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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#801

hey
ohk...juz read d FF now
it is seriosuly AMAZING!
really loved d concept loadzzz!
it wz FAB!
can't get enough of praising it!
it is MIND BLOWING!
really love it loadzzzzzz!
n can't wait for their lunch date!
itz amazing!
lovely update!
sooo wnna see geet's reaction when she comes to know tat maan is DelhisShark
tat wud be one sight to watch
n maan is acting like a big time despo trying to impress geet

love
Navpreet

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#802

HEY GUYS!!! HAAAAAPPPPPYYYYYY NNNEEEWWWWW YYYEEEAAARRRR!!! wow its 2011 already now the big quesiton comes what will happen in 2012??? Will the world end??? ahhahahhaha lets wait and see....until than enjoy the New Year with your friends and family and of course enjoy the new year with reading this update 😆

ENJOY!!!!

Chapter 17

Both Maan and Geet went to the resturant where Geet and Vicky usually goes to..they both sat down and ordered their food..
Geet: Can I ask you something?

Maan looks up: Yeah sure

Geet: Why are you being nice?

Maan shocked: What?

Geet: I mean to say that why are you being nice to me all of a sudden?

Maan: So you have a problem with me being nice?

Geet: Ever since you came here..you have nothing but giving me attitude and being mean so you know you being nice all of a sudden is kind of new to me

Maan: Geet so you have a problem if I am nice and you have a problem if I am mean?

Geet: See when you were mean I knew that it is who you are..I mean am sure that its in your blood and you can't help it but being nice seems like whole new thing for you

Maan sighed: Geet so you are applying that being mean is in my genes?

Geet: yeah seems like as far as I know no human being can be that mean unless it runs in their genes

Maan: OMG I have never met anyone like you before

Geet: What does that suppose to mean?

Maan: I don't know how Dev even hired you..you have problems with everything don't you...and as for your so called knowledge being mean does not run in genes...I was not born mean.

Geet: Excuse me?? You are calling me stupid??

Maan: I didn't call you stupid unless you think you are stupid [sounds familiar lol???] (smirks at her)

Geet: Wipe that smirk off your face and by the way get a original dialogue..you can't say what I said before

Maan: ohh yeah what are you going to do sue me?

Geet: Yeah I will sue you for saying my line

Maan: I didn't see any copyrights for the line that you states last night

Geet: Well if I said it first than it is obvious that it is my line

Maan: That doesn't mean that it is your line..you could've stolen it from someone and used it and now are calming the rights on the line now

Geet: I did not steal any line wines from anyone..

Maan: How do I know?

Geet: Because I am saying it that's why

Maan: And are you some kind of a president of U.S that I am suppose to trust you on that?

Geet: Yeah consider me as the president

Maan: Well than if you are the president of U.S than I feel bad for all the citizens in the U.S whose lives you are going to ruin

Geet gasped: Take that back

Maan: No.what will you do?

Geet: I will show you what I will do (just than the food arrived...the waiter sets the food on the table and leaves..Maan and Geet both looks at each other with anger and quietly beings to eat)

Maan POV:

Is she really serious?? I am here trying to be nice and tolerating her weird and talkative behavior and there she is giving me an attitude. How dare she ask me why I am being nice? I can be nice if I want to be right? Seriously, why do I even talk to her after knowing how she is? She is way different than what I thought my pen pal would be like and yet here I am having lunch with the last person I would ever think I would have EVER...why??? ugh this whole pan pal thing was a bad idea...I don't even know how I got roped into this..I mean I am Maan Singh Khurana owner of the biggest construction company in India..I always did what I feel like without caring what others are thinking but in spite of all of that I MAAN SINGH KHURANA actually made a plan on on how to get on the good side of a a girl??? A girl who gave me nothing but attitude since the very beginning I came here...a girl who is hell bent on making sure that my stay here is ruined...WHY??? Something is definitely wrong with me....maybe Adi was right??? W*H no way stop thinking Maan and enjoy your lunch before she ruins that too....I wonder what she is thinking right now...she is really quiet and it is abnormal for her to be this quiet...kind of scary as if she is planning against me? What am I thinking..be calm and don't loose your temper...

Geet POV:

Ulu, gadha, godha, porkupine, bandar, kutta......samjta kya hai aapne aap ko?? Stupid kahi ka...I just asked a question as to why he is being nice. It is kind of scary..I mean first he has been mean ESPECIALlY to me and now he is being nice to me all of a sudden?? Did I do something intentionally that made him be nice to me?? I am not wearing anything different...same perfume same everything than why is he being nice? Something is up but what??? What if he is testing me? What if he has something planned with Dev to see if I can handle this responsibility or not? No No No why would Dev sir do this? (light bulb lit inside her head) VICKY! Maybe he and Vicky planned something against me as a revenge from the other day when Cookie attecked him..yeah maybe this is Vicky's idea...I won't spare him...but why did he mention Delhi ka badsha?? That is what I said to my pan pal...hmm whatever..he does act like Delhi ka badsha with his attitude and the way he talks and walks as if he owns the whole world.. but one thing is for sure Vicky I am going to kill you...now i understand why you canceled your lunch meeting with me so that this khadus can come instead of you and you guys can plan something against me..I won't let your plans succeed Vicky...

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They both ate their lunch quietly without making any eye contacts with each other..a lot of things were going on inside their heads their own questions that yet to be answered and confusion for one another..who will win at the end??

OHH did you guys really thought their lunch "date" would be that easy??? 😆😆

ohhh SILLY ME!!! I forgot to thank everyone for their wonderful wonderful wonderful comments...sorry I did not reply back to anyone yet..but I will before I update the next chapter 😆 ---------------------------------------------------

Link to Chapter 18

Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Heyy simiiiiii

firstly, Happy New Year everyone!!😃

omgg simi this is soo freakingly cool....i always end up nowadays being the first one to comment....*woot woot* no i swear, i don't stalk you😆....its funny though cuz everytime i log in, i see that you have updated....we got some cool telepathy going on😆😉

OMGG....*haye rabba* what have you done to their lunch date?....its more like a who-will-kill-each-other first date now😆....only you missy could turn something romantic into something murderously hilarious!.....is that even a word?😆

but i gotta say, i am loving the characterization!!....brilliant job at that, really!👏....i understand it would have been weird to show them being civil to each other already but kya kare, dil hai ki maaneet romance ke bina maanta nahin😆😳....omggg vicky's part was hilarious though🤣.....bechara, phas gaya!....may he RIP😆....cuz geet handa is out to kill!!

aww their nok jhoks are shoo adorable!!....lovedd them!

Hope this New Year brings joy, prosperity and lots of happiness to you and your loved ones!

P.S. my threat of double updates still holds!!...*muhahha*😆

Edited by macho_muffin - 14 years ago

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#804

Awesome Update
Loved it
Amazing
Hhahaha Love Maaneet
I didn't call you stupid unless you think you are stupid [sounds familiar lol???] (smirks at her)
Loved this line haha maan
Loved the update
continue soon
Thanks for the pm
And Happy New year!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: macho_muffin
Heyy simiiiiii
firstly, Happy New Year everyone!!😃

omgg simi this is soo freakingly cool....i always end up nowadays being the first one to comment....*woot woot* no i swear, i don't stalk you😆....its funny though cuz everytime i log in, i see that you have updated....we got some cool telepathy going on😆😉

OMGG....*haye rabba* what have you done to their lunch date?....its more like a who-will-kill-each-other first date now😆....only you missy could turn something romantic into something murderously hilarious!.....is that even a word?😆

but i gotta say, i am loving the characterization!!....brilliant job at that, really!👏....i understand it would have been weird to show them being civil to each other already but kya kare, dil hai ki maaneet romance ke bina maanta nahin😆😳....omggg vicky's part was hilarious though🤣.....bechara, phas gaya!....may he RIP😆....cuz geet handa is out to kill!!

aww their nok jhoks are shoo adorable!!....lovedd them!

Hope this New Year brings joy, prosperity and lots of happiness to you and your loved ones!

P.S. my threat of double updates still holds!!...*muhahha*😆

are you sure you don't stalk me??? I am begining to get worried here 😆😆😆 J/K haha but that must mean that I am updating on the right time than 😆😆😆 hopefully this telepathy thing stays like this lol

ahahah I know I know I ruined their precious lunch date but I couldn't help it (not to be mean or anything lolz) I am weird and I had to keep up to my weirdness right?? ahahha it would be so weird to see them be NICE all of a sudden forgetting their past lolz..hahaha and poor Vicky got trapped in the middle of all of this lol...hahaha

umm as for your double update threat hmm I will see what I can do lolz..hahaha I will TRY as best as I can lolz...hahaha

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy
Awesome Update
Loved it
Amazing
Hhahaha Love Maaneet
I didn't call you stupid unless you think you are stupid [sounds familiar lol???] (smirks at her)
Loved this line haha maan
Loved the update
continue soon
Thanks for the pm
And Happy New year!

Thank you so much lol..hahaha
Maan had to reply back to Geet using her own words lol..ahhaha
HAAPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO!!!!

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#807

Omg Maaneet New Year resolution lo, Fight na karane ki.😉

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Omg Maaneet New Year resolution lo, Fight na karane ki.😉

hahaha great resolution but knowing them they will break it within the next five minutes lol
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#809

awsome update yaar...happy new year !!

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#810

hey SIMI!
happy new year!
hav a great great year ahead!
n gosh!tat wz an "amazing" date!🤣
LOL they can never ever stop fighting
for once he wz trying to b nice to her
n geet! LOL she thought vicky n maan r taking revenge from her
hahahahaha
but atleast she got sum hint u noe tat maan acts little like DelhisShark
wt a date!i thought atleast this meeting wud go peaceful....but i can never expect tat from maneet 😆
lovely update!
update soon!

love
Navpreet