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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely ff just read the whole updates
urgh vicky is such a animal serves him right
maan injured so badly due to this 🤬 😭 💔
urgh what kind of parents are they 😡 their son is fighting for his life there and they are still thinking about there meetings i hate maan's parents
wow lovely love story of MAANEET ❤️
loved the way maan take care of her and support her and loved the way he feed her 😍
just one request dont make geet pregnant due to this gang rape
do update soon this is one of the best ff i have read i loved it soo much now this is in my fav list with some other ff 😊 i'll wait for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

within 5 min
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Originally posted by: misbah92

<font color="#000033">wow lovely ff just read the whole updates</font>

<font color="#000033">urgh vicky is such a animal serves him right</font>
<font color="#000033">maan injured so badly due to this🤬😭💔</font>
<font color="#000033">urgh what kind of parents are they😡their son is fighting for his life there and they are still thinking about there meetings i hate maan'sparents</font>
<font color="#000033">wow lovelylove storyof MAANEET❤️</font>
<font color="#000033">loved the way maan take care of her and support her and loved the way he feed her😍</font>
<font color="#000033">just one request dont make geet pregnant due to thisgangrape</font>
<font color="#000033">do update soon this is one of the best ff i have read i loved it soo much now this is in my fav list with some other ff😊i'll wait for the update</font>


thanks dear..for the appreciation...will update soon..dunn worry..she wont get pregnant..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Friends..thanks for your support..love you all..
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 18
Maan's parents left...
dadi said i will be sleeping in near by room..
you sit by him geet beta and if you need any thing
just call me..

every one left
maan opened his one eyes...sab gaye
armaan was hiding behind the wall..
geet dint notice too
she said ..ji..aap hosh me ho
maan teased ..haye..
meri a ji b ji c ji up to z ji ki puchi chumi me convert ho gayi aur mujhe pata nahi chala..

Geet blushed arae nahi apke kan baj rahe hai..

geet!!!!!

Arae me keh rahi hu na..
ye budhape ka asar hai..
budhape mein insan ko aksar kam sunayi deta hai..


Maan said geet..teri to..
me batata hu..


she was running away..
but glass in her leg pinched..
and she screamed aaaaaaiii
and fell on his chest..
with all the pressure on his stomach..
*geet screamed in double volume..*

maan said geet dard mujhe ho raha hai..
chillana mujhe chaiye..
aur ye kam tum kar rahi ho..


geet made her as usual baby face..
maan said geet
dadi ne sun liya to she will get worried..


geet nodded..

maan pointed to curtain and said sale bahar nikal..

geet said
...oye..
tumhe head injury nahi hui hai..
no one is in the room..
haww you are having hallucinations...


maan to geet..chup bilkul chup..
finger on your lips..


geet like an obedient girl did so..
maan armaan oye..
bahar nikal..
sale nahi to me ata hu..


armaan came out...
he made a face as if he has been caught..

maan said..bhai teri bhabi..
geet looked in shock..
maan corrected..i mean teri bhabi kaisi hai..


armaan looked confused..

maan explaimed in eyes
armaan said acha geeta bhabi..
ek no. Ki hai..
mast item..
atom bomb..

maan folded his sleeves..sale insano ki tarah bol..
teri bhabi hai wo..
Nai to upar pohcha dunga..

armaan giggled..
geet looked confused..
maan said..bhai she is ok na..
armaan said perfect 10/10..
Langur ke muh me angur

maan gave him a killing look

maan said..bhai..
geet ke pairo me dard ho raha hai..
look na whats that..
i cant get up..


armaan says madam ji..
bina dupate ke nange pair..
is huliye me ayi thi
adhe ghante pehale..
Aur fir hoshiyarpur express ban ke..
tere pet se nikale glass pieces par chad gayi..
aur fir tyre puncher ho gaye hamari express ke..
Aur jab ridzi glasses nikal rahi thi..
to ek pair ke nikalwa liye heroine ne..
aur jab dusre pair ki bari ayi to....
fir se madam ji ko fits padde
*mujhe maan ke pass uske bed pe baithna hai.. *

geet made annoyed angry kid face at armaan..

maan lovingly looking at geet said..geet mere pass ao..

geet made a over confused face..jiiiiii

armaan looked at him in disbelief...

Maan undrstud expressions arae yar dhakanchand...
mera matlb hai..
i cant get up..
you bend down..


He took her specs out.
cleaned it with his hankey..
ye tum ye chashme pehan ke dhundh me..
madhuri dixit banne chali thi..
aur ye kya hal bana rakha hai apna? jhali...
dupata kaha hai...
and sweater...
where is your cap...
jab thand lag jayegi to fir roti roti ana...
mera nosey ruk nahi raha..
Maan me kya karu
apna hankey dede..
and jab tak me apna hankey dunga..
tab tk you would have cleaned it on my branded jacket...
tu kabhi nahi sudhregi..
Khud to jhali hai hi..
Mujhe be jhala bana ke chhodegi

Geet says wo me..
ji wo..

armaan and maan in one tone say o ji
ji wo ..
me wo...
wo ap..
wo to..
me to..
ye to..
tu to..
aise hai
waise hai..
isse age kabhi kuch bolegi zindagi me..

maan cntinues..
10 me top tune kiya and hamari compartment ayi..
and you are atak atak ke speaking..

armaan took out a piece of glass from her leg..
And bandaged it..
she screamed
maan hugged her very tight.as if he wont leave her.
she is his
no one can seperate them

armaan excused him self and went for duty..
geet laid her head on his chest..
maan playing with her hair asked..what are you doing.. on i.geet said listening to dhak dhak.
maan said..tum itni innocent kyu ho..

geet turned away..now i am not..
maan got red in anger..
he pulled her hand roughly..
she said maan dard ho raha hai..
leave my hand..

maan gripped it more harder..

maan please..
its paining..

maan said yes its paining..
he said dont say this line again that you are not innocent any more..
your are the same geet for me..

geet looked lovingly at him..

precap
crying silently
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
friends i guess you liked this part..am sorry..i wont be able to pm this time..i have exams..do check out..thanks for support..love ya all
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chikkipupuapgp


thanks dear..for the appreciation...will update soon..dunn worry..she wont get pregnant..



your most welcome 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update ; awwwwwwwww maan is awake when she showered kisses on him
loved these part soooooooo much


maan explaimed in eyes
armaan said acha geeta bhabi..
ek no. Ki hai..
mast item..
atom bomb..
maan folded his sleeves
..sale insano ki tarah bol..
teri bhabi hai wo..
Nai to upar pohcha dunga..
🤣 🤣 🤣 poor armaan


He took her specs out.
cleaned it with his hankey..
ye tum ye chashme pehan ke dhundh me..
madhuri dixit banne chali thi..
aur ye kya hal bana rakha hai apna? jhali...
dupata kaha hai...
and sweater...
where is your cap...
jab thand lag jayegi to fir roti roti ana...
mera nosey ruk nahi raha..
Maan me kya karu
apna hankey dede..
and jab tak me apna hankey dunga..
tab tk you would have cleaned it on my branded jacket...
tu kabhi nahi sudhregi..
Khud to jhali hai hi..
Mujhe be jhala ban
a ke chhodegi
😍😍
haye DREAMY Maan is soooooooooo sweet




armaan and maan in one tone say o ji
ji wo ..
me wo...
wo ap..
wo to..
me to..
ye to..
tu to..
aise hai
waise hai..
isse age kabhi kuch bolegi zindagi me..
🤣 poor geet



armaan says madam ji..
bina dupate ke nange pair..
is huliye me ayi thi
adhe ghante pehale..
Aur fir hoshiyarpur express ban ke..
tere pet se nikale glass pieces par chad gayi..
aur fir tyre puncher ho gaye hamari express ke..
Aur jab ridzi glasses nikal rahi thi..
to ek pair ke nikalwa liye heroine ne..
aur jab dusre pair ki bari ayi to....
fir se madam ji ko fits padde
*mujhe maan ke pass uske bed pe baithna hai.
. *🤣🤣🤣 🤣poor geet


maan playing with her hair asked..what are you doing.. on i.geet said listening to dhak dhak.
maan said..tum itni innocent kyu ho..
geet turned away..now i am not..
maan got red in anger..
he pulled her hand roughly..
she said maan dard ho raha hai..
leave my hand..
maan gripped it more harder..
maan please..
its paining..
maan said yes its paining..
he said dont say this line again that you are not innocent any more..
your are the same geet for me..
geet looked lovingly at him..


haye sho sweet they are the couple made in HEAVEN 😳😳

do update soon waiting for next part 😊



Edited by misbah92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: misbah92

lovely update ; awwwwwwwww maan is awake when she showered kisses on him

loved these part soooooooo much


<font color="#000033">maan explaimed in eyes
armaan saidacha geeta bhabi..
ek no. Ki hai..
mast item..
atom bomb..
maan folded his sleeves</font>
<font color="#000033">..sale insano ki tarah bol..
teri bhabi hai wo..
Nai to upar pohcha dunga..</font>
🤣🤣🤣poor armaan


<font color="#990000">He took her specs out.
cleaned it with his hankey..
ye tum ye chashme pehan ke dhundh me..
madhuri dixit banne chali thi..
aur ye kya hal bana rakha hai apna? jhali...
dupata kaha hai...
and sweater...
where is your cap...
jab thand lag jayegi to fir roti roti ana...
mera nosey ruk nahi raha..
Maan me kya karu
apna hankey dede..
and jab tak me apna hankey dunga..
tab tk you would have cleaned it on my branded jacket...
tu kabhi nahi sudhregi..
Khud to jhali hai hi..
Mujhe be jhala ban</font>
<font color="#990000">a ke chhodegi</font>
😍😍
haye DREAMY Maan is soooooooooo sweet




<font color="#CC0066">armaan and maan in one tone say</font><font color="#CC0066">o ji
ji wo ..
me wo...
wo ap..
wo to..
me to..
ye to..
tu to..
aise hai
waise hai..
isse age kabhi kuch bolegi zindagi me..</font>
<font color="#CC0066"></font>🤣poorgeet



<font color="#660033">armaan saysmadam ji..
bina dupate ke nange pair..
is huliye me ayi thi
adhe ghante pehale..
Aur fir hoshiyarpur express ban ke..
tere pet se nikale glass pieces par chad gayi..
aur fir tyre puncher ho gaye hamari express ke..
Aur jab ridzi glasses nikal rahi thi..
to ek pair ke nikalwa liye heroine ne..
aur jab dusre pair ki bari ayi to....
fir se madam ji ko fits padde
*mujhe maan ke pass uske bed pe baithna hai.</font>
. *<font size="3">🤣</font>poor geet


<font color="#333333">maan playing with her hair asked..what are you doing.. on i.geet said listening to dhak dhak.
maan said..tum itni innocent kyu ho..
geet turned away..now i am not..
maan got red in anger..
he pulled her hand roughly..
she saidmaan dard ho raha hai..
leave my hand..
maan gripped it more harder..
maan please..
its paining..
maan saidyes its paining..
he saiddont say this line again that you are not innocent any more..
your are the same geet for me..
geet looked lovingly at him.. </font>


haye sho sweet they are the couple made in HEAVEN😳😳

<font color="#666666">do update soon waiting for next part😊</font>




😊 😆 you seriously liked it...yay..thanku..will update next part soon 😳
hahahaha..armaan and geet dunn get what he is saying in code language..
Yup..maaneet are made in heaven😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar.... loved it ...how they listed it ji wo, wo me ...so nice .... who s gonna cry silently ??? i guess geet ..so do update soon. also all the best for ur exams ..

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