#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Poor maneet.
I hope maan get well soonnn.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet i feel sorry for her bechari ko khushi raas nai ati hai yar,aik he tou pyar karne wala mila hai use,wou bhi.................. btw i have got one cnfusion,is maan's mom his step mother,?and wat bout his dad y doesnt he love him,and y is daadi so helpless infrnt ov maan's parents😲 i mean she the trustee ov his college and all........... plz do clear my doubts,otherwise lovely update😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzzzz maan should get well soon &nw or later i think geet will cm 2 knw so y nt nw
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Posted: 14 years ago

great part..

poor maan
i hope vicky and his friends goes to jail.
plz..continue soon.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi.... read all d parts of ur ff nw.....
i had read 1st part wen u posted it but then got busy wid exams so cud not read further... evn i m in medical college so guess u can understand...
ds ff is d best ff i ve ever read....👏 👏 👏 👏
maan loves geet crazily... evn in such bad condition of himself all he cares abt is geet....
i want 2 write more but m nt able 2 find any words... awesome,mindblowing,superb, ds all words wl b too small 4 ds ff...😉
all i can say is do cont soon... n plz add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww hats off to maan's love and your writing!

such sad but nice story

plzzzzzzz update soon with good news.. i like maan and geet reunion?

gr888888888 u[pdate
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: untamedtigress

poor geet i feel sorry for her bechari ko khushi raas nai ati hai yar,aik he tou pyar karne wala mila hai use,wou bhi.................. btw i have got one cnfusion,is maan's mom his step mother,?and wat bout his dad y doesnt he love him,and y is daadi so helpless infrnt ov maan's parents😲i mean she the trustee ov his college and all...........
<div></div>plz do clear my doubts,otherwise lovely update😃


well..hehe thanku for the compliment.. Smita is his real mom.. . . There is reason behind this attitude of maan's parents..will unfold him...dadi simply wants her family to be united...and she knows khurana empire can succeed only if their decendent and mr anurag have no fierce fight..so she keeps mum:)
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi.... read all d parts of ur ff nw.....
i had read 1st part wen u posted itbut thengot busy wid exams so cud not read further... evn i m in medical college so guess u can understand...

ds ff is d best ff i ve ever read....👏

maan loves geet crazily... evn in such bad condition of himself all he cares abt is geet....

i want 2 write more but m nt able 2 find any words... awesome,mindblowing,superb, ds all words wl b too small 4 ds ff...😉

[DIV]all i can say is do cont soon... n plz add me in ur pm
yup i understand.. :) hehe thanks for the appreciation ..i feel as if i am on cloud 9
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nilu710

awwwwwwww hats off to maan's love and your writing!


such sad but nice story

plzzzzzzz update soon with good news.. i like maan and geet reunion?

gr888888888 u[pdate


thanks for the compliment... :) added...
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 17
its continued scroll down

Geet asked meera..meera teko dev ki kasam hai..
sach bol na plz
plz
or i wont have any medicine

meera called dev
wo kuch nahi kha rahi
kuch nahi pee rahi
use bas maan chaiye
what to do

dev i knew this will happen
geet snatched the phone
she was feeling too odd to talk to him after that night
but managed
dev
tum mujhe apni choti behan jaisi mante ho na
please tumhe is rishte ki kasam hai
where is maan
i beg you


dev nahi geet you are not in such a condition
veerji
i will not take med and agar unhe pata chala to he wil kill me as well as you


Preet ki lat mohe aisi lagi
ho gayi of matvari
bal bal jau apne piya pe
re me jau vari vari
Mohe sudhbudh na rahi he tan man ki
ye to jane duniya sari
bebas aur lachar firu me

Re me hari
me dil haridev says
i give up
he is in hospital
he had a street fight with some one
he is in hospital

geet falls on the floor
veerji
please meko un ke pass le chalo


dev says
there is lot of media here
cover your face with some cloth
or they will make stories
i am coming

geet did so
sat behind dev
and reached sanjeevni
she ran in..
media pushed her away
guards came along with jay dev and adi
they made way for her
dadi hugged her
media rushed to geet and questioned
how did u meet
1close up..
Since how long you in relation..
please reply..

Geet looked shocked and scared
guards threw them away
all of them rushed inside
geet's heart was drenching


tere naam se jee lu
tere naam se mar jau
teri jaan ke sadke mein..
kuch aisa kar jau..
tune kya kar dala mar gayi me..
mit gayi me.
ho gayi me Teri diwani..
teri diwani..
dev and dadi realized she was without her slippers..
she dint notice that too...
she ran in the gallery wantonly..
leaving them behind..
riddhima stopped her where are you going its vvip cottage..
maan singh khurana..

geet says please chad do menu..
onu meri jarurat hai..
asi baad me formalities kar levange..

riddhima looked at her upside down..tusi geet o na..
geet nodded..
and questioned tenu kaise pata hun..
riddhima said uncombed loose hair..
no slippers..
ulte spectacles..
those too dirty..
no dupata...
what do you expect...
tumhara upar se neche tak rag rag maan chilla raha hai..


Ho gayi me..
teri diwani ..
teri diwani..


geet gave a Lost stare to ridzi..
Riddhima come with me..
geet's eyes were tear filld..
swelled up..
dadi and all looked at her in shock..
ridzi was about to take her to icu..
where maan was at life supporting system..
a hand pulled her back..oh this gawar is hear too..
you think i will let you unhygenic..
cheap girl to enter than area..


aunty ji let me go to him..
he needs me..

oh seriously..
you need him rather..
whats your cost gal..
i wont buy you in free too..

geet went in trans..
she remembered vickey's line..no one will even buy you in free..
this is your aukat..

she screamed..leave me
pushed away smita..
Dadi came and said smita let her go in..
geet folded her hands to dadi just like a begger does when he gets a lottery

ishq ka jadu sar chadh kar bole
khub laga lo pehare
raste rab khole
yahi ishq di marzi hai Yahi rab di marzi hai
tere bin jeena kaisa
haan khud garzi
tune kya kar dala mar gayi me mit gayi me
Hogayi me teri diwani

Geet ran in the compartment..
armaan was sitting..
he had tray at the floor which had glasses of bottle which was inside the stomach
geet dint notice...
she ran on them..
dint notice..
she looked down at the glasses which were in her legs..
ran to bed..
armaan looked at her shocked..
he said girl you hurt yourself.
she said i dunn care..
how is my maan..


girl they are bleeding..

please its immaterial na..
tell me he is ok na..


hay me rang rangili mastani..
re me albeli me anjani

armaan looked at maan's murmuring lips[geet geet geet] and then at geet upside down..you are geet right..
she noded..

he is out of danger..
complete bed rest.. dont let him have any stress on his stomach..
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago

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