SS-- A Second Chance! - Page 6

Originally posted by: shivu_crazyfan

heyyyyyyyyyyy
congras for ur new ss...........
superb!!
loved it to core...very emotional.........
continue soon!!
and thanks for trhe pm!!!!

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy manjariii

yipeeeeeeeeee 1st 2 cmnt on ur new ss..
nwaz congooo
u knwww..i simply luvvvvvvved ur start..
it z sooooooo damn interstngggg...
in short terrifically intersngg
cont soooooooooon guyz

n thnxxxxxx 4 d pm..

Originally posted by: Mjhtgeet357

OMG lop ur FF...

awesome do write more :P

me lop ur story so much

😊

Originally posted by: chilluppp

ok

sorry againnnnnnnn

i guess mein apna signature change kar ln

but really is bar mein buhut late hn

ok

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee start dear

juist loved al the scenes from beginning till end

the way u potrayed everything

the wasy u have written it

just hats off yar

really rocking start

love the basic concept

obviously wanna read more

love the character sketch of all three

the dialogues everthing

do continue sooooooooooon

eagerly waiting for it

Originally posted by: ria_lovesajan

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heyyyyyyyy manjari!!!!!🤗🤗

first of all im really veryyyyy sorrryyyyy for commenting soooooo late!!!!!! u kno d reason na! i came back 2home 2day morning....

n btw tum kitna ff likhogi yaar??????? u're never tired?????🤔🤔

well wo teri pbm hai, mujhe to tere ffs padhne mein bahut maza aata hai!!!!!!😉😉

n coming 2ur SS on SAJAN, it ws A LOVELY IDEA!!!!!👏👏👏👏

i simply loved it!!!!! tere ffs se bilkul alag hai....n sabse achhi baat to ye hai ki isme mayur nahi hain!!!!!

look m dancing!!!😆

anyways, starting padhkar hi maloom ho gaya tha ki samrat rude aur arrogant hoga, seriously!!!!

n gunjan is mother 2 11years old aditya, lovely!!!! hes such n obedient n loving son!!!!

n gunjan is also very caring mother.........loved her convo with aditya!!😳😳

n omg adi refers 2samrat as FREAK?????😲😲😲

tht shocked me!!! 11saal ki umar mein to i didnt evn knew tht any word like freak exists!!😆

nyways jokes apart, gunjan-aditya scene ws very beautifully written!!! keep it up!!👍🏼

n coming 2samrat, i ws literally hurt 2see him in such a condition!😒

aaaaawwwwwwww hes living such a painful life!!!

nw m really very curious 2know ki aakhir aisi kaunsi pbm thi jiski vajah se sajan alag ho gaye??????

this ss is very interesting......n as usual tum achha hi likhogi....😉😉

nyways do cont.soooooon.......n sorry, isse bada comment nahi likh paungi...bt next updt se u'll get long ones!!!😉

loveeeeeeeeee uuuuuu!!!!!!!!🤗🤗