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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#221

*Edited*

I honestly did not want it to end, girl and I mean it. I was enjoying it so very much. 'Sides, I understand how much exactly its something you write so darn well - you seem to be enjoying it like your readers. I see how you have tried various styles of writing in here and I apprieciate that. Awesome work done!

Armaan's cute, Riddhima's a wife. Nicey! I guess, most women can't help this side of them - not even fictional characters, erm? But the problem with the fictional men is well, we know that. Anyways, I am liking this on the whole and the rapport these two share is going to develop, its a nice and thrilling idea for a reader, yaiks!

I hope you're doing well. See you around!

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#222

awesome update.........😛
Loved it ........😛

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@pinkfeather

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#223

nice part...

um waiting for ridzi to fall for him.....

your writing style have changed...gud gud

keep writing...

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#224

hey the part waz awesome........ it waz funny n beautiful............ loved it............. anywaz pls continue soon.............take care......love aish...................

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madhuri

@soniaraheja

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#225

superb update...................loved it.....haha ridhima is scared of ARMAAN .THATS TOO GOOD....... continue soon..............

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Aakansha Agarwal

@Jenniferfan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#226

hey just caught ur ff
it's awsome
loved it
pls add me to ur pm list
and cont soon

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maha

@OpTiMiStIc.cUt

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: jeflkjfkljfkj

@bold: Um, [Narrator] in the parts means that it is not Riddhima/Armaan speaking, but it is like a third person narrating the story. I think it is confusing for some of you, since you don't know whose narrating the story, so I'm writing the person's name in [brackets] so that it is easier for you to understand.

So if [Riddhima] is written in the brackets, it means she's narrating her thoughts/story at this point of time.

Hope this helps!! Take care.

thank you sooo much ..............i m sorry i didnt understood that.........but thanks :D :D