*The Arrival of My Doomsday* |Link to New FF|Pg53|

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Medha

@Medha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#211

OMG I love you for this part! Riddhima's thoughts were like, the best! I was literally ROFLing hard! LOL. Please update soon, and thanks for the PM.

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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#212

awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Riddhima is one of a kind in this ff........her thoughts are hilarious........every now and then she thinks of jumping out of plane ...............and Arman is having a great time at the expense of her...........😆
cont soon and thanx for the pm.................
Afrin

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

hiiii

awesome update

loved it

AR r so adorable

love them

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

awesome part loved it :D plz write more soon i loved the soap eating part very funny lol :D thnx for the pm :D

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sweety7395

@sweety7395

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

hey

thanks for the update

i really liked the part especially there thoughts

they are so funny

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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433389

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: OpTiMiStIc.cUt
hey its a reallly nice part :D:D
superb :D:D:D

but sorry i m not pointing at ur writting way its just perfect but ii m dumb enuff not to understand that whts mean by narrator in the middle ???

@bold: Um, [Narrator] in the parts means that it is not Riddhima/Armaan speaking, but it is like a third person narrating the story. I think it is confusing for some of you, since you don't know whose narrating the story, so I'm writing the person's name in [brackets] so that it is easier for you to understand.

So if [Riddhima] is written in the brackets, it means she's narrating her thoughts/story at this point of time.

Hope this helps!! Take care.

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DreamerReality

@DreamerReality

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#217

hey debby......
awesum update!!
i just love d way u present it.....
thnx fr d PM
n do update soon.....
mr n mrs.mallik are sooo cute!!
d flashback update ws tooo gud!!

love
-kinnari