_______- it seemed rushed!
So this OS was amazing Phatty if you can't already tell!<3 It was a brilliant piece of workkkk <3 WRITE MORE FOR MEE!
Love youuuuuuuuuuu!
OH and i ALSO loved how she said "Armaan" at the end!😳
Thanks a whole bunch, baby, it means a lot :$ That compliment has me on cloud nine, right now. To say that, oh god. THANK YOU SO MUCH! :$ I'm glad you liked the flow, and the transitions! I was trying to do something different here instead of the usual OS', ya know? But I'm so glad you liked it! The bond between AR, tehe. I'm glad you liked that! Tehe. Those parts were so much FUN to write! I swear, I loved 'em so much, and it was bliss writing them! Tehe. I'm really happy you liked the 'Armaan' effect! HAHA. THANKS <3
As for the criticism, I'm more than HAPPY to have read it. I honestly understand that the last bit was rushed, but I was pressuring myself for time, haha. InshAllah better next time! :$ - I'm so happy reading your comment! Thank you soooooooooo much, love you too babygirll! <3
Originally posted by: -Steffz-
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That was so sweet, that line was my first thought when I finished reading the whole thing.
This one shot is not something rare or something you dont come across or something I myself couldn't have cooked in my mind... it seems like a common story brought out fabulously, often you get to see injured folks in the hospital with the other half terrified to bits, yes we do see it... but what matters undoubtedly is the way you wrote it, excellent portray of emotions... you made things easy to imagine, you played about the bush and well, you got what I wanted to say.
I thought for a second that this would be a sad ending, I dont like sad endings but I dont mind them much actually, usually the way a sad ending is brought out by a writer is quite marvelous as a happy ending is... Isn't it?
I liked the flow in the story, it was truly a proper sequence, nothing was mismatched or out of place.
Fantastic!
- Steff
Definitely true! I'm so touched that you liked it! It means a lot, hun. You're a brilliant writer yourself, and to hear this from you, means a lot. Thanks so much! I'm really happy, thanks! Aha, I was contemplating whether I wanted to shoot for a sad/happy ending, ultimately I decided happy considering the outcomes of DMG, and just the overall moods of the AR fans, aha.
Thanks so much for all the compliments, you're a sweetheart! Thanks a ton, Steff! <3
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