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mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Simi dil ke armaan aansoon mein beh gaye,,why..what those nuts didnt even come to know..how cute was that..now make them meet jaldi se..not fair..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesum
Mana got to knew that Geet is NYQueen thats fab
Both were waiting for each other facing back to each other😆😆😆😆
Vicky knws Maan
He evn knws the way Geet cruses him😆😆😆😆
Bechara Maan n Geet ke beech mein phas gaya
Lets c if Maan opens this truth in frnt of her
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Posted: 14 years ago
thier confused meeting was adorable
maan knows?
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 part............. plzzzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update love it a lot pls update soon pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update continue soon plzzzzzzz😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr88888!!!!
They were sooo close.
Maan has found first.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANK YOU EVRYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS!!!!! Here is the next update! I hope you guys like it!!! 😳😳
Chapter 12
Part II

Continued conversation:

Vicky: Why did you plan to meet him? What if he turned out be a budha or a physco? (Maan started choking hearing Vicky ask her that..Vicky looked at Maan and signaled him for the water..Maan looked at Vicky and smiled weakly)

Geet: I trust him ok..I know he can't be a physco..we went over this before'listen can we talk about this later..I am sick right now'

Vicky: how did you get sick? You sound really bad right now' (Maan looked worried now hearing that she is sick "that's why she didn't come to work today" he looked at Vicky)

Geet: I saw that khaduos, gadha, ulu, Bandar'aur pata nahi kya in the morning at the caf'because of him I got sick..

Vicky looked at Maan smiled knowing that she is talking about him: "don't say that about him like that" (Maan pretended to each his lunch and not make it obvious that he is listening to their conversation)

Geet: Why are you defending him? Huh

Vicky: umm Geet I will come over after my work...I will bring you your favorite coffee'do you need anything else?"

Geet: thanx you are the best'umm can you also pick up some groceries for me'I will text you the list'

Vicky: ugh can't you ask for simple things'even when you are sick you ask for such long favors'

Geet got mad: fine! You don't need to come over and don't bring anything..bye

Vicky: Geet listen I was joking'Geet'(she hung up the phone..Vicky looked at Maan) Sorry about that..

Maan: umm it is fine...how do you know Geet? (asking casually)

Vicky: We met in the elevator'I work two floors below you guys'she is really nice and weird at the same time'I was hesitant to talk to her at first but she was so persistent and now we are best friends

Maan: ohh ok'("Why am I feeling weird hearing Vicky talk about Geet's friendship?")

Vicky: Seriously, stay away from her

Maan was shocked hearing him say that: Stay away?

Vicky laughed: I mean don't get her mad'you have no idea what she will do when she is mad'it is so hard to pacify her'(Maan smiled hearing this)..last time she kicked me twice on my knee when I talked bad about her penpal..

Maan smiled: penpal?

Vicky: Yeah, she talks to this person online whom she never seen before in her life

Maan: isn't that good?

Vicky: I don't like it because he could be anyone..he could be a freaking stalker and whatnot

Maan: I doubt that

Vicky: you know last time when I told her about him possibly being a stalker just as a joke..she actually asked him if he was a stalker'I still laugh whenever I think about that

Maan "so it was because of him she asked me that": how did they meet online?

Vicky: They met through this online game but the poor guy doesn't know that Geet was actually cheating while playing the game (laughed)

Maan: Cheating?

Vicky laughed: yeah she downloaded this pool buddy where it shows you where to make shots and it's a guaranteed win

Maan "that little cheater'no wonder she kept on winning": ohh ok ("It is her'great and now what should I do")

Vicky: hey we should get back now'I have to get off early from work to meet Geet since she is sick

Maan: umm ohh ok'hey do you mind if I come with you?

Vicky "damn she is going to be mad at me if he did": come with me?
Maan: umm yeah just to see how she is since she is sick and all since she is my client I need to know if she can come to work soon ("Damn that sounded pathetic")
Vicky hesitantly: umm alright meet me downstairs around 4' (Vicky tut oh aaj gaya kam se)
Maan got happy: Alright

Geet got off the bed after hanging up the phone with Vicky..she was so mad at him now' "I am sick and no one cares for me'whatever I don't need anyone..I have my cookie" Geet took her shower and came out after few minutes'her feet were feeling better but her pinky toes still pained a little due to blisters' "That gadha'why couldn't I see Adi at least he is way better than him" She went downstairs to feed cookie and to prepare herself some lunch'she had no energy to make anything for herself and just ate cereal with milk'the whole day she laid on the couch with Cookie besides her'

Maan couldn't concentrate during the meetings at all after finding out the truth..he didn't know where to begin with Geet again..they both didn't get off to good start and has been constantly thinking of ways to get revenge from each other'he forgot about his revenge that he had planned for Geet..he looked at the card that she had given him yesterday'he opened his emails and read all of their previous emails..he smiled as he reread all of their email exchanges'he couldn't believe that it was really her' "Should I tell her that I am DelhisShark?..Will she hate me when she finds out?...No I will not tell her that it is me'I have to find out first how she feels about DelhisShark..but how?"

Day was going by so slow for Maan'as soon as it hit 4 he started heading out to meet Vicky downstairs'

Maan: Dev sorry I have to go out somewhere

Dev: Alright'anything serious?

Maan: No I met my friend from college so we decided to hang out and catch up

Dev: Alright I understand

Maan: Adi you can go back to the hotel if you want..I will meet you back there

Adi: but we had planned for dinner

Maan: ohh yeah I forgot..

Dev: Actually Adi if you would like you can come over to my house for dinner'my wife makes good food when I tell her I have guests over

Adi laughed: umm sure Dev sir

Dev smiled: Please call me Dev and at least this way I get to have good dinner tonight also (laughed)

Maan: Alright well I will see you later Adi..thank you Dev

Dev: no problem..have fun

Maan: Thanx bye

Maan ran downstairs to meet Vicky'elevator was taking too long to come'he couldn't wait any longer'he waited in the main lobby until he saw Vicky coming towards him'

Maan: ready Vicky?

Vicky: yeah I have to get few things for Geet first..it was so hard for me to pacify her

Maan smiled: sure

Vicky: Ok so I have to stop at a grocery store first to pick up few things'

Maan: like what?

Vicky shows him the text message of the things Geet told him to buy..Maan looked at the text'dog food, tomatoes, red onions only, eggs, milk, juice, coriander, watermelon, etc'

Vicky: She wants me to go bankrupt'I know she added some extra things that she doesn't need just to get back at me for getting her mad..hey are you sure you want to come grocery shopping?

Maan: yeah am sure

Vicky: Ok just checking ("Damn Vicky she is going to kill you..I should buy some flowers before going to meet her just to calm her down")

Vicky tried everything he could so that Maan wouldn't agree to come but nothing worked on him..he knew that once Maan makes up his mind there is no turning back'Vicky stopped by flower shop and then to get her favorite coffee before going to her house'Maan was getting so nervous and worried'how will he act in front of her or what to say to her?...they arrived at Geet's house'

Vicky: Maan why don't you help me with the groceries'I am going to give her flowers and her coffee first and I will come and help you
Maan: umm ok

Vicky thought: "ok I have to go up fast and explain things to Geet"'he quickly got off the car and rang her door..he could hear her dog barking.. "Damn I hate dogs" Geet opened little bit of the door to see who it was but when realizing its Vicky she fully opened the door

Geet: Vicky you finally came..where are my groceries?

Vicky: Hi would've been nice too you know

Geet: yeah whatever..Hi'are these flowers for me? (coughed)

Vicky: No its for your dog Cookie

Geet: Well than let me get my dog so she can thank you properly

Vicky: NO!! Geet you know I hate dogs'anyway I have brought a friend with me to help with the groceries..is it fine?

Geet took the flowers: why don't you just say that you are scared of Cookie'I would love to meet your friend

Vicky: Promise you won't get mad?

Geet: Why should I get mad? He is your friend after all'

Vicky: Promise me first..

Geet: Fine I promise..who is it? (just when she asked that question she saw Maan coming up with a grocery bags in his hands..unknowingly she crushed the flowers in her hand)

Vicky whispered: Geet don't say anything please'remember he is a guest in your house..and guests are like god right

Geet looked at Vicky with anger: Wait and watch Vicky'(than she realized that she is in her Simpsons PJ's) Vicky I will be right back

Vicky: What happened?..Geet? (She ran upstairs ignoring Vicky's questions)

Maan came up the stairs and stood by Vicky: Is everything alright?

Vicky: yeah everything is just fine'hey lets go inside she will be right back. You can place the grocery on the kitchen table I will be back with the rest

Geet quickly changed and came down cursing Vicky'she went to the kitchen thinking it might be Vicky there

Geet: Vicky you are so dead'(Maan turned around hearing her voice..Geet was shocked to see him in her kitchen)

Maan: umm Vicky told me to put the groceries on the table
Geet: ji umm thank you'(sneezed)'you can leave the groceries there..I will put them away later'

Maan looked at Geet: umm you sure

Geet "ugh this gadha'": umm yeah thanx I will be right back'

She went away from the kitchen..Maan noticed that she was still limping a little due to her bruises on her feet..he felt really guilty now because of him her feet were bruised'he looked around the living room'looking at her pictures with family and friends'He didn't notice when Vicky came up behind him

Vicky: hey where did she go?

Maan: huh..umm she went downstairs

Vicky: ohh no

Maan: What happened?

Vicky: She is going to get her dog'the dog is just like her'

Maan: What do you mean?

Vicky: you will find out'

Precap: Geet's Sweet Revenge hehe Vicky: Geet NO!!! (Guess what she will do???..any guesses????)

Alright I still have to write the next part BUT I will update it as soon as I have it!!! Until than leave me long comments lol...hehehe

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Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i was waiting for that lol
that ws bril.
loved it
haha
i hope geets dog bites him. or rips his trouser off LOL
that would be so funny.
vicky should lev lol
xxx
u know lonely😉
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Simi this was laughter riot really..i loved it ahhh so u are back..hehe
and revenge cookie on vicky..wow..

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