#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 29

Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome update yaar.... loved it ...how they listed it ji wo, wo me ...so nice .... who s gonna cry silently ??? i guess geet ..so do update soon. also all the best for ur exams ..

thanku for the appreciation and good luck..😳😳😳
yup...even i think its geet who will silently cry..

wow that was really good plz cont soon

Originally posted by: Chikkipupuapgp

😊 😆 you seriously liked it...yay..thanku..will update next part soon 😳
hahahaha..armaan and geet dunn get what he is saying in code language..
Yup..maaneet are made in heaven😳

yaar awesome yaar Maan and Armaan's tuning was very very cute... i really loved it...

awesome part dear....
love the way you have sketched the character of Maan......

Nice updates

PART 19
Dedicated to all those..
who lost their mother's love in early childhood due to any reason
*very close to my heart*
geet looked at her hand where maan had seized roughly
all the blood circulation had stopped and whiteness appeared where he pressed his fingers

maan lifted her sleeve
and kisd the atrocities of vickey geet tum roya mat karo
meko chup karana nahi ata
and rougi to me gussa ho ke kuch keh dunga
tum fir aur ro dogi
meko manana nahi ata mishty
tum samajti ho na mishty

geet said mishty

maan said yup you are my mishty

both their eyes met
love sparkled in their wet eyes
maan coughed
when he coughed his stomach got stressed
he said geet its paining
geet brought water
though her whole body pained
she struggled hurting herself and made him sit and drink water
maan slept on geet's lap
and geet slept on pillow
next morning
Dadi brought foodmaan ye humne especially apne hath se apke liye banaya hai
and i will make you eat
and made maan eat
geet was all with cloudy eyes seeing dadi and maan's love
excused her self and went out to the balcony of the vvip booked cottage
maan sensed kuch to gadbad hai
it was 6 in the morning
cold breeze flowing
the sky was golden
so was the white snow on mountains reflecting it
red sun hid itself behind the clouds
geet sat on the railing and Looked at the clouds

Ma
dekho na
maan se sab kitna pyar karte hai
kitna dhyan rakhte hai unka
mere se koi itna pyar kyu nai karta

sometimes
i feel jealous me him when i see him and dadima.she loves him

Ma
Tum mujhe kyu yaha akela chhod gayi
Meko be apne sath le jati

pata hai..
mummy simran aur brij ke liye humesha sweater bunti hai
Mere liye kabhi kyu nahi?

sab ka birthday ghar me manaya jata hai
mera kyu nahi?
pata hai.. jab school me annual function hua tha na
and chief minister ne jo scholarship di thi
us din sab ke mummy papa aye the
meri taraf se koi nahi aya

din me to khud ko kaise bhi kar ke samjha leti hu

par ma rat se bohat dar lagta hai

tujhe idhar udhar bohat dhundti hu

ke tu mujhe aa kar lori sunayegi

par tu sapno me hamesha ye wada kar jati hai ke kal pakka ayegi

par tu nahi ati

ma jab tu gayi thi na
me us waqt 6 months ki thi

Tujhe mera chehra yad to hoga na

itni bheed me meko tanha chhod gayi na

tu to upar khush ho rahi hogi

papa un 2 ko hamesha pyar karte aur mereko kabhi nahi

tu dekhti thi na

brij mereko glass aur rod se peeta karta tha

tu dekhti thi na ma

kya tujhe dard nai hota tha

tu kaisi ma hai

teri beti tadp tadp ke roti rahi

aur tune mujhko kabhi bhi aa ke nahi thama

Wo janwar mere ko nochte rahe

insaniyat daagdar hoti rahi

tu fir bhi nahi ayi

ma itni bhi kya busy thi

maine chanda mama ko rishwat bhi bheji thi 10000 puchi
teko mil gayi na

maine unhe kaha tha ap ko bhej de

ma me kabhi chehare pe nai ane deti

par iska matlb ye to nai he ke mujhe dard nahi hota

ma mujhe bi kahaniya sunni hai

tere sath baraf ka gola khana hai

teri god me sona hai

ma tujhe hamare rishte ki kasam hai

wapis aa ja na

please aa ja

ab aur nahi jiya jata

ma tu kyu chali gayi

kya me itni buri hu
Bata na

please

me buri hu to good gal ban ke dikhaungi

mother promise

she looked at sky with swelled up eyes

and broke down on the floor

maan was standing behind the door
listening all this

nanhi si jaan aur dard se bhara jahan

geet handa..
Agli bar tum apna dil sirf meri baho me khologi

ye wada hai tum se maan singh khurana ka..
Just wait and watch..

precap romance at the love spot..

friends i guess you liked this part..i know it dint have much of maaneet.. But it was from depth of my heart.. :) tc ..good night..

cont soon , amazing update

lovely update dear....feeling so sorry for Geet...