#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 17 CONTINUED
he said wait
he pulled his sofa forward. .helped her to sit..
called ridzi..
He sat near maan..
ridzi pulled her legs up..
she saw bruises of iron chains..
geet looked away..
she dint want to justify..
armaan turned his face in disgust when he saw bruises..
maan whispered in sleep..armaan..
be brave you are my childhood chap..

armaan got..
what could be the reason for the fight..
Geet had watering eyes
ridzi was taking pieces out of her feet..
geet seemed to be least bothered..
she said take rest out later..

got up from sofa..
sat near pillow..
kept his head in her laps..
remembering tum ne be kabhi meko aise puri rat sulaya tha..
ridzi left along with armaan..
ridzi said to the person standing out he is out of danger..
his mental support is with him..
so expect fast recovery..

the news was headlines of media..maan's undergrounded girlfriend there with him for his recovery..
armaan dadi ma rat ko koi ruk na chaie to ruk jao..
mr anurag we both are going for business meeting.
sorry..

every one looked at them in shock..
inside room..
geet kissed his forehead..
got up from sofa..
sat near pillow..
kept his head in her laps..
remembering tum ne be kabhi meko aise puri rat sulaya tha..
she kissed her forehead
chumi no. 1
his eyes.. chumi no. 2
his nose ..
chumi no. 3
made him wear blanket..
maan hugged her by waist..
geet smiled..budhu...
sudhrega nai.

hope you will like this part
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar....i hate maans parents ...now also business is only important for them.they dont even care for him..seriously a plane crash or car crash is much much needed for them...
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar
sooooooooo touchy their luv it soooooo deep for each other
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update, love the love of geet and msk😍

please update jaldi karo, its interesting what you are writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. lovely updates... n whts with Maan's parents .... they still think of of there meeting... uhhhhh...😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update dear... plz continue soon...better Maan's parents leave tan staying here...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it!
hate maan's parents
even when their son is admitted in d icu...for them business meeting is more important
hmph!
n how considerate of geet....she didn't care about any of her bruises or anything.....she juz cared for him...luv her
hope he gets well soon!
nice update sweety!
update soon!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update chikki....arghhhhhhhhhhhhh Maan's mom is getting on my nerves...i don't understand what type of a lady she is........waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chiku have patience
you are a terrific writer
trust me
update was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh dear waiting for next one!😳

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