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Posted: 14 years ago
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<font size="3"><font color="#cc0000" face="Calibri">BACK TO ME



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<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">CHECK OUT OTHER FF OF MINE</font></font>




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<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">NIGHT AND DAY</font></font>




LOVE FEAR AND OBSESSION


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Geet 'age 23- Currently a intern at hospital-Middle class. 'Lost her parents at 15.. being independent working part time to earn money for her internship and her sister. Lives in a small but cute apartment. </font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Nazia'aka Nazi'Geet's younger sister</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Sonu-Geet's best friend.. 20.. getting married to Ankit. Also a intern with Geet. (high class.. rich girl)</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Ankit-Friend of Geet fianc of Sonu.</font></font>



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<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">PROLOGUE---</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">The lights had turned off unexpectedly. Geet walked towards the dresser to get a candle to light. She took two steps and heard footsteps behind her.</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">'Nazi tum ho kya? Light kyun chali gayi..Aaj hi mehndi ke din jana ta kya Nazi'. Pata karo jaldi'.</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">No one spoke. Geet out of her mind screamed</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">'NAZZIII'</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Still no one spoke. As the footsteps got closer Geet realised it was the breathing of a Man. She turned towards the door to run when a arm grabbed her waist and puller her towards him. She tried to scream but another hand covered her mouth. She tried to pry his hand off her but the grip was too strong.</font></font>



<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">'Not today sweetheart your coming with me'. Geet realised who it was. She remembered him very well, the scent the arms everything. Geet wanted to shout. He pulled her towards the wall and pinned her there with his body. He let go of her waist as his body was keeping hers in place against the wall. The moonlight was coming in from the window, he saw her face frightened. He saw her eyes deep full of fear, he started to fall deep into them. Geet saw his eyes too, he had dark brown eyes staring intently at her his face was covered by the musk. Before Geet could understand anything, she felt a prick on her arm and everything went black.</font></font>

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sound good👍🏼........continue............... is the man in mask........maan??? add me to PM list 😊
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EID MUBARAK EVERYONE>> LITTLE EID GIFT FOR U!!!

HERE IS PART 1.. HOPE U LIKE IT!!!! -PLEASE CHECK OUT MY OTHER FF.. NIGHT AND DAY AND LOVE FEAR&OBSESSION

Part 1—The Mehndi

Geet took her diary out and starting writing of her dreams

'Dear Diary,

I always thought that in my life someone would come, he came but I had to leave him. now Sonu is getting married and now im all alone. OK OK I'm lying I still have Nazii my moose but for how long. Nazii has someone too now. I've arranged her marriage with Vikas as we speak. His parents like her and she is fine with Vikas. When Nazi goes in a few months I'll be left all alone. But it wasn't my fault I had to leave him. I couldn't be with him. I still Love him. I can't be with him. I can't move on. What do I do? After Nazi gets married, I'm going to join a convent. That's the answer for my life. I can't love anyone more than him. I MISS HIM! I MISS YOU MAAN!

Geet then went wondering on the streets that evening, this was her favourite past time. Walking through the streets, letting the fresh breeze play with her hair under the moonlit sky. She went to her favourite place in the park and sat under a tree. She thought about her past and who she ran from. She didn't want to think about that. But her mind wondered to where he was now? What would he be doing? Has he forgotten her? But what he was she could never forget. Even though she loved him, she couldn't love him. She had to leave him for her own safety her sisters safety.

Maan I Love you So much. But I'm scared of your love. That's why I left.

Geet returned back into Sonu's house not knowing someone was watching her, following her. The same pair of eyes which were looking for her for 6 months.

Geet I finally found you. I Love you so much, why did you leave me? I know you love me otherwise you would have moved on by now. Then? Today Geet your coming back with me. Coming back to me.

Maan followed Geet back to Sonu's house. He went to Geet's room and waited for her to enter.

'Geet main kitni khush ho do din badh shaadi aur ..' exclaimed sonu hugging Geet, as Geet sat down to put the mehndi on her.

'Aur Suhagraattt' said Nazia jumping in. Sonu blushed. Geet smiled. Geet sat doing the mehndi on her laughing away. Nazia got up and went to a few friends and performed a dance for Sonu.

'Sonu di, I Love you and this is for you sweety' said Nazi. Dancing to mehndi hai nachne wali. After the dance had finished, and the mehdni party had finished. Geet sat back and went to her room, as she was staying the night with Sonu. Sonu stayed with her parents sitting with them.

The lights had turned off unexpectedly. Geet walked towards the dresser to get a candle to light. She took two steps and heard footsteps behind her.

'Nazi tum ho kya? Light kyun chali gayi..Aaj hi mehndi ke din jana ta kya Nazi'. Pata karo jaldi'.

No one spoke. Geet out of her mind screamed

'NAZZIIII'

Still no one spoke. As the footsteps got closer Geet realised it was the breathing of a Man. She turned towards the door to run when a arm grabbed her waist and puller her towards him. She tried to scream but another hand covered her mouth. She tried to pry his hand off her but the grip was too strong.

'Not today sweetheart your coming with me'. Geet realised who it was. She remembered him very well, the scent the arms everything. Geet wanted to shout. He pulled her towards the wall and pinned her there with his body. He let go of her waist as his body was keeping hers in place against the wall. The moonlight was coming in from the window, he saw her face frightened. He saw her eyes deep full of fear, he started to fall deep into them. Geet saw his eyes too, he had dark brown eyes staring intently at her his face was covered by the musk. Before Geet could understand anything, she felt a prick on her arm and everything went black.

PRECAP:-PAST-GEET AND MAAN's PAST

PRESENT: GEET WAKES UP IN MAAN's ARM. MAAN ANGRY

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Intro..loved it..Do continue soon..is it Msk the man?? lol curious to know about the story...Add me to ur Pm list pls!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 start...maan an obsessive lover? im looking forward to the next part :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..Interesting first part.. why did geet ran aways from maan?? curious to know...hehe
Precap looks amazing geet in maan's arm wow...love it..
Thanks!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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another ff! Can't wait to read more continue soon please!!!!!👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update👍🏼...........looking forward to next update.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part....plz post the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept and part. loved it.
update soon.

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