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guys i'll continue my ff here instead of mjht forum.i'm posting the previous chapters too for the first time readers,

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roshnee.



hey guys!well this is my first ever try to make a mayur ff.i was thinking this and told it to my friend ridi,(ridi_onasis)and she seems to kill me if i dont write it.so i'll give it a try.here are the character description. hope you like it.

nupur:

nupur catherin singh is the only daughter of joane catherin cruz and hemant singh.as you see, she is half indian-half british.she is 23 years of age and have recently finished her graduation in fashion designing.
nupur is an independent soul.her mother left her and her father when she was only five,just after her father became handicapped in a road accident.since then she's learnt to live without any bond.actually she doesnt believe in the bondage of a family as she never had one.
she is really beautiful,funny and open minded.

mayank:

mayank malhotra is the eldest son of prithvi and ragini malhotra.he is a textile engineer. his funda toward life is-life is to have fun.he is never serious,doesnt have a goal,just wishes to spend his fathers money and enjoy.he is a great flirt and loves to change his girlfriends.but now, after playing for sometimes he is stable with tina.
mayanks great looking,and he too is damn open minded.

john:

john walker is a fashion designer and nupurs boy friend.she was her class mate and they fell for each other.

tina:

tina khanna is mayanks girl friend and wants to be a super model.

megha:

megha bhatia is the daughter of anand bhatia,nupurs fathers partner.she is nupurs only and child hood friend.she is the one who always understands nupur and can control her when every one fails. she is the sister nupur never had.megha is an artist and two years senior than nupur.


there will be more characters but now this will do.i'll write the other characters description as their character appears.
the reason behind this ff is that, we always portray mayank and nupur as perfect and heavenly.but i wanted to see what they would do if they were real,just like you and me.so mayank and nupur have got nothing perfect in them.they are just two average member of our generation.so this time their will be no movie, no ferry tale, nothing perfect.
do write your views about the characters and if you are interested in reading further,please hit the 'like' button.

one more thing the name is a borrowed one-as you have already noticed.but i wanted this to be the name as it fulfills a nice sentence after sitting miley jab hum tum.
so it goes like-'MILEY JAB HUM TUM PYAR TO HONA HI THA'


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chapter 9-page 8
chapter10-page 15
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Chapter one

The Girl With Nothing Special.


place:london.
there wasnt that much light in the hall except for the ramp.some fusion music was playing and models were walking the ramp.the theme was 'when west meets east' it was a nice show.the guests seemed enjoying it.but enjoyment had nothing to do with the girl standing back stage.

dressed in a light brown mini skirt,matching boots and white top, nupur was watching models walking her first ever individual show.she was looking at the screen and biting her finger nails in stress.megha removed nupurs hands from her mouth.but nupur put them on again.megha again removed the hand and she put them again.
megha: stop doing that.your nails are almost gone!
nupur looked at her nails and made a face.her nails were so beautiful and now they looked like storm struck.
megha made her face her.
megha: listen, you are about to enter the ramp.dont freak out.it will be fine. ok?
nupur sighed an ok in nervousness.megha patted her.
nupur walked the ramp with the show stopper.there was huge round of applause when she walked.she smiled and waved at the crowd.she felt so happy and out of the world.
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cheers!they wished as they gulped down the vodka.nupur and her friends had come to celebrate her success.john,his friend andrew,shelly,megha 'her fiance nitin had joined her.john kissed nupur on the forehead.they were all getting drunk except megha.nupur went for another round.

it was the pub the usually came in.so they almost knew everyone.peter was sitting in a corner as usual having his drinks.he is a master in drinking.no matter how much he drank, he could always have another round.nupur stood up on the table.
nupur: hey everyone!
everyone: hey!
nupur: this is the greatest day of my life.
she was totally drunk and couldnt stand still.
nupur: i am so happy today. i feel like the king of the world.
there was a wooooh among the crowd.
nupur: i feel invincible. i feel no one could beat me today.not even you pete!
everyone made a wooooooooo again. al the time megha was trying to make nupur get down but she couldnt.
peter:are you challenging me?
nupur: yes i am!
megha: stop it nupsi.get down right now!
nupur: chill megha.i got it.

she got down and went to the corner where peter was sitting as everyone made passage for her.both of them took a each glass and started drinking.and another.another.
after the tenth glass peter could drink no more.and nupur drunk as hell,lifted her hand upward as everyone roared her name.
peter felt disgusted.this was the first time ever he'd lost.nupur grinned at him.
nupur: better luck next time dude!
peter:dont you better luck me, you bi**h.
nupur:what did you call me?
peter: bi**h
nupur:you b****rd.how dare you abuse me? teri maa ki................
nupur wasnt good at hindi.but she used hindi swear words often.they gave her a fighting mood.peter got up and a nasty fight started.after ten minutes the guards lifted nupur and escorted out of the pub.nupur was still howling swear words.megha tried to calm her down. but she failed.
it was 3:00 at night so megha brought nupur home.nupur felt asleep in the car.megha took her to her room and placed her on the bed.there nupur slept like a child.unaware of the changes that was going to take part in her life.


thats it guys. hope you like it.dont forget to write your comments.






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Here goes chapter two. Enjoy.

Chapter two.

MR. NON DEPENDABLE

A ray of light was disturbing his sleep. So he turned to the other side. After a moment or two his phone started ringing. He searched for it in sleep and hang up. After a while the phone was again ringing. This time with utter disgust he accepted the call.

Mayank: hello!

Tina: Mr. Mayank Malhotra!!!!!!!!!!! Where the hell are you?

Mayank almost jumped out the bed and fell. And that did hurt.

Mayank: ouch!

Tina: hello! Whats going on? Mayank what happened? You were supposed to meet me at the beach and I'm waiting for a f***ing hour.

Mayank: Baby , I cant here you. Hello! Hello! Lagta hay signal problem. Baby you 're listening na? I'm coming in five minutes. Hello! Hello!

And he hangs up.

It was the usual Mayank Malhotra who's day started at 12:00. So if you are close to him, you ought to know that getting up at 7 am and walking with you at the beach was the last thing you could expect from him no matter who you are. But that was Tina. She would always force Mayank to do this type of romantic nonsense (in mayank's words.) and obviously will get loads of lies in reply.

Mayank got up from the floor and went to wash room. It was only after another half an hour he finally met Tina at the beach.

They'd come Goa for a reunion. His whole friend circle accompanied them. Well we would find it really funny to call a vacation reunion if all of us meet every single day to party. But that's how Mayank and his friends were. The good for nothing group.

When mayank met tina, he gave a haughty look while turning her back to him.

Mayank: Hi baby!

Mayank went round and faced her.

Mayank: oh! My god its gonna be a storm today!

Tina: Who told you that?

Mayank: Well, if the most beautiful lady in heaven and earth is frowning then its natural to assume that a storm is going to hit.

This brought a smile on tina's face.

Mayank: That's my girl, shining like the sun.

He gave her a beautiful bouquet of red roses. And told her he was late in finding the bouquet. Tina forgot that he kept her waiting for almost two hours. She flung herself into his shoulder.

That's what Mayank Malhotra was! A lier. But not that you cant detect if he is lying but Tina was dumber than you think. And that was one of the reasons Mayank liked her for. That she was dumb. That she could never detect while he was lying . And that she could never detect that he was actually keeping contacts with his ex- girl friends!

If he loved Tina? Mayank wasn't sure about that. He certainly liked her. She was hot. But if he loved her, well the concept of love was never clear to him. If loving meant to wake up for you before 10 am then he definitely didn't love him. And he didn't care about it. Love wasn't that much necessary. As long as Tina believes his lies, and he enjoyed the time with her, he was okay with it.

Alas! Mayank didn't know when he said that there would be storm hitting to get Tina, that he was so right. That the greatest storm that would change his life for eternity was about to strike hard.

That's it guys. Hope you enjoy it.

Leave your comments and criticism too.

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Chapter three


The long lost life

It was noon. And nupur was still sleeping. In a usual day hemant singh wouldn't be home at this time. But then again it wasn't one of those usual days. It was the most difficult day of his life. He'd been escaping from this day for 21 years now. And today there was no way to escape. He had to do it. With a heavy heart he went to nupur's room. Nupur was still asleep. Hemant went near her bed and placed his hand on her forehead and gently called her.

Hemant: nupur, nupur, get up beta. Its noon already.

Nupur: Please pops. Ten more minutes.

Hemant: I got to tell you something really important. Please get up and get fresh. Its urgent.

Hemant usually never pushed nupur, but today he did. Not for her, for him. He had the fear of losing the strength to tell her.

Nupur got up clumsily and went to freshen up. In about half an hour she met her father at his room.

Nupur: so , tell me. What was your important talk?

Hemant: sit.

With a heavy sigh he started to tell her the story of his life, their lives. The story which nupur didn't have access to. The story which made her a girl without a family.

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Hemant singh, son of the renowned industrialist Sushant singh, form delhi ,came to London to study in economics .he had the dream to take forward his fathers business. But he had done a mistake. He was in love. In love with Joane, the beautiful blond girl of his land lord. He would get lost in the curls of her hair. He would forget the world just by looking at her. Falling in love wasn't his mistake though. It was forgetting who he was and what his goal were. He failed the second year. His father became very angry and felt humiliated. So he decided to call him back home. This came as a deadly blow to hemant. As he knew, once he left London, he would never be able to meet joane again. This was something he couldn't bear.So he asked joane to marry him. He was dashing and came of a good and most importantly rich family. So there was little reason for joane to say "no"

He married her, not knowing if she loved him or not. This was his mistake. He was so lost in joane that he never asked her if she loved him or not. Joane did fall in love, but not with him, with the money he possessed. With the gift he bought her, and with the dream of a rich, care free life this marriage promised. But her dreams weren't meant to last long.

Hemant brought joane India with him. Sushant singh was a really conservative man. He wouldn't allow a British to be his daughter- in- law. But what could he do? She was his daughter-in-law. So he gave them permission to live there while hemant joined his fathers business. Hemant mother, lajwanti was a really kind woman. She'd welcomed joane with wide arms. But joane couldn't understand the warmth of her love. It felt like a cage to her.

Days passed on and joanes dreams were already shattered. His father-in-law was a strict man. So there was no scope for her to party at night or to come home, drunk.

And then came nupur and the cage around joane felt stronger as every one extra protective of the mother and the baby. Cant blame them. It was the first ever child to be born in the family.

When nupur was born, her grandfather was the happiest man on earth. He named her after his mother.

Nupur started to grow up and joane's patience started to diminish. She couldn't take it anymore. She became reluctant to live in India. She was determined to have her life back. So one day she went to hemant and told that she didn't want to live there anymore. Hemant was dumbfounded at her words. But she continued that if hemant wants, he can come with her otherwise she would leave with nupur. Nupur was only two years old then. Hemant didn't know what to do. But he knew one thing, he couldn't live without nupur. So he left his home, his family, his country to be with his daughter. Sushant was so hurt at this. And he stopped keeping contact with hemant. So did hemant. He felt too ashamed to talk to his father. He was so sorry for the mistakes he'd done. But he couldn't leave nupur. So their miserable life continued until the day they met the accident.

They'd gone to a party and joane became drunk. When they left for home hemant insisted that he should drive but joane didn't let him. She drove the car while she was drunk and took it into a wrong lane. A car had hit their car. Hemant became handicapped and joane was sentenced for five years.

Life had become tougher. It didn't feel life anymore. But hemant had to live, not for him, for nupur. And one day, six months after the accident, he received her divorce letter. Nupur had lost her mother completely. Since that day no one in their house talks about joane or hemants family. Nupur even didn't know that she actually had a family. And now she knew.

Hemant ended his story. Tears were rolling down from his eyes. Nupur suddenly looked like several years older.

She looked at her father for a few seconds and then went to her room.

There she cried, in agony. She couldn't believe her fate. She felt miserable for herself as well as her father. she had always considered her father to be guilty for their family to break up. But today she knew he tried to save it, but he failed. Nupur let all the tears flow in wish that they would wash away her pain.

It was evening when nupur came out and went to her fathers room and asked "why?"

Nupur: why now? You haven't told me these for so many years. Why tell me now?

Hemant didn't answer but went to the chest of drawers and brought an envelope.

It had many stamps on it and came by the air mail. The envelope had come from india.


here it goes guys. i know its a bit boring and you are waiting for mayur to meet. but it was vital for their story to begin. and mayur will meet really soon. enjoy and dont forget to comment.


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Chapter four


Destiny Calls

Nupur was sitting in her bed. The letter resting on her lap. Then megha entered the room.

Megha: Hey, Nupsi! Guess what Barun and I are going to ''''''.

Then she saw her lost in thoughts.

Megha: hey what happened?

Nupur gave her the letter.

Megha: What's this?

Megha started reading the letter.

Dear miss sing,

This is to inform you that'''''''''''''''..

Megha: (shouting) 200 million dollars! Oh my god! Nupsi we're rich! We're rich! I don't believe this!

Nupur: Me too. Besides I never knew that I had a family let alone it be rich and me to inherit this much money.

Megha: This is just great. You could go with us. Barun's (her fianc)company is sending him to Goa to check on a new restaurant they are willing to buy and he invited me to go too as he's talking a leave afterwards.

Nupur: Wow! Your first romantic vacation! This is great!

Megha: I know! And you could go with us. Then you'd leave for delhi.

Nupur: How do you know that I'm going?

Megha: You aren't? Gosh! Are you crazy? Nupsi its 200 millions! All you have to do is go there, claim the money and fulfill some conditions.

Nupur: oh! You noticed that there's" conditions applied"?

Megha: Come on! How tough could a dying mans last wishes be? Besides I'd be ready to climb Himalayas for 200 millions!

Nupur: But''.

Megha: Imagine Nupsi, you could have your own fashion house! The Nupur singh collections!

You'd be famous!

Nupur: You know what?

Megha: What?

Nupur: That you're actually right. I'm going with you and I'm gonna do whatever it takes to have that money.

megha: That's my girl! So tell john that you're going and I'll talk to Barun and arrange our tickets.

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Megha: This is so great! I love you Barun.

She hugged him while Nupur smiled. They'd just landed in Goa.

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Nupur and Megha were walking down the beach. Megha was looking irritated as she was waiting for Barun.

Nupur: Stop doing that. You're not the only one who's waiting for her boyfriend!

Megha: What do you mean?

Nupur: (in indicating) see the girl over there? She's waiting for her bf too.

Megha: How do you know?

Nupur: I saw her scolding someone over phone half an hour ago. I bet that's her bf.

A boy with some red roses joined the girl.

Nupur: see? That's for sure her bf. And look, he'll start telling lies about being late while looking for the flowers.

Megha: How do you know miss Einstein?

Nupur: I know. All boyfriends are the same! Just look at his expression. Even you can tell that he's lying.

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Nupur was going Mumbai as she had to join a fashion show there to have experience about Indian culture. And then she would go Delhi by train. Megha told her to take a flight but she wanted to hit the road as she wanted to see India.

Mayank and his friends were returning to Mumbai too. As he had to return Delhi to join his family business.

Nupur went to the bus terminal bought a ticket to Mumbai. She'd left her luggage to Megha and taken a backpack. Megha would drop her luggage while returning to London, visiting her in Delhi.

As she got up the bus, she bumped into a boy and her backpack fell on his foot.

Nupur: oh! I'm really sorry. Really sorry. Couldn't see you. Sorry ha!

Mayank had water in his eyes. The backpack had hit his feet hard. He saw the girl saying sorry and picking up the bag and moving away.

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Mayank was at the station. His train was about to leave. He always preferred to travel by train. He loved the scenes by the sides.

Nupur got up late as the show was late night. And she was late for her train. She quickly got ready and left for the station.

Nupur: Excuse me? Could you tell me the counter of the train to Delhi?

Man: you're late. It'll be leaving in a minute from platform two.

Nupur: oh no!

She started running.

Mayank was on board and standing by the door. The train had started when he saw a girl running.

Nupur: oh no! oh no!

(To Mayank )Stop the train. Stop the train.

Mayank: as you see mam, I'm not the driver. But I could give you a hand if you want.

Nupur: ( still running with the train) I don't believe it!( to Mayank) OK! OK!

She gave her hand and mayank pulled her in. they sat on the sit. Nupur was panting.

Mayank: Jala diya na?

Nupur: Ha?

Mayank: mera hat! Jala diya na!

Nupur: Oh! Hello! You caught my hand and not a stove Mr.

Mayank: agar itni hot larki ki hat pakrungi toh jal hi jayega na!

Nupur: oh! Slow there lover boy! I'm taken!

Mayank: ( pouting) oh! That's too bad. If I wasn't taken too, we could have a go!

Nupur looked her top to bottom.

Nupur: No way!

If this was the beginning, what could you expect from them?


Here it goes guys! tell me what you think.

Roshnee.

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Chapter five


You And Me


Mayank: Why? Whats wrong in me? I look great, I'm funny and rich too. Any girl would love to have me as her boyfriend.

Nupur: Hold on there Mr. Dream boy! You are ok looking and you seem to be rich too, but I'd never go with the guy who's started hitting on me when he knows me barely for a minute! Besides I prefer dependable kinda guy which you don't seem to be at all.

Mayank looked at her with anger then both of them started laughing. Mayank forwarded his hand for a shake. And Nupur shook it.

Mayank: I'm Mayank Malhotra.

Nupur: Nupur, Nupur singh.

Mayank: so you're a half breed right?

Nupur: how do you know?

She looked a bit shocked.

Mayank: its easy. Your accent is pure British. Cant have that without being half breed.

Nupur: Yes. My mom is British.

Mayank: First time in India?

Nupur: Yes. Hey are you coming from Goa? Cuz it seems that I've seen you somewhere before.

Mayank: yes. I was there with my friends.

Nupur: You were at the beach with some flowers trying to calm a girl right?

Mayank: You saw us?

Nupur: Yep. I was telling my friend that her boyfriend is not the only one who comes late and tells a lot of lies to cover up.

Mayank: hold on sec, how do you know I was lying?

Nupur: honestly, have no one told you ever that your face tells it when you're lying?

Mayank: No! I'm good at lying.

Nupur: Ha. Ha. You're not.

Mayank started to think what was wrong with him. Tina could never detect when he was lying nor did his friends. Was there anything wrong with his powers? Cuz if Tina starts detecting his lies, then life wouldn't be as fun as it had been.

Meanwhile nupur settled down. And took out some magazines from her bag.

Mayank saw them and was back from the transition.

Mayank: You don't look that fashionable to carry so many fashion magazines.

Nupur: oh! They are part of my work. I'm a fashion designer and I was hoping to get something about Indian fashion.

Mayank: wow! That's great! I'm a textile engineer. Some day we could actually work together.

Nupur nodded with a smile.

They train was going smoothly. And both of them were silent, just admiring the beauty of the views.

Nupur felt really happy to have come India. It felt so peaceful to her.

After a while mayank started again.

Mayank: hey can you talk in hindi?

Nupur: umm. A little but I can understand. Well, most of it. My vocabulary and pronunciation is really bad.

Mayank: You should try to talk in hindi. It can be very handy as this is your first time in India.

Nupur: I know but I don't have anyone to talk to me in hindi in London. Almost all of my friends are british.

Mayank: lucky you. You got a friend now who can teach you hindi.

Nupur: You're not my friend!

Mayank just winked at her and she laughed.

The rest of the morning they spent in trying to get nupur's hindi better.

It was noon when the tt came and nupur was in trouble.

Nupur: officer I'm really sorry but I couldn't get my ticket in hurry.

Tt: ha madam ji, sabhi bina ticket ki passenger yehi kehte hai.

Nupur: but officer''''''

Mayank: sir, ek minute, aap jara mere sath ayiye.

Nupur was looking when mayank said something to the officer and bought her ticket.

He came back waving the ticket.

Nupur: what did you tell him?

Mayank: hindi please.

Nupur: tumne tt se keya keh rahi thi?

Mayank: keh rahi thi nehi. Keh rahe the. That's for girls.

Nupur: whatever.

Mayank: I told him that you were my girlfriend ( nupur was totally shocked.) and that you have some mental disorder and you keep forgetting things.

Nupur: What? I don't believe this. He actually believed you? How could he? I can tell you were lying not hearing to the conversation and he actually bought your rubbish?

Mayank: see, I've not lost my charm.

Nupur: which is?

Mayank: lying!

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It was late noon when the train and finally stopped to a small station for loading food and fuels.

Nupur had got down from the train and roaming here and there.

After five minutes she came back exited.

Nupur: mayank I'm getting down here. I've seen a curt and I've never ridden one. So I'm going to ride on it.

Mayank: you're gone mad. Pagalo jaisi batein mat karo. Lo sandwich khao.

Nupur: I'm getting down. Are you coming?

Mayank: no thanks. Main pagal nehi hu.

Nupur took out her back pack and forwarded her hand with a smile in face.

Nupur: it was nice meeting you Mr.Mayank Malhotra. hope we meet again.

Mayank shook her hand.

Mayank: Same here.

Nupur: bye!

Mayank: bye!

Nupur got down when mayank set back in his sit eating his sandwich.


here it goes. enjoy.


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Chapter six


Strangers Yet Close

Nupur was sitting in the curt. She was really excited. The curt was just about to start when someone came running and said 'ruko'.

Mayank climbed up the curt and said' ab chaliye bhaiya'

Nupur was astonished.

Nupur: what are you doing here? Nupur asked with a curious smile.

Mayank: hindi plz.

Nupur: oh! Tum yaha kya kar rahi umm. Rahe ho?

Mayank: well maine bohot chocha. Tum yaha reh jaogi aur main ghar chala jaunga.fir jab news main ayega ke ' hot foreigner ke karan gao mein aag lag gayi aur pura gao jal gaya' tab main apne aap ko kya jawab dunga. Ke main ne ye sab rok ne ki koi koshish nehi ki.

Nupur's expressions was like 'cut the crap'

Mayank: umm, not good enough? Ok how's this one. Jab main ghar jaunga aur mere parents journey ke bare main puchenge tab main tumhare bare main bataunga. Aur wo log mujghe dantege kyun ke main ne ek akeli abla videshi larki ko raste main hi chordi.aur ye hamari sanskriti ke bilkul khilaf hain.

Nupur didn't get his final words but nevertheless her expression was still 'cut the crap'.

Mayank: Ok. Ok. I'm going home to join my father's business. I don't know when I'll get another chance to tour. So I took the chance of blaming it upon you.

Nupur couldn't help smiling as mayanks puppy face while confessing was really cute. And mayank laughed seeing that she was not retorting.

Both of them admired the sceneries. Sometimes mayank would get down and walk on the muddy road and nupur would do the same. They talked to passer bys.at the evening they reached a small village market. They found a dhaba and entered. Nupur ordered some curry while mayank ordered some roti and dal. As soon as nupur put the curry into her mouth, she vomited it back. The curry was a hot one and being a british, though half breed, she wasn't used to eating hot curries. Nupurs eyes were watering and mayanks were too. But because of laughter.

Nupur: why are you laughing? This is not funny.

Mayank: yes it is!

Lo roti khalo. He gave her his rotis. Nupur ate them and drank a lot of waters and eventually became normal. They found a small hotel and rented two rooms for the night. nupur couldn't sleep as the mosquitoes kept singing her songs and kissing.

Mayank and nupur visited the locality next day. They visited a fair and nupur loved it. They had loads of fun together. And by the time they had reached delhi, it was four days since they got off the train. The journey was not easy. At least not for nupur. But she enjoyed it totally. she'd eaten different Indian foods, worn Indian dresses, rocked with folk songs. The journey gave her the real look of india. But most importantly, the journey gave her a friend. Her very first Indian friend indeed. Mayank and nupur became very good friends. They understood each other. What they loved about this friendship was they could be just like their real self in front of each other. They didn't have to pretend any thing. And this would someday make their friendship a great one.

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Mayank dropped nupur home and went to his. Nupur wasn't quite sure about this part of her journey. To be honest, she was dreading this part. She never knew she's got a family. And now suddenly she was standing at their gate. How do you greet someone you never knew to exist given that they are your family?

Nupur was still standing at the gate while an old lady and two middle aged person came to greet her.

The lady hugged her immediately and started crying.

Nupur could understand that this lady was her grand ma. But she couldn't hug her back. She was just standing all awkward. The other two were her uncle Anand Singh and his wife Padma. they greeted her with full heart. All this time nupur couldn't say anything but nodded at their words.

They took her inside the house or I should say palace. It was a grand house. Just perfect for the owners of 200 million dollars. Their excitement astonished nupur. They were offering her this and that every other minute. But she kept refusing. She still wasn't comfortable with them. Her grand ma told her to sit beside her and she did. The old lady started to cry again.

Dadi: tum bilkul meri saasu ma jaisi dikhti ho. Hain na anand? Teri dadi jaisi hain na? baas tumhare ankhein tumhari ma ape gayi hain.

A frown crept on nupurs face. After knowing what actually happened between her parents she couldn't somehow tolerate her mothers mentioning. She'd started hating her. her dadi saw the frown and assumed that she was tired and told Padma to escort nupur to her room.

It was a big room. It had a terrace and huge windows. Nupur liked her room. She sat down on her king sized bed. She closed her eyes. All this was very new to her. And she was preparing her mind to accept the changes.

The next few days was a mixture of awkwardness and likings. Nupur felt awkward as she was being treated like a princess. Everything seemed to be resolving around her. But she loved the fact that she was loved this much. All her life she'd missed the feeling of being loved. But now when it was happening, she couldn't enjoy it fully. Her past kept haunting her. Here she was stuck in the middle of a painful past and an awkward yet nice present, unknown to the future that holds so much drastic changes for her.


here it goes guys. hope you're not bored reading. do share your thoughts about them with me.

roshnee

Edited by roshneerakhali - 14 years ago
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great ............
mayur starting itni interesting hai ...........
love story toh aur bhi mazedar hogi .............
nice part ...........
thanx for the pm .............
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Hey dear still reading but love the story jitna padha voh bohut sweettttttttttt hai love itt...!!
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